Parsifale's App To The Server

[parsifal 1]

b][u]Out-Of-Character:[/u][/b] [b]Minecraft Account Name:[/b] Parsifale [b]Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:[/b] [b]How old are you?:[/b]16 [b]Time-Zone/Country of Residence:[/b] Belgium Eu west [b]Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:[/b] i have the grip but not the grammar cuss I have dyslexia [b]Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:[/b] im an cheer full guy fullof life which talks a bit to much when he is motivated. [b]How much time could you be on the server weekly?:[/b]5-10 hours [b]What do you know aboutRoleplaying? Give a definition of what itmeans to you.:[/b]

roleplayingis taking the role of an certain person . that’s not you in anyway but that youwant to be or are given to be and u must be that person in the utmost respectand dignity [b]In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.[/b]

Metagaming is that u the roleplaying character seeks out information that isnot available to there character so they cloud change their character playstyle or get an advantage.

Powergaming ismaking an character that will be super powerful

[b]What do you expect this server will be like?:[/b]

An well-organizedfun and Hardcore Rp server like no other witch you fall out of character You getpunished . and social and fun place to be I hope [b]What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:[/b]

I play on pabbie’s server for the fun not leaving them cuss form time to time Igo on it to train my building skills

[b]Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:[/b]

Yes I did an I totally agree

[b]How did you hear about us?:[/b]

online in search of an fun Rp server

[b]Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? [/b] h

yes 84 I think whit the thumbs up else I didn’t do it right I voted but I can’tsee the number then

[b]What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:[/b]

Parsifal

[u][b]In-Character: [/b][/u] [b]Character Name: [/b]

Dorimar

[b]What is your Race?:[/b]

Dwarf

[b]Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):[/b] Dorimar is an 4.9 feet tall dwarf . who is 366 years old . he has an red beard tight up togetherat the end and ware’s an grey armor for in the mine’s whit an helmet at alltime you never know what you can stumble upon in the depths of the earth I grewup in the Great Halls of Kal’Urguan named after the great dwarven master Urguanmy dad was an simple black smith and my mom did the house hold.

I joined themining Groups at the age of 16 . my dad said the early you get experience thebetter. Later my desire for the rich’s of the underworld let me to an questgiven by my uncle Mardir . witch used to tell me stories about Urguan and ibleesthe daemon of evil. The quest brought me threw out all the depth of the great minesof Kal’ Urguan . when I reached the age of 100 I joined the guards of Kal’Urguan witch I continued doing until I was 250 years old and went in to thetrading business to trade stuff and whit the money I bought lots of gems to satisfymy never ending desire for rich’s out of the underworld (depth’s). now I am 366years and I need something else I need to get off that Horrible desire for moremore ! It makes me mad so my goal now is to get off the rich’s and make rich’slike buildings or trophy’s of war everything to get me of that desire

[b]Your characters ambitions:[/b]

Rich’s of the depth’s

The lore behind the Daemonsand Aenguls

War and food

[b]Out in the Wilds, your character comesacross a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elfstruggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?[/b] pfff an pointy bastard on me path yer he can handle himself [b]Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "Whatmay I help you with today?" How does your character answer? do yerhave some gems for me for an good price ofc

A screenshot of your skin: screen is in the extra thing

Other Information:

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [X]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

I can't read what you have made. Its too messy for me to understand what you are trying to imply.

I'd advise using periods, commas, and punctuation in general.

And make the format neater.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

[Taiga 764]

Moved to Denied Forum