Dmagoo's 3Rd Application

[dmagoo 0]

Minecraft Account Name: Dmagoo

Did you attend minecon and sign-up at the LOTC booth?: No

How old are you?: 14

Time-zone/country of residence: Australia, NSW

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes nearly all the time, except when on games where I talk in slang

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im nearly always kind, unless someone really pisses me off. I love loads of games like Skyrim and Terraria. i love maths seeing as my granddad was a maths teacher when he was like... 30.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 7 hours a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Role-Playing means getting a role or creating a role for your character then playing out the role and fulfilling your destiny. Some people don't like Role-playing, but its my favorite genre.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Metagaming: Saying 'Hi <name>' when you first meet them. Simply it is making gaps of knowledge from your real life experience like saying I know someone like fredbobjim and when i first meet him in-game i say 'Hi fredbobjim!'.

Powergaming: Overpowered gamers that are selfish gamers as well Example: Harry fireballs Bob so he flys across the room and hits a wall. He then slices him with a sword then ties him up in chains. Ok Harry has an overpowered fireball that sends Bob flying then he summons a sword from nowhere and slices him, grabs a chain form nowhere as well and ties him up.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it will be like a land with treasure and mystery shrouding it.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on many servers some were bad and many were good. the best were: 1 prison server, i stopped because i kept losing my stuff, a BTW server, stopped because there were loads of griefers and an application server where i got on then to realise i had to apply and do a massive test bigger than this one!

How did you hear about us?: A friend told me.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? No.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Dmagoo

In-Character: Dmagoo

Character Name: Dmagoo

What is your Race?: Dwarf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Dmagoo was born in a small village with a poor family who owned the village smithy. One day he made his first sword at the forge when the village was raided by bandits.

Dmagoo tried to save his family, but it was too late... his family was taken away. He rushed after the bandits but they were too fast (Speed Hacks!). Dmagoo couldn't do much about it so he walked around to a small bandit camp. he thought it was the same bandits who took his family,

so he rushed into battle! Only to find out after he had knocked out 3 and killed 1 of them, he looked at the face paint, it was different to the ones who had taken his family.

He ran into the forest and ran into a hunter killing cows and deer. "Hi there!" Dmagoo said to the hunter "I'm Dmagoo, whats your name?" "My name is Ranta Werkman. Nice to meet you" Dmagoo asks "Have you seen any bandits coming past?" "No sorry, why do you ask?" Ranta says "My family was taken away by some bandits in a bandit raid, stole some of my stuff." Dmagoo says then looks away. "Here, take some of the meat and hide from my killings." Ranta says "Thanks, i will use these in my forging!. "Take care!" Ranta says as Dmagoo walks away. Dmagoo is 20 years old and has red hair and wears some armor he forged.

Your characters ambitions: He wants to find his family and get rich from his findings from his adventure.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Dmagoo wants to kill them as he thinks they are the ones who took his family, he punches one in the face and, using his first forged sword, slashes the other across the back with it. The elf then finishes them off and thanks Dmagoo and gives him 50 gold for all his troubles.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? "Hi there friendly looking shop owner!" Dmagoo says "Do you have any iron i could use for my armor and weapons?" The Shop Keeper Replies "Loads! just 10 gold for 2 ingots!" "I have 50 gold ill take 6 ingots!" Dmagoo answers "Thank-you very much! Here is your iron!" the shopkeeper says as he hands the iron to Dmagoo "Thanks for the iron!" Dmagoo says as he walks out of the market.

A screenshot of your skin: HTTP://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/dwarf-rogue---blue/ (i suck at making skins)

Other Information: I am not good at making skins that is why i use planetminecraft and all of those skin sites.

[Zeddicus Fyren 133]

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• Your application was denied for these reasons:
  
• You copy and pasted the definitions for Meta-Gaming and Power-Gaming.
  
• You need to expand your biography, I want to know more about your character and how he became to be.
  
• You need some grammar improvements.
  
• Please expand on the questions.
  
  

You can apply again in 2 hours, in that time please improve your application. If you have any queries, message me.

[Zeddicus Fyren 133]

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