Frottimer

[Schneebo 1593]

Out-Of-Character: Proshnak Gor'mash

Minecraft Account Name:Frottimer

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:no

How old are you?: 18

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Time, United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes, i have a pretty good grip on the english language

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im a really nerdy kid to be honest with you. I love to roleplay and chat with random strangers. Basically im a kid that likes to have fun.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 6-10 hours atleast

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:I beileve roleplaying is putting yourself in a ictional land and playing any imaginary creature and staying in character as much as possible whether it be in speech or in actions.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Metagaming is using out of character information as ingame content and powergaming is using cheats and hacking.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect the server to be a lot of roleplaying. From what ive seen is that its lots of fun. I also expect to see kings and queens ruling huge cities throughout the kingdom and raids and battles in the fields and forests.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I've played on smaller servers like pilgrim server but i stopped because we werent allowed to kill anything

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i have agreed and understood the rules

How did you hear about us?: i actually heard about you guys from a friend and watched him play and have a blast roleplaying with everybody and trying to survive in the wilderness.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? No i have not voted but ill get there as soon as possible

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Frottimer

In-Character: Proshnak Gor'mash

Character Name:Proshnak Gor'mash

What is your Race?:Orc

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Proshnak grew up with his twin bruddah Modak and they both were inspired to be shamans at a young age. Around the age of 14 they were seperated because of an attack by a rival clan of orcs. They both went in seperate directions and never saw each other again, atleast until now. From a rumor heard by a friend Proshnak decided to travel to the land of Aegis to find his bruddah and the best shaman teacher around. Now an ambitious orc at the age of 34 is deterined to complete his quest. The only way too know for sure is as people if they've seen someone named Modak and say "he luks exactly like meh."

Your characters ambitions: To join the Gorkil Clan and find my long lost twin Modak.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Proshnak would run over push the elf away and say "This is how to take care of these pests!" He kills the bandits with his barehands and takes every single item on the bandits. Before he leaves he looks the elf straight in the eye and says "Puny treehugger, that wasnt that much of challenge."

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? Proshnak would respond by saying " I want as much raw meat i can buy for 35 minas." The man responds "Your at the wrong shop for that." With an intimidating figure he yells " WELL TELL ME WHERE I CAN GET ALL THE RAW MEAT I WANT!" The man cowers in fear in points Proshnak in the right direction. He had an amazing feast that night.

A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskins.info/orc.html

[Blawharag 277]

This is an outstanding and very well written app, so it is with a heavy heart that I must deny you (sorry for getting your hopes up there). I do not want to scare you away though, as I am really looking forward to roleplaying with you. However, there are a few issues which individually I could have let slide on a pending, but together... well I have denied people for less. Here are the issues at hand:

#1 While your definition of powergaming is technically an correct one, we are specifically refering to a definition that pertains to RPing. Think emotes and character abilities. There are two acceptable definitions that we are looking for.

#2 Your bio is a tad short. While well written and providing coverage of your life, try fleshing it out a little. Particularly in the area of the rival clan. What was your clan, what was the rival clan, and why were they attacking each other? The last clan war was some time ago, at least in Krugmar.

I really want to see you get an accepted application. While you cannot re-apply for 48 hours, I am more than willing to work with you to ensure that all the problems above are resolved. Please contacting me via Forum PM, or if you would rather speak with me over teamspeak I would be more than happy to do so. I will help you tune up this app and will personally review your next submission if you'd like.

[Blawharag 277]

Moved to Denied Forum