Chris Arrowknee's Application

Rale · December 24, 2011

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: My Minecraft Account Name is 123kiillerfreak

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No

How old are you?: Im 13 Years old

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +1, Germany

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes i do have good grip on the English grammer.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im an friendly and happy Teen. I loves to play Minecraft since i heard about it. Im good a playing Keyboard(Piano) and im sportly activ.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 7-13 Hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Its like your soul get into an other body and into an other world. Roleplay mean you are playing a role, like in theather.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Meta an Powergaming okay.

Metagaming is if you hear something in ts or in your lokal area like ***** is under attack or ***** is getting jailed and you are going to help them.

Powergaming is if you are doing something your character cant do like "Chris Arrowknee killed the king of *****"

What do you expect this server will be like?: I hope its like everyone says that this would be the best RPG server on the whole world.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: hmm i never played really on an other RPG server i just joined and thought "bullshit", but i got an own server were im playing with my friends its very funny.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i did.

How did you hear about us?: First i searched an RPG map for my server, but then i thought "why didnt i go on an RPG server", then i searched an RPG server and found a Lets Play about this server, then i found your youtube channel and enjoyd the videos and now i want to play with you

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? No i didnt

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: 123killerfreak

In-Character:

Character Name: Chris Arrowknee

What is your Race?: I gonna play an Undead Elf but first read my Biography.

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): When i was an young Elf the war started and nearly all got killed, my Family and me hide us in an cave but they found us first thay killed my mom then my dad and then me, an Elven necromancer found my corps he rescued me, now i looks a bit scary but i want my revange on the undead.

Your characters ambitions: Hates undead but friendly to other races, Eagleeay and is a good shooter with bow, got an abnormal strange.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? First i spectate, but if i know that the bandits are the bad ones i gonna help the elf struggling.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?"Hallo Mister, i need an new bow and some arrows" after i payd "Sir? could you tell me where the nearest inn is? Thanks."

A screenshot of your skin:

Other Information: I know this is my Third App but i saw that my other apps was denied so i made a new one, Marry Christmas.

James Undercroft · December 24, 2011

Your application has been:

But don't loose hope! After two days you can re-apply which gives you plenty of time to fix up your application and plan it out, as well as use all the advice I am about to give you to make it spot on.

I really wanted to accept you, just as a christmas gift but alas the rules are rules! :C

You see, there are many errors in your application which no one yet seems to have explained to you or you have not listened.

First of all your definition of role-play could do with a little improvement. Try to think up a better definition or do a google search and DO NOT COPY AND PASTE but rather look at the definition and paraphrase it. Understand it, get to know it and then write it in your own words.

Please make sure you have voted as it is a requirement to join the server. The link to the website is here: http://www.minestatus.net/6317-the-lord-of-the-craft/vote

To find your vote number look at the total number of votes for this server. That number is your vote number.

I would like to see at least a paragraph (but preferably more) in your biography. Tell us where you were born (in aegis, you cannot come from another land), possibly something about your parents, where you grew up and any troubles you encountered. Please makes sure you have included what your character looks like, how they act (personality) and their age in your biography. You can find a link to all the lore of aegis at the bottom of this reply. (It is the link to the wiki). Also the lore in your is incorrect, if you get risen by a necromancer you would technically be the undead as that is a necromancer's job :P

I would like you to expand and fix your ambitions. Ambitions is what you plan to achieve, not what currently is.

I would like to see at least a PARAGRAPH for each role-play question and make sure for the combat question you abide by the rules of combat for the server. In role-play you will need to warn a villain before engaging in combat. At least a couple of lines from each person is needed for combat to initiate or it is considered a no-rp kill and you can get banned on the server for it. Do not just write:

I suddenly pull out my sword and kill the bandits. Then I ask the elf for money for helping him.

Write a dialogue as well as the actions of all those involved. This goes as well for the shop question, do not just write a single line, write a full scene. Write the actions of all involved in the situation and what they say, how they interact with each other.

Do not post another application within 2 days or that application will be skipped.

If you need any help don’t be afraid to send me a PM on the forums.

Good luck :)

Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted:

To understand the questions being asked better look here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/31308-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form

The guide of a Game Master to accepted server applications:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/

Tips to definitely include on your application:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A must-read guide to the world of aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis

How to avoid role-playing as a terrible character: