My Application [Khodan]

[khodan 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Khodan

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT+1

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I always loved to play Sandbox games, i started with Garrys mod until i heard about Minecraft.

Minecraft is amazing and i also love to role play so it is a win win situation then, right?

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 4-6 hours

-How long have you played Minecraft?: Since Minecraft Alpha

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: I started to roleplay when i was 9 or 10, and that age i started to play World of Warcraft. My cousin explained to me how to roleplay and stuff and i loved to do it, even though i sucked hard at it.

I still roleplay in World of Warcraft and i am better in it ofcourse, and i would love to roleplay here because i love minecraft and i love to roleplay so yeah, what do i want more?

I also played RP games like Morrowind, Oblivion and Skyrim.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I will expect that the server will have a nice community and that it will be fun to play in this server.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on much servers but i didn't like them.

I am sure that i will like this server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i did read and i did understand the rules.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Human, Elf, Dwarf and Orc

-How did you hear about us?: Signature

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Khodan

In-Character:

-Character Name:Varian

-What is your Race?:Human

-Biography: Varian was a kid with rich parents he was 9 when his parents got killed.

It was a normal day for Varian, he was going outside to play with his friends, when he got back home, the first thing he noticed is how both of his parents were dead.

He ran to his room and he locked his room just so he could cry all day.

At the age of 12 he started to learn the arts of combat.

He prefered 2 daggers over a big and heavy sword.

He kept training every day with his 2 daggers.

At the age of 22 he was an experienced fighter.

He had only one goal, to kill the killers of his parents.

-Character Age: 22

-Character Appearance: Like this http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111119131614/elderscrolls/images/thumb/3/34/ThGuAr5.jpg/294px-ThGuAr5.jpg without being a cat of course.

-Character Personality: He prefers to be a lone wolf, and if he doesn't get answers to his question then he likes to use his fist.

-Your ambitions: Varian wants to kill the person who mudered his parents.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes he was a rich kid, he can read and he can write.

-Can your character mine?: Yes

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes

-Enjoy Farming?: No not really

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes he can sneak unnoticed and he can picklock.

-A screenshot of your skin:http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/265/naamloosrm.png/

-Other Information: My IRL name is Kenny and i live in Holland.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [X]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Your biography is short and cliche'd. It'd be better if you added a bit of lore, longer, and made it so that your parents weren't killed at such a young age.

Oh, and Role Play doesn't mean RPGs.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.