Vansnothy app

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Minecraft Account Name:

Vansnothy

-How old are you?:

15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

United States Western standard time -5 (GMT -5)

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, I have a very good grip in the English language and grammar

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a creative person who is very dedicated when a challenge shows up.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I could spend about 5hs not the server weekly

-How long have you played minecraft?:

I have been playing it for about 2 years now

-What do you know about roleplaying?:

I know that role playing is a form of game were u basically form part of the player, and play as if u were him.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

From the trailers, lets play, and my friends, veryyyyy fun!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played Bashcraft, skit cape, and other minor servers of friends, and I left most of them because I lost interest on them, however, i look forward on Lord of the craft, for its role playing.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I have read them and agree to them.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

Dwarves, Elves, Orcs and Humans.

-How did you hear about us?:

A very good friend of mine told me about this server, and i looked it up on youtube.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

Vansnoth

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Vansnoth

-What is your Race?:

Human

-Biography:

My beging starts with a sad story; my dad a king's men and my mom a herbalist. At the age of 10, I found out my dad died protecting the king from a band of thieves. It was really shocking for me, since I had a very good relation with my dad. My first thought when i heard the news, was to get revenge, so I ran away from home, to find the band of thieves that killed my dad. As time went by, I grew up, learned skills, lessons, and till this day i haven't found them. But now that I am one step closer, and I won't let this chance go away, I will need to gather warriors to help me get revenge, once and for all.

-Character Age: 20

-Character Appearance: Tan skin, brown hair, green eyes, very strong, and tall.

Character Personality: independent, brave, will never back down in a fight, and persistent.

-Your ambitions: get revenge on my dad, I then leave a peaceful life in the woods.

-Can your character read or write?: He can read very well, his mom taught him with her herbalist books; however, his skills to write are very low, since he left home at age of 10.

-Can your character mine?: yes, and he is very good at finding diamonds.

-Are you a capable builder?: I am a very capable builder, specially with stone structures.

-Can you wield a sword?: At age of 7 my dad gave me his sword given by the king, and ever since I been training hard, so yes I can wield one.

-Enjoy Farming?: Although my mother was constantly making me harvest the wheat and other herbs, I never really enjoyed it.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is very swift, and can jump very high

-A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskins.com/preview/both/9/249700

-Other Information: I miss my father, I wish he was here to see the person I've become.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [X]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Please don't place your family or yourself on a higher level than other people. When you come into the server, no one will recognize you or anything about your father. Revise it to include some Lore into your application and lower your position.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.