My application- Pieworship

[Pieworship 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Pieworship

-How old are you?:13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I love roleplaying and class systems not unlike yours. They have been my favorite, and you do a good job of having RP for minecraft, for I have been viewing your information and Forums. Also, I have been a wandering soul for a week, and love the way everything is designed

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I could be on about an hour a day, but on weekends, two hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?:In total, I have had the game for a year.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:I play a large variaty of games in roleplaying, and I have programmed a role-playing-game.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I think it will be a server I stay on, and will enjoy because of the great system.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have only played on my friend’s servers, and I left because it did not have all the great stuff your server has installed, such as classes and skills.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:I have read all of it, and think the experience you will offer will be worth while because of the in-depth laws you have. They are very reasonable, and I like your flexability.

-Name the 4 races on this server.Dwarf, Orc, Elf, and human. (I have read lord of the rings)

-How did you hear about us?:My friend said you’re server was amazing and I checked it out.I totally agrre!

Did you vote?:yuppers!

-What was your favourite Law?:NO GRIEFING!!! I really despise griefers.

-What was your least favourite Law?:That we have to use the skin of our race. but at the same time, I think it would help with the feel.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?pieworship

In-Character:

-Character Name:Telperien

-What is your Race?:Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:Pieworship

-Biography:One quiet day,a boy named Telperien was born. Up until age three, he had an uneventful life, led by work. However, even as a small child, he had been trained by his father eith a sword. At an age so young, he had much experiance with fighting. But still, not even his father could protect himself from the two orcs that killed him and his wife.Telperien was found by the orcs, and captured, destined for their city. On the way however, he fell from the orc's arms and into the brush. He was then found by human travellers, and raised under them. They furthered his skill with the sword, and introduced him to magic. At age thirteen, Telperien decided he wanted to live his own life, and travelled away. You can always find him practicing with spells or swordplay to this day. He dreams of becoming a master of both. -Character Age:13

-Character Appearance:green hair, yellow gauntlets, and leather clothing. He has a quiver and a white cape.

-Character Personality:Gentle but can be very aggresive

-Your ambitions:To take to magic more, and become an excellent warrior.

-Can your character read or write?:Yes, but not as well as others.

-Can your character mine?:Decently

-Are you a capable builder? To an extent

-Can you wield a sword?:Very well

-Enjoy Farming?:No

-Does your character have any special skills?:He is a great fighter.

-A screenshot of your skin:I don’t know how, so… I made a skin that looks like the character I described

-Other Information:Telperien was taught how to farm, and to build and mine. However, The paths he has chosen are that of the warrior and the path of magic

[Haldon 72]

Denied

Points to imporve:

- You didn't explain what you think roleplaying is.

- Please expand more on your character in the biography and on his personality. At the moment he seems rather superficial.

- The 'my parent's were killed by orcs' idea is rather overused. People misunderstand orcs, they aren't bad characters. If you want to keep it as that though be my guest, but please expand more on what happened.

- No one word answers please. Expand on those last few questions.