[Denied]WAGGY1999 second app

[waggy1999 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:WAGGY1999

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: England

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:A tall person who is tolerant on games and likes to go out

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:20 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?:7 months

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Roleplaying is where you make an "Avatar" of your own creation and traits you are in a fantasy/made up world with other playes/avatars and u must keep in character at all times

-What do you expect this server will be like?:Awesome lots of plugins and good staff

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:citycraft survival

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes

-Name the 4 races on this server.Orc Elf Dwarf Human not including subraces

-How did you hear about us?:Alot of videos and research

-Did you vote?:yes all 3

-What was your favourite Law?:Must keep in character

-What was your least favourite Law?:must have a forum account (i found away around it)

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?waggy1999

In-Character:

-Character Name:Ohiraden

-What is your Race?: Orc

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:waggy1999

-Biography:Ohiraden was a wealthy young orc and had a great childhood his dad was a scholar and a shaman and his mother was a healer his dad use to teach him many magic skills and a short brief tutorial on swordsmanship. he lived lived in a multicultural town in the north called Istanfell .In school he had no friends accept a young intelligent elf called Creasarnor who he traveled around with for along time they bonded and told eatchother all their secrets but one day that would all change the undead uprising took place and Istanfell was in the middle of the the undead fort and the human capital. the town was a great place for an undead outpost to attack Oren they came swiftly and brutally without warning in a huge horde Ohiraden father took to the streets to defend the town or etleast his son whilst hiding in his house his mother was shot by a skeleton in the eye Ohiraden was devestated by the inhuman acts which took place in his hometown he had to see both of his parents be killed infront of him. after the battle settled Ohiraden went outside to find Cresarnor looking for his parents in the silent lonely streets they had a conversation about what they were gonna do eventualy they decided to team up again the first destinination was the cloud temple of Aegis were they will find directions to Krugmar the orc war nation then malinor the elven kingdom to seek compensation from both races and so there story begins at the cloud temple of aegis were there story will unfold.

-Character Age:20

-Character Appearance:Shaman very organized but looks intimidating

-Character Personality:Ohiraden is a very cunning orc who uses brains not brawn to overcome his challenges he is very social and passive for an orc

-Your ambitions:To unite the four races of Aegis against the bigger threat of the undead horde

-Can your character read or write?:Yes he was taught by his father who was a scholar/shaman who taught alot of children

-Can your character mine?:no he has had no experience at all

-Are you a capable builder?No he was never good at architecture

-Can you wield a sword?:Yes his father taught him as a child to use magic and a short training on how to use a sword

-Enjoy Farming?:not very much but he can as a last resort

-Does your character have any special skills?:]Spells which his dad taught him

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us...mupload&newlp=1

-Other Information:Ohiraden has a disorder were he can only see blocks

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

As stated with your friend's application. Input actual cities and villages from the world. Istanfell doesn't exist in this world, and nor does his mother have Magic.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography and also an indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... Also you need to explain your character traits in terms of your character, why can he mine? why can he fight or not etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detail into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore and restriction. Then once you finish reworking repost it after the specified time (48 hours or so), if you are looking for inspiration look at some other apps or the examples pinned.

[Taiga 764]

One word, Slayer.

Ninja'd

[waggy1999 0]

I give up this is a joke all i do is read up and try to make it different by making a town and somets wrong with that

[waggy1999 0]

ill try again after i complete skyrim