Thedanny1243's 2Nd App

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Out-Of-Character: My name is Daniel Raistlin Hallman. I live in Red Bud Ill. I started to RP when I first played Dungeons and Dragons. My age is 15 and I am in highschool and I am ok when it comes to RP.

Minecraft Account Name: My minecraft name is Thedanny1243.

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No sorry.

How old are you?: I am 15 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: us central

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes thank you.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I like video games. If I put my mind to something I can do it. And if I feel bad for someone I will always help them.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 3-35 hours a week. I like minecraft.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Roleplaying is to ware your not you. You are the person your playing. You cant just do what ever you want you have to do what you would do in real life. You have to eat , sleep , drink , take a shower/bath and you have to talk like your talking in real life.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. MEtagaming is using OOC information for IC advantages, using something your character wouldnt know IC. and powergaming is forcing an RP on another player or like kiling them agaisnt their OOC will

What do you expect this server will be like?: I hope that it is a hard core RP server with lots of adventures.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Yes I played on a RP server called Mesalia. Reason I left was because everything changed with new admens players and more then every thing started sucking so I left.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes and I do understand.

How did you hear about us?: For days I have been trying to find a good RP server then I looked on google the I found this server so I want to try it out.

Your characters ambitions: To one day be a king.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? He watches the elf for a few moments. He reaches to grab his bow and a arrow and waits for a good shot. A few seconds later he gets a good shot and releases the arrow and hits the bandit in the chest. then the bandits see him and charge at him then he take out another arrow and shoots at the 1 of the bandits head an kills him. Then he takes out a small iron sword and charges the next bandit then stabs the bandit in the chest then kills him. He walks up to the elf and grabs his hand then lift him up to his feet. After talking to the elf him and the elf walk away.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? No but if the server is good I will.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Username is thedanny1243 display name is Dont worry about it. Dont worry about it is my real display name.

In-Character: IC I love to help people with there RP but I now I am not perfect myself but still.

Character Name: IC my name is Telemnar OOC my name is thedanny1243 wich is my mc name.

What is your Race?: My race is a human.

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Telemnar was born in a small house out in the wild. He had a mom named Mary and a dad named Belmar. Telemnar was a only child.He had black hair , green eyes , was 8 feet tall and weighed 125 pounds. Telemnar loved to visit the hobbits. When Telemnar was 12 years old he decided to be a ranger because he loved to hunt and loved to shoot bows. So he went to his uncle who lived in woods and he learned from him.

After many years of training Telemnar got his 1st bow and he got 35 arrows also he got a small sword. By that time Telemnar was 17 years old. But was not old enough to move out because his mom and dad decided he can not move out until he is 18 years old. So during the rest of that year Telemnar started planning his life. After 3 months of thinking about what he wants to do he decided to try out being a fishermen. So when he finally became 18. His mom and dad packed him food and water to take on his journey. So Telemnar left his mom and dad's house and traveled to a small village only a few days away.

After a many days of traveling he finally made it to a small village by the sea. And there he went around near the port asking for a job. Then finally he met a brave fisherman named Zach. Telemnar went up to him and asked if he needed any help catching fish. Zach Looked at him with a smile and told Telemnar that he is looking for help but I am done for the day how about you come by tommorow and we will get started. Telemnar looked at him and said ok. So telemnar went along his way and went to stay at the inn. Telemnat went inside the the inn and rented a room. After he was done ordering the room he went inside and fell asleep. When he woke up it was noon. So telemnar got dressed and went to the fisherman at port. When Telemnar got there the fisherman was ready to leave so Telemnar got on board and they headed off to sea. After a few hours of fishing Telemnar saw a strange ship straight ahead. Telemnar waved at Zach and told him a ship is up ahead just to worn him. Zach looked at the ship and decided it was just a fellow fisherman. Telemnar looked at Zach with a worried look but Telemnar just went on with what he was doing. A few moments later Telemnar decided to sit down and take a break and eat some stew that Zach made for them.

While Telemnar was eating he saw another ship come by right next to them. Telemnar and zach were scared then pirates started boarding them! Telemnar reached for his small sword and ran to one of the pirates and stab one of them but while he was running one of the pirates grab him and knocked his sword out of his hand. Telemnar struggled to get free but there was just to many pirates Then a pirate came up and knocked him out with a heavy club.

Hours later Telemnar woke up on the pirate ship. He was scared and alone. Telemnar did not know what to do so he decided to try to escape. Telemnar waited till it was dark outside. Telmnar was wondering ware Zach is so he yelled outloude saying Zach are you here? A moment later Zach responded saying yes I am here. Telemnar asked Zach if he knew a way out? Zach responded saying yes I was able to sneak in a piece of metel that can pick lock the lock. Telemnar was not much scared anymore now that he knew he was gonna be free. Telemnar heard a lock being picked and then a door opening. Telemnar looked up and he say Zach standing there and Zach said to fallow me and Telemnar did. Zach and Telemnar got out of deck and saw a pirate on gaurd duty so Telemnar and Zach stuck to the shadows and they went to the side of the ship and jumped.

After a few hours they swam to a island that they did not know of. After reaching shore they decided to build a small boat that will take them back to the village. After many days on the island they finally made the boat and they sailed to the village.

A day later they finally made it to the village. When they reached shore Zach asked Telemnar if he wanted to stay and help him. Telemnar answered saying No I am sorry but I think I am going to travel for a bit and find out what I should do with my life. Telemnar and Zach both said goodbye and left knowing they will never see each other again.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? I look at him and I say: Yes hello sir sorry but I was just walking by but I will stop later for a few things. Good day.

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Denied.

Work on your spelling, punctuation, grammar and presentation (colour, bolding, etc.)

Out-Of-Character and In-Character are titles, leave them alone and don't write anything after them.

Work on your definition of roleplaying, metagaming and powergaming.

Your biography is very long-winded without any apparent character development.

Your character seems to have Barbie Doll syndrome: he has an assortment of skills that don't seem to be related at all, for the sole purpose of being cool. Your character is a hunter, an archer in battle, a swordsman, a fisherman and a boat builder. Hence the relation to Barbie ("Princess Barbie has a medical degree, is a great cook and is running in the next election!")

Your biography contains powergaming (particularly when it comes to escaping).

Your first open reponse question contains powergaming and require dialogue. There are also only two bandits.

Your second open reponse question needs the scenario continued until your character leaves the shop.

Your application is all out of order.

The link to your skin is not working.

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