Sir Wiggledog's Thrird Application

[Sir Wiggledog 0]

(My first two applications were ignored)

-Minecraft Account Name:

wiggledog

-How old are you?:

13 years Old

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

EST, Australia

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, I can speak proper english and have great punctuation/grammar.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I love to play many FPS games, but mostly play Minecraft. I don't have a job but go to school and play Minecraft on the computers there.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

School days, Weekends, probably about 5-7 hours a week.

-How long have you played Minecraft?:

I played Minecraft since 1.2( Since Nether update).

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:

Roleplay is immersing into another characters life; basically playing out someone else that you created.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect it to be just like the trailer. I have watched my friends play on it, and have tried to get on with an application many times

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I've played on my friend's servers, and even made my own. I've -Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, I have completely read and understand them.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

Human, Elf, Orc, Dwarf. Not including Ascended. (also Undead.)

-How did you hear about us?:

Friends, ads, youtube commercial, best server sites and looking through forums.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

bhegyman (Sir Wiggledog)

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Sir Wiggledog

-What is your Race?:

Human

-Biography:

I was born to a pack of wolves. I trained and trained until I finally was ready to take on the other tribes. I took money and gold off others and gave it to those in need. I have done alot of quests, but something evil was freaking the village people out. It was... the undead.

I threw my fists at the creature and managed to defeat it. Ever since then I have been a regular farmer. The name Sir Wiggledog has faded. I wasn't known, and was never spoke about again.

5 years later, bandits came to our village and tried to steal my crops. I managed to show them fear at its best, and ended up losing sadly.

-Character Age:

30

-Character Appearance:

Big shoulders, a large top farm hat, and the worst teeth ever. EVER!!!

-Character Personality:

A tough fighter who loves to pick a fight with intruders.

-Your ambitions:

To help others out, and seek vengeance.

-Can your character read or write?:

Yes, the witch doctor taught him.

-Can your character mine?:

Yes, if my character wasn't a farmer, he'd be a miner.

-Are you a capable builder?:

Yes.

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes.

-Enjoy Farming?:

Yes, it's his job.

-Does your character have any special skills?:

He has fists that wield fireballs. He can shoot only when he gets mad

-A screenshot of your skin:

Yes, this is him. He is a farmer.

-Other Information:

Nothing really else to share about him. PS: I voted!!!

[Haldon 72]

Denied

Points to improve on:

- Be careful about how you phrase some of the things in your biography. It sounded like the wolves were your parents.

- Please expand more on your character in the biography, appearance and personality. I want to know more about his life.

- Please expand more on those last few questions, and remember to relate his skills to the events he has been though in his life. .E.g. You said that he was taught to read by a witch doctor, But there was nothing about the witch doctor in your biography.

- No one word answers please.

- Please change your skin. It isn't very RP-ish. You can find some premade skins for our server here ->http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?cat=69