Madfireshot's 6th application

[Madfireshot 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Madfireshot

-How old are you?: 14 June 25 1997

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: central standard time United States of America

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes. I'm in advanced English.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm here to have fun and make everyone else time here fun. I like rock music and well...Minecraft. I'm able to follow rules and i will accept punishment if necessary (and I'm not a kiss up!)

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: A couple of hours a day if I'm not grounded.

-How long have you played minecraft?: 1.7 so like 4 months

-What do you know about role-playing? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I did role-play on world of Warcraft and it was pretty good I played it for a couple of months I thought it was fun. OK role-play is sort of like acting you have to stay in charterer so like star wars for example the actor who plays Darth Vader is pretending to be him, he is role-playing. He doesn't just stop being Darth and turn into whoever he is in real life he has to stay in character. like he is Luke sky-walker they kept that through all the movies he didn't become a different person.so when I'm role-playing i cant be talking to someone i know by their rp name and then be like so did you see that falcons game yesterday that would be getting out of RP. I do role playing on wow sometimes for like a month or so. last year for school we had to right a four page Gothic story and the person i wrote about stayed the same person the whole tome.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: My friend has played it and told me its fun with scheduled events and battles and I have been walking around and i think it is cool looking and fun.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Anthrox.eu left because it is down and my friend plays this one. some pvp server. it was lame.I played on blockface but that sucked. honestly this one looks like the best server so far.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes I understand the rules and yes I understand the Lore.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Orc, Human, Elf and Dwarf. sub races undead and ascended.

-How did you hear about us?: My friend rmxelijah (server name Edward Joe Spritzer)

-Did you vote?: Yes

-What was your favorite Law?: no greifing.

-What was your least favorite Law?: no destroying of landscape.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Madfireshot

In-Character:

-Character Name: Switz Fitzpatrick Spritzer

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Madfireshot

-Biography:I am the brother of Edward Joe Spritzer our mother died at the age of 8 from an unknown disease and from that day our father had to work endless hours to support the family unfortunately he died when we were 18. Now we must fend for ourselves i am a hard worker if only my brother was that way too he has been depressed ever since their parents died i am always nagging him to get off his lazy but and work especially when he is in the mine he always seems to be in the mine so long but only brings back small amounts of resources i seem to find blood red torches in the mines what is doing down there? The stories my father has told me about the ascended to not treat our family kindly saying they are unjust and only protecting others for their own purposes I'm not sure if they are any better than the undead but I'm sure they cant be that bad...the undead i haven't seen one yet but they sound terrible but what if they are just misunderstood I'm not sure my father never said anything about them I'm skeptical about both ascended and undead. Me and my brother want to open a Blacksmith in Aegis now that I am fully trained as a ranger.Another thing i wish to do in Aegis is open a ranger's guild and teach eager new beings the ways of the archer.(and sell them some decently priced arrows and armor) :)

-Character Age: 22 as we are fraternal twins.

-Character Appearance: he has dark brown hair and wears a green and brown cloak with his hood up most of the time (that's why his hair is so dark.)

-Character Personality:He is a hard worker trying to keep himself and his brother alive he enjoys farming and mining and most of all the cry of battle.

-Your ambitions: Find out the truth of the undead and ascended and to get his brother to be un-depressed and maybe work harder and to also find out what he does in the mines.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes

-Can your character mine?: Yes much better than his lazy brother.

-Are you a capable builder?very capable he he helped build his dads smithy and their old house before it burnt down. And for once his brother is good at this too.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes he is an adequate sword wielder but prefers to use a bow and arrow.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes he has the patients and enjoys farming he always likes to keep stokes but his brother on the other hand well you can guess...

-Does your character have any special skills?:] He is an excellent archer and or scout he is also very sneaky.

-A screenshot of your skin: Look at my last application. Because, for some reason it wont let me post my image this time.

-Other Information: don't believe that's my skin? Look at my 5th application. Same skin.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

Metagaming [X]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

When coming to the world of Aegis, you come with absolutely nothing. You come to develop a character, not have one developed for you. You won't have a brother when you arrive, nor will you be a trained ranger. Try just being a trained archer, not a ranger as they are a group in Aegis

Next, try adding lore from Aegis. Read the lore from the main website on the sidebar. Else, try viewing the world as a wandering soul to collect information.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.