[Denied]My Better application

[coperh 0]

-Minecraft Account Name: coperh

-How old are you?: 11

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +0

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:No not really.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a bit shy. I'm good enough at maths.

I cant save money.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 8-20 hours

-How long have you played Minecraft?: 6 months

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: It is when people play characters to make a story.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:Wars agents races and stuff.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Metroidcraft cause its down.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Humans, orks, elves and dwarfs

-How did you hear about us?: cosmic herobrine said to go to this server

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: coperh

In-Character: coperh

-Character Name: coperh

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Biography: He was born in the year 1896. He lived in a wooden house. He went too school at The Miner School of Crafting. When he was 11 he went became a processional archer. He then joined a mining company. And now he's applying for a server.

-Character Age:32

-Character Appearance: He has brown hair . He has a black t-shirt with I smiley face on it.

-Character Personality: He like building and he like working with red stone. he really good at farming and mining. He love finding diamonds.He gets easily entertained.

-Your ambitions: don't know what that means

-Can your character read or write?: yes

-Can your character mine?: yes

-Are you a capable builder?: Some people say he is.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes he's good enough

-Enjoy Farming?: He likes planting but not watching them

-Does your character have any special skills?: He has good accusatory with bows

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: Hope its better than the other one.

[coperh 0]

WHY you denier it

[coperh 0]

Denied

Why You denie it

[ΚΨΙΞ 710]

It it way too short lacks effort, you dont know the roleplaying question.

and your Bio is your character Bio, not your Real Bio.

Please wait 48hours before re-applying

[coperh 0]

It it way too short lacks effort, you dont know the roleplaying question.

and your Bio is your character Bio, not your Real Bio.

Please wait 48hours before re-applying

what's a bio

[ΚΨΙΞ 710]

Biography is Your character so Example, When Jack was a young boy he grew up in a Farm... etc

[coperh 0]

what's a bio

can i edit it instead of writing it out again

:?:

[coperh 0]

Biography is Your character so Example, When Jack was a young boy he grew up in a Farm... etc

I edited it. can you look at it again. please

[Repiteo 173]

Your Application Has Been:

DENIED

It just lacks effort and length. Really put some time into this

Common reasons for denial:

Role Play:

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• Missing Biography
  
• Short Biography
  
• Insufficient Information in OOC
  
• Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play
  
• Insufficient Knowledge upon World
  
• Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore
  
• Powergaming and/or Metagaming
  

Form:

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• Bad Spelling/Grammar
  
• Missing Areas
  
• Breaking Rules
  

Skin:

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• Missing Skin
  
• Skin Doesn't Fit Character
  
• Incorrect Character Description
  
• Incorrect Skin Format
  

Feel free to send me a private message if you have any questions or concerns!