Adidas' application

[Adidas 3]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:TheSarcione

-Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No

-How old are you?:15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:EST/ USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a freshman in High School. I go to school in Kentucky and mostly get A's and B's. I play basketball for my school.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:2 hours a day during the week and 3-4 hours on the weekend.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: About a year.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:Roleplaying takes teamwork and leadership. Roleplaying is where you make your own character and give him a biography. You can make your character whatever type of person you want. He can be a warrior, politician, teacher, etc. you can make your character follow any type of story you want.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I think it will be really fun and exciting.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I haven't been on many servers. I mostly stay on singleplayer.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Absolutely.

-Name the 4 races on this server:Elves, Dwarves, Orcs, and Humans.

-How did you hear about us?:My friend told me that it was the best server for Minecraft.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Adidas

In-Character:

-Character Name: Adidas

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Biography: Adidas was adopted into a wealthy family in Old Laurelin. His parents owned a successful store in the market of Laurelin, where they spent most of their time. Adidas had a brother who he did everything with. One day as their parents were recieving some supplies for their store a group of bandits stole the supplies and killed both of their parents. With the death of his adoption parents Adidas now trys to find his real parents with the help of his brother. Adidas and his brother are also trying to find their parent's killers.

-Character Age:18

-Character Appearance: Tall and musculer

-Character Personality: Kind, but willing to fight.

-Your ambitions:To find his adoption parents' killers and find his real parents.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes

-Can your character mine?: Yes

-Are you a capable builder?:Yes

-Can you wield a sword?:Yes, but prefers a bow.

-Enjoy Farming?: Not really

-Does your character have any special skills?:He is stealthy and quick.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://tinypic.com/r/672xxc/5

-Other Information: I cant wait to play.

[Auvreaeath 263]

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

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Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

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Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin []

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

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It was a good application in all but I thought it could use more detail and thought. Nice try please try again I really want to see an edited version.

~Auvreaeath