Arien's Application

[Arien 3]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: OHawkzo

-How old are you? 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Time Zone/Us

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I know English very wel but I am human and I still make mistakes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a 13 year old kid who is mature for his age. I will not be immature like other 13 year olds. I love video games and I fell in love into Minecraft. My favorite type of games are RP games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Well about 2-4 hours a day on weekdays and on weekends 4-6 hours a day so a minimum of 18 hours a week and a maximum of 32 hours a week.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing minecraft for 4 months now. I will not ask dumb questions about minecraft because I am an experienced player.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I know that roleplaying is an amazing way to play a game. You basically have to become a character and you act and think like that character. You only know and say what the character knows. The importance of staying in character is great. If you are the in character the roleplay is ruined and it is not true roleplay. I have been roleplaying the whole time I have been playing minecraft. I have roleplayed on other servers but they are not true roleplay because in most of them you are not acting as a different character. I love roleplay and hope to roleplay more in this game

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be a rich roleplay server that is roleplay and only roleplay. I know that my character will experience fun times and scary time. I will witness awesome events and meet even cooler people.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played Herocraft and ImDiety but I left them because they were not true roleplay.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I have read and understood the rules and I read the lore (which needs to be published in a book.

-Name the 4 races on this server. I love this question. Dwarf,Human,Elf, and Orc.

-How did you hear about us?: I heard about you from my friend Ikeyman232.

-Did you vote?: Yes.

-What was your favourite Law?: My favorite law was No Greifing

-What was your least favourite Law?: None they were all great!

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Arien

In-Character:

-Character Name: Arien

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Uhh wasnt that asked up there^^^^ But whatever. Arien. (and that's not in character)

-Biography: Arien was born in a palace. His Dad was the king of their kingdom. Arien was heir to the throne. He lived in the palace happily playing joyfully without a care in the world. But one day another kingdom attacked Arien's kingdom. They made their way to the palace. Arien's father made Arien flee. Arien was given a sword and some money. His father told him to go to the temple in the south and wait until someone came and found him. But Arien wandered south and soon found himself lost. He started to panic and to make the situation worse, he was met by a group of thieves. He took out his sword. He had never used a sword before and didn't even know how to swing it. One of the thieves charged at him charged at him. Before the thief could even reach Arien, an arrow flew through the night sky and met the thieves head. Arien looked around and saw nobody. Then a man appeared behind one of the thieved and killed him before he could make a sound. Arien saw three men appear and run towards the 6 thieves. Every thief fell with a thud. Arien stood awe. He asked the men who had saved them who they were. They responded "We are Saviors we roam the lands looking for evil men who pray on the innocent." Arien was astonished, they were so brave and majestic. One of the men eyed Arien. He said "You have a sword right?" "Yes" Arien responded. "Ok go over there by that pond and kill that monster with the sword your carrying," He said. Arien was surprised. He walked cautiously over to the monster. It charged at him. He lifted his sword and swung at the monsters head. It came off cleanly. Arien ran back to the man. "I slayed it! I slayed it!" The man said "Good. Come with us." Arien followed the men. He followed them. They led him into their home. They accepted him into the Saviors and he started training immediatly. Arien fought in the Saviors and helped innocent people that were just like him. He became a skilled swordsmen and learned the way of the Saviors. They used the cover of night to hide and sneak so the enemy could not see them. One day, Arien returned to his old kingdom and saw it burned to the ground. One night, the Saviors were fighting a group of thieves from a helpless inn keeper. The thieves had heard about the Saviors. To fight them they ran with torches and the Saviors could no longer hide in the dark. All the Saviors died except Arien. He was still a skilled swordsmen and did not rely on the dark as much as the rest of the Saviors. He killed every single one of them. But he sustained some injury's too. The inn keeper was so thankful he let Arien stay at the inn. Arien found the inn lovely and he asked the inn keeper if he could stay there for a while. The inn keeper agreed, but Arien had to work at the inn. He worked at the inn for 5 years. He enjoyed farming and selling goods at the inn. Arien sharpened the sword his father gave him everyday. After 5 years, Arien was determined to find the raiders and destroy the kingdom that destroyed his kingdom.

-Character Age: 21

-Character Appearance: He still uses the cover of night. He wears a hood so you can only see his eyes.

- Character Personality: He is quick and stealthy. He is determined and ambitious.

-Your ambitions: To destroy the kingdom that destroyed his own.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes he learned in his palace at a boy.

-Can your character mine?: No he cannot mine.

-Are you a capable builder? No he can't build either.

- Can you wield a sword: Yes, he is quick and silent when he swings his sword. He used the cover of night to surprise his enemies.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes when he worked at the inn that is one of the things he had to do.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is stealthy and silent.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: Thanks for reading I really hope I get accepted and I can start playing with my friends. Also sorry about my skin picture. I really cant get a better picture of it. I hop you can see it.

[Sagwort 833]

Declined

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[Arien 3]

Declined

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Just fix your skin...which it not even there

Oh sorry I will fix that. I copyed and pasted from my last app and it must of not copyed right. Iff that was the only thing wrong (I hope it is) then will you accept it or do I have to repost my app?

[Repiteo 173]

Much better! Rather embarrassing to have to deny apps for skin alone. But without further ado...

Accepted