[Denied]auti117's Application

[auti117 4]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: auti117

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: EST, I live in Canada

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I do, I have learned it my entire life.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: A young male programmer. About 5 foot 6 inch's brown hair gray eyes. I also love Minecraft

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I could possibly be on every other day or every day.

How long have you played minecraft?: I have played Minecraft for 10 months on the 12th of November.

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Well I know that you are supposed to stay in character while playing, I have done it for the last year or two, Mainly D and D(Dungeons and Dragons).

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect the server to be a hardcore Rp with PvP out side of the cites(other than in gladiator arenas).

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Mainly freebuild and my friend's servers, I have not left them but I wanted to try somthing like your server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes, Yes and Yes.

Name the 4 races on this server.: Humans, Dwarves, Elves and Orcs.

How did you hear about us?: I heard about you on www.Minesatus.com.

Did you vote?: Yes I did vote for this wonderful RP server

What was your favourite Law?: No Griefing.

What was your least favourite Law?: None of them.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: auti117.

In-Character:

Character Name: First name: Leonardo (Username: auti117)

What is your Race?:I have picked Human

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: auti117.

Biography:He was born as a bankers son and he always worked on his grandfathers farm in the summer. Leonardo was a brave and intelligent boy, he was the best chess player in the town of Vinci where he was born. But at a later time he moved to the kingdom of the Humans there he was beaten and was robbed. The at the age of 15 his family were slayed by a corrupt Guards and Templars and from then on he trained to be a highly skilled Assassin. To this very day he still trains and seeks his revenge pn the Templars.

Character Age: 24.

Character Appearance: He wears a white cloak with a green sash or a red clock with a cape.

Character Personality: He is a kind and caring man and he is against any corrupt government and believes in the Catholic faith.

Your ambitions: He strives to be a better fighter and to take his revenge.

Can your character read or write?: Yes he can read and write.

Can your character mine?: Yes.

Are you a capable builder?: Yes.

Can you wield a sword?: Yes he fought the Templar's for years.

Enjoy Farming?: Yes he was a farmer before his family was slain.

Does your character have any special skills?: Not other than being able to do parkour.

A screenshot of your skin: N/A.It is an Assassin copied off Assassin's Creed or a red cloaked miner with a cape.

Other Information: None other than I would love to Join

[Nero 347]

Expand on your biography and refrain from one word answers. Also, give a definition of what role playing means to you, and what it is.

[James Undercroft 129]

Your application has been:

I'm sorry to say it, but there it is.

There are quite a few things I'd like you to fix up, but you must wait 2 days before you can re-sumbit your application so it gives plent of time for researching and checking to make it the best you can possibly do. :)

First of all in your biography you have created a town name, because this town does not exist in lord of the craft it might not be a good idea to include it into the biography as it shows a lack of effort in researching the lore and history of this server. Look here for places or people names to include in your biography (From my understanding it is completely acceptable to make up fathers and mothers jobs and where they came from etc. But probably not from any royal blood lines).

http://lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php/Main_Page

Also killing without reason on this server is strictly prohibited. The only time you are allowed to kill someone is if they attack you first and you defend yourself or if you get a villain application and become accepted. As a villain you would be able to go up to people and say such things as: "Your money or your life" but do keep in mind if you do wish to follow such a path that there are so many "Your money or your life" people out there that it would become extremely difficult to get accepted on those grounds. Try to be origional.

I do not believe there are any "Templar" on this server per se. There are... ranks of Templar is certain organisations but there is no organisation known as The Templars as far as I am aware. Please look on the wiki as it is your best friend for Lore, history and people/place names.

Try to create a balanced character as your current one just doesn't seem to be fair. He can do parkour AND farm AND mine AND use a sword AND build AND read and write. (Aside from parkour and writing) all of these require skills in-game. And unless you want to be severely limited in-game and have about 30 levels in everything before reaching the total level cap I suggest you make your character a little more balanced and just focus on a few skills.

For information on how to create a balanced character read here:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

For information on the skills mechanic read here: http://lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php/Skill_Information

Good luck! :)

Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-application-form/

[James Undercroft 129]

Man by ONE MINUTE! >_<

I put so much effort into that!

[Nero 347]

Sorry :/ probably should have been in the application team TS ^.^