0Ptic5's Application

[0ptic5 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:

0ptic5 ( its a zero not a O )

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No

How old are you?:

14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Central Time zone / United States of America

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes i speak it fluently

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a hardcore gamer. I play video games most of the time, i play the elder scrolls series, minecraft, fallout series, etc.

On my free time i would play minecraft with my friends online.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

most of the week for at least 3 hours a day

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

I know in role playing that you have to be your character. You must become him/her/it, after you decide who you are you play in the given world as you would or your person would.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Meta Gaming - Maybe you hear that a war is about to begin in your game, your character does not know that because he/she is not you. Them not knowing is meta gaming.

Power gaming - It is when you do an action on someone so he/she has to play along, such as one player back stabs and steals all their loot.

The second player could not respond to the players action so the first player is power gaming.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

5 times better then what my friends and the vids told me ;D

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I play on many pvp servers and i did not leave them

-pvp pitforge

-Golden pvp

-VaultCraft

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes i have gone over the rules

How did you hear about us?:

i have heard the server from my friends and fan videos

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

yes i have voted i am number 3,977 - 0ptic5

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

0ptic5

In-Character:

Character Name:

Thorm Deeprocks

What is your Race?:

Dwarven

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

I was born in a small cave of five my mother cared for us 5 children. Without our mother here life has been tough, she would take care of us

while my father was winning wars. After our mothers tragic accident with my brothers and sisters i have been set out to find who did this

horrible killing. Me and my father have been training over many years to get them back.

I have been training over some sort of years ( i lost count after 50 years ). I have much to learn still such of my young age (only 113 years old). My next task is to learn the art of the battle axe. I've grown a beard over the years, and with such liking the goverment looks over me as a future soldier. I believe the evil people who killed my family should pay a great price ... their life.

I'm not a getting very good appearance to some people with my great size ( 5'0). Soon i will join the war and end this un-humane blood shed. I cant think as well anymore i need help with my mind.

Your characters ambitions:

I wish to avenge my families death and end the evil of mass killings.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

I remember the thoughts of my mother being attacked, then a scream comes ahead and snaps me into motion. I run to protect her and take most of the blows to me, and i yell "i must end this NOW'. I pull out my axe and swing at their heads, they come clean off. The Elf shrieks in terror and runs away, I think of the first time my mother screamed... I erase my current thoughts and go on my way.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

I would say "Hello fine sir, nice day it is yes ?" i would start a evening conversation and try to get my way into finding better deals. If he goes on with it i buy goods, but if he does not i go on my way.

A screenshot of your skin:

It Is A Attachment

Other Information:

I hope you like my application. i would be a great asset to the server

Thx for reading

- 0ptic5

[Rhisereld 317]

Denied.

Expand powergaming to mention powergaming where players make their characters too powerful by giving them unrealistic abilities/powers.

Give more information about your character's childhood and personality. Write in third person. You gloss over your mother's death and don't explain anything. Having dead parents is extremely cliche, and I don't accept cliche applications unless the story is completely justified.

Just standing there while the bandits rain blows upon your head, then pulling out your axe is not realistic. You kill the bandits far too easily without them fighting back.

Your second open reponse question needs a lot more detail.

[Rhisereld 317]

Moved to Denied Forum