Submission.

[yayfunfunfun__6 4]

-Minecraft Account Name:

yayfunfunfun_6

-How old are you?:

14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

GMT +0 / England

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes! I can type fast, and hardly make mistakes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

1: Im nice and kind.

2: I like to help other players out.

3: I like to form teams and play online.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Over 6 hours daily.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

Since minecraft Beta: 1.5.1

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

Roleplaying is basicly acting as a different character in a game. Roleplay is set in a different world or timezone completely different from reality. This is my first roleplay server as i havent really been into them to much, but i want to see what there like to i thought your server would be a great. I have played roleplay games like WoW.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think this will be a realy good experience, From what ive heard it will be really imerced into the roleplay aspect.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Ive played on a few servers, im also a very good admin on one.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

yes i have read the rules/lore and i totaly agree with it! You havent left any of the detail out i think it was well planed.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Human, Elf, Orc, Dawrve

-How did you hear about us?:

My friend.

-Did you vote?:

Yes on all 3.

-What was your favourite Law?:

All of them, i as totally agree with them all.

-What was your least favourite Law?:

None! they are all good.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

yayfunfunfun_6

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Bevan (Youthful warrior)

-What is your Race?:

Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

-Biography:

I was born into a rich culture, Of the elf's it was great i had friends, untill the day i was was 12 i went out with my friends and my mother and farther came with us,

it was getting dark and we where to far from home to we made a camp and we fell asleep, i woke to hear the loud screaming of my friends and family,

all i saw was a dark hooded guy with a sharp longsword he watched me as he sliced my mother in half, i was so angry that i went and grabbed a sharp stick and charged at the man,

but before i got to him he pushed me away he was so powerful he then said to me "Come back when your ready" then started to walk off laughing.

i was living on the streets till the age of 14 a mystirous man walked up to me and said "FOOL ARE YOU REALLY GOING TO SIT THERE AND DO NOTHING WITH YOUR LIFE" then i started crying,

and said i have nothing no friends of family the man was Glaring at me and said "follow me il will teach you the way of the sword" so i followed him in was a long journy as i was,

as we walked far and wide thoughout other kingdoms it toke us 1 month to finally get to his dojo it was full of beutifill art and gold,

i looked over the big hill and there it was the elf kingdom, the man called me so i ran towards him and he said tommorow we train and i got so excited he told me to shut up,

then he toke me to his house he told me he had a spare room and told me i could stay untill i was ready to leave so i accepted his offer, i trained with him till i was 20.

i had a friend named takina our sensai told us we where shall be great warriors someday then told us that there is no more to teach us, so he told us to leave i wanted to stay but we where both kicked out,

he told me i will thank him for it one day but before we left he gave me his armour it was amazing it was made out of iron and had gold trimmings.

so at that time me and my friend went to work for the elven king.

-Character Age:

20

-Character Appearance:

wheres iron armour with gold trimming.

-Character Personality:

I am a loyal friend and warrior, i care for my friends. Im very curious and some to meet new people.

-Your ambitions:

to form a team and be a lord of my own kingdom.

-Can your character read or write?:

Extremly well.

-Can your character mine?:

Only when he needs resources.

-Are you a capable builder?

Yes.

-Can you wield a sword?:

Extremly good.

-Enjoy Farming?:

Only when he needs to.

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

long sight, Expert swordsmen

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://i1224.photobucket.com/albums/ee365/yayfunfunfun_6/joebattle.png

(Best i could get of my skin.)

-Other Information:

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography and also an indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... Also you need to explain your character traits in terms of your character, why can he mine? why can he fight or not etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detail into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore and restriction. Then once you finish reworking repost it after the specified time (48 hours or so), if you are looking for inspiration look at some other apps or the examples pinned.