[Denied]Talidon's Updated Application

[Talidon 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Talidon

-How old are you?:16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: EST, United States

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes I do, I generally make very few errors when it comes to typing, especially when I am doing something that I take seriously. (Roleplaying)

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a Junior in high school, I live in Washington DC, and I've been roleplaying on a different Minecraft server for roughly a year. I am big into gaming, and I usually play on my 360, but I am still very much interested in role-play.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Around 4 hours a weekday, and even longer on weekends. 30 hours a week tops.

-How long have you played Minecraft?:I've been playing for a little longer than a year.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: Roleplaying is an activity that requires you to invent an unique character, who is generally set in a different time period. With this character, you interact with others who have done the same, to create a realistic life for your character, and those around you.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect this server to be full of rich RP, and to run smoothly to accommodate the needs of it's players. I also expect it to be very lively, and organized.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on a server called "Tales of Mel-Lenxia", which is a role-play server of high caliber. I simply got bored of the repetitive role-play that server offered. I've been looking for something new.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have.

-Name the 4 races on this server:Humans, Elves, Dwarves, and Orks.

-How did you hear about us?: A friend of mine from another server told me about it.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Talidon

In-Character:

-Character Name: Talidon

-What is your Race?:Human

-Biography:Talidon Denari was born in the Royal Kingdom of Oren, to his mother Elizabeth, and father Nicholas. He is the youngest of his brothers, Coren and Lucien. He was born into a poor mining family, who had no choice but to ignore his education, and practically force him to work in the mines with his brothers. At the age of 19, he began hearing stories of faraway lands, and the great adventures of men who had travelled into the wilderness. During the funeral of his grandfather, he inherited his clothe of high class, which Talidon enjoyed wearing, as he saw it as what he might become in the future. Finally, at the age of 20, armed only with his bow and meager food rations, he abandoned his family, and his life as a miner, and set out into the wilderness.

-Character Age: 21

-Character Appearance: Rough looks, due to extended time in mines, and a strong upper body. He has unkept almost black hair, and unsettling sky blue eyes. He is roughly 6 feet tall, with broad shoulders. He wears his grandfathers high class robes, to give others the impression that he is more important, or richer than he actually is. He finds that with that presumption, more people will like him.

-Character Personality: He is adventurous, and witty, though almost to a fault. He is known to not consider the consequences of his actions before taking on tasks. While he often finds himself in trouble, though at the same time, once he finds the determination to carry out a task, there is little that can stop him.

-Your ambitions: My goal on this server is to be a constant source of creative role-play. I do not plan to "settle down" as it where, but instead to roam the lands of Aegis, to experience everything I can, and become well known amongst the people. .

-Can your character read or write?: He is able to read, due to the requirements of mining in his hometown, but is unable to write.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, he has spent many many years of life watching his brothers and relatives mine, and even more actually doing so.

-Are you a capable builder?: No, the only architecture he is familiar with are the simple wooden houses built near the mountains of his hometown..

-Can you wield a sword?: He is not professional, but his skill with a pickaxe has transferred nicely to swords.

-Enjoy Farming?: Talidon has never felt any urge to learn to farm, or cultivate land, but is quite familiar in the art of doing so, as he watched family friends working in the fields.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Not particularly, though through determination, he is considered by his friends to be unstoppable. Also, he has an unusually strong swing, from genetics, and years in the mines.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information:

[Repiteo 173]

Your Application Has Been:

DENIED

Lack of effort, expand the app a bit

Dont give one-word answers

Common reasons for denial:

Role Play:

• 
  
• Missing Biography
  
• Short Biography
  
• Insufficient Information in OOC
  
• Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play
  
• Insufficient Knowledge upon World
  
• Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore
  
• Powergaming and/or Metagaming
  

Form:

• 
  
• Bad Spelling/Grammar
  
• Missing Areas
  
• Breaking Rules
  

Skin:

• 
  
• Missing Skin
  
• Skin Doesn't Fit Character
  
• Incorrect Character Description
  
• Incorrect Skin Format
  

Feel free to send me a private message if you have any questions or concerns!

[Haldon 72]

DELETED

[Repiteo 173]

trololololo

[Haldon 72]

Sorry Repiteo, I'll let you handle this one.