TwebDude's (Ghar Ragnarok) Application

[Ghar 1]

Out-of-Character: TwebDude (Well When I'm talking out of character I use {})

Minecraft Account Name: TwebDude

How old are you: 13

Time-Zone: Midwest zone, USA

English Grammar: Yes (Not to just toot my horn but in advanced english, XD)

Description: Well I am a skin maker, also skin judge on Planet Minecraft. I play

many sports. I'm a student in many advanced classes and programs. I love role-

play anything, I also play runescape, little RP battle games using very

expensive game pieces, and many more like skyrim, etc. etc. I just can't get

enough of history especially barbarian/medieval/countries/power inside

government/roman era. I have fraps and I'm hoping to record a lot. If you would

like to know more about me, just ask.

How much time: Around 20 hours a week, no joke. I play around 3/4 hours monday-

thursday, then 6ish hours on saturday and you get it right?

How long have you played minecraft?: Since 1.7

How long have you've been doing roleplaying? What do you know?: Basically the

first thing I knew was roleplaying, when I was younger I pretended I was a

Viking and made a whole plot. I would run and leap and do flips hacking through

English soldiers on my parent's bed. I role-play on all games possible even CoD!

I get books at the library about RPG.

What Do I expect this server will be like: Well first impressions do matter, A

LOT, Your website and every way you do your whitelisting seemed hugely

Professional, and legit and going through your rules, wiki, forums, and other parts seemed it was my kind of place. The architecture looks amazing from youtube and the pictures.

What other servers have I been to?: Well a just normal no pvp build server, but things got boring so I went to servers with factions, but people kept betraying me and griefing. I then went to buxville but no one would help me. I thought “Hey what about RPing on minecraft?” I found a LOTR server but it got eventually boring from limitations. In one of my skin contests a contestant had a Lord of the Craft sig. I checked it out and I found myself here.

The rules I’ve easily agreed to them it’s just that the skin I have really fits my character. The lore was kind of a story to help you get what has happened in the server.

4 races: Orc, Dwarf, Human, Elf, (There are sub-races)

How did I hear about server?: I saw someone’s sig. on Planet minecraft (PMC)

Did I vote?: I clicked all three I vaguely use minestatus, but I would post your server on PMC for more popularity.

What was my favorite law?: If this counts, the order of ownership in the races like the king and high council.

What is Lord of Craft forum name?: Ghar

In-Character:

Character name: Ghar Ragnarok

What is your race?: Mountain Dwarf if it’s part of north, if not then just Dwarf

LOTC Lord of the Craft account name: Ghar

Biography: Ghar Ragnarok was the son of a Northern village chieftain. Ghar always wanted to hunt the fiercest beasts he could find, and also fell in love with gladiator fights, he secretly signs up at a local mercenary camp to make a living. His village was known for their mastery in the art of mining. When Ghar’s father find’s out that his son will not follow his footsteps, he shuns Ghar from the village. The only way Ghar might be re-accepted into his village is if he devotes his life to mining. Enraged to be shunned, Ghar seeks to start an entire new life. He wishes to get a house that can hold all of the trophies he acquires and armor. After many fights at the local camp people start wondering if will become a mercenary. Ghar overhears the bartender talk about him, Ghar becomes a hired axe. Ghar’s strength and stamina helps him greatly, but his biggest flaws are against magic, speed and his curiosity. Magic gets the best of him, tricking, confusing him, the way to defeat Ghar would be to us magic against him. If you use just your wits and strength, the odds will not be in your favor unless you use the finest weapons, and speed. Ghar desires huge, blunt weapons. Ghar has many secrets, try to find them out. He always wanted to become a leader of an army or go into politics

Character Age: 31

Character appearance: He has many bruises and scars from barfights and wager matches at the local camps. He wears viking/barbaric armor

Character’s Personality: He is curious, partially aggressive, He is cautious to anyone and everyone. He does have some soft spots but you will have to find them out in game.

Ambitions: Become a Champion of the Arena. Become a successful mercenary. Get magnificent beast head mounted on his wall. Become a member of the High council or leader of the dwarven army. Own a war camp or town

Capable builder?: Well I am a pretty good builder but only for building medieval buildings

Can you wield a sword?: Only huge, long swords but Ghar prefers axes and hammers.

Enjoy farming?: He figures out later that farming calms him down and makes him more civilized in town, but outside of society he is still as savage

Special Skills: Wolf mastery, Axes and swords, armor, blacksmithing

Screenshot: The one with the helmet I think fits with my RP character great, but if I can't use it then I'll use one from the server's skin list (The one with the mohawk)

Other Information: I can help you guys with making videos of the server.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

Power/Metagaming [X]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Well, the biography is great. Until you mentioned magic. Currently, magic is only available to Ascended and Undead. Role Play magic is also available, but it has no effect to your character whatsoever.

Remove the magic part, and add some other weakness!

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

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