[Denied]Ztb_00 Application

[ztb_00 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Ztb_00

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Canada

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I love to play hockey and football. On my spare time I play video games such as BF3, Minecraft, League Of Legends, and much more.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: maybe 2 hours a day

-How long have you played minecraft?: a year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I've played on two minecraft RP servers. I also have played Runescape, WoW, Lotro, and soon SWTOR

I have played RP for about two years. RP is a strict type of game. You must stay in character and stick to your role.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it will be amazing and more down to earth than the others!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on Stronghold Online and I left because the owner was picking on my friend. So we both quit.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes i have both of them

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, Dwarf, Orc, Elf

-How did you hear about us?: Minestatus

-Did you vote?: For all 3

-What was your favourite Law?: no griefing ( I hate people who just join the game to Grief :@ )

-What was your least favourite Law?: how you have to stay in character... Im not always good at that, But ill try my best!

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Ztb_00

In-Character:

-Character Name: yor-ik

-What is your Race?: Orc

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Ztb_00

-Biography: My parents grew up as Orc in a tribe named "Argghhh". Children were not aloud but my parents couldn't obey that rule. They already had a one month old baby.. and soon "it" would be slaughtered. My parents could not let that happen. So they ran. They were followed and slain when I was at the age of eight. I slipped past the murderers and ran. They quickly saw me. So they chased but I was saved by a group of Orcs. These Orcs trained me very well. I became a talented killer and a good farmer. When our men at war I would mine, supply food, and repair the walls. Mean while I was still not a citizen of this land. During the war I saw how much these fellow Orcs fought for their team. I wanted to be apart of all of it. But I still wasn't ready. So I farmed for a year and fed all my fellow mates. Our leader saw this and said maybe, but he still wasn't sure. So I went to go hunting. I brought back two large deer. He liked this but still wasn't sure. So he told me to go mining. So I did. When I was in the mines I found plenty of diamonds. I got so happy i knew I was going to get accepted. But little did I know what lay in front of me. Mining like a normal orc, I mined trough some cobble very quick. I was very care-less and did not recognize the mossy cobblestone. sssss..... CREEPERS!!!

I pulled out my diamond sword as fast as I could. I slashed to the right and left. I finally killed that nasty beast! Then I looked up. Five more had come to join the party! I grabbed a torch and placed it on the ground. I ran out of the room equipping my bow and arrow. I aimed toward the group of creepers and shot once,than twice, than three times. Only two more left, I got this!! I grabbed my sword and charged. SLASH!! took out the first! sssssss.... BOOOOOM!!

I hit the ground with a loud thud. I looked around everything was so dark. I need to get that torch!! I attempted to get onto my feet, but one leg seemed to be broken. I dragged myself across the room to the torch. I knew soon enough that a couple of creepers will spawn and be ready to blow the living pieces out of me. I grabbed the torch and placed it on top of the spawner. I did it! I sealed off the room and fell into a deep sleep... The next day my leg was remarkably well. I stood up and could walk, but could not manage to run. I cut the heads off of the creepers corpses for proof of my great success. A day past and I finally found my way out of the large,dangerous mine. As soon as I got out I headed to the castle. I showed our leader the heads of the creepers and he was astonished. He also liked the couple of diamonds I had mined. I think i'm ready for my citizenship now!

-Character Age: 23

-Character Appearance: Strong and tall

-Character Personality: Quick to anger

-Your ambitions: to become liked by my team mates and frightened by others!

-Can your character read or write?: No, in Argghh no one was able to write except high members in the ladder

-Can your character mine?: yes, when I was in Argghh they would send waves of children into the mines hoping they would come back, and not be killed. Luckily that was not my case.

-Are you a capable builder? yes, When I was in Argghh (I know right this again!!) Children technically were the adults. We had to build for ourselves, hunt for our food (we would only get a portion the rest would go to the members of Argghh)

-Can you wield a sword?: Obviously!!! In Argghh every man was able to wield a sword by the age of four.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yep, in Argghh that's all i did! (also in reality in Stronghold Online, I was a farmer and enjoyed it!)

-Does your character have any special skills?:] I like to kill but at the same time i can cool it down and make some nice fresh bread for my fellow mates :)

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/uploads/monthly_11_2011/post-30490-0-74247800-1320879842_thumb.png

-Other Information:I love Minecraft!!

[Blawharag 277]

Please do not repost your application within 48 hours. Take this time to expand upon your character, proof-read your application, read up on server lore and rules and fix the problems with your app.

#1 Please answer the "What you know of Roleplay" by including a definition of what Roleplay is so we know you have the right idea

#2 Bio is too short, expand upon it and add details

#3 Give RP reasons for why you character has the traits they have (such as why he can build, mine ect.) Be sure to give a thorough description as to why you have each trait, either in the biography or in the question itself.

[ztb_00 0]

Bump - edited app

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [X]

Breaking Rules [X]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [X]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Your application is improved, but not so good. Your name cannot be called Ztb_00 in game. Do you expect the orcs to say "Ug, Zee Tee Bee UnderScore Oh Oh"?

For this, you get a /facepalm.

And your skin isn't good. You expect yourself to be an orc/zombie?

O.o

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

[ztb_00 0]

edited... plz accept