Proxima12's Application

[Proxima12 1]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:Proxima12

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:England

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes I come from Britain

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am an enthusiastic, mature and hardworking individual; I’m a great asset to the people around me. I am independent, confident, and have the ability to work in a team using my own initiative. I am very eager to build new things and would enjoy the challenge of a new opportunity.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:20 Hours a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Role playing is stepping into the shoes of a character and interact with that character as if it is a real person. As you play as that certain character your actions and decision are based upon how the character would think and not you. You have to be one with the character to be able to role-play. I often find creating a story behind my character very useful as it help making decision that the character would make easier.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.Metagaming is you obtain out of character information to benefit your character in game which makes you better then others or it can help you in a way which is unfair towards others.

Power gaming is when a player makes an action against another player but doesnt let the other player react. An example of this would be a character is getting attacked by a bandit. Instead of playing the combat through which normally requires both the Hunter and Bandit to make decisions the bandit just kills the hunter without the hunter playing along.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect it to be structured and kept in an orderly fashion at all times. I would expect there to be helpful members of staff and friendly players

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Avatar SMP: shutdown, EVO craft: lost the thrilling exitment

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about us?:Bubbaklutch told me of the server

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? Yes I was vote number 722

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Proxima12

In-Character:

Character Name:Morgul Telrunya Meaning: Great Accuracy

What is your Race?: Wood Elf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Just reaching his Adulthood Morgul, was happy to be leaving the ranch in which he grew up in, to go off and explore the world with his cousins Mirkwood and Lenwe. As children they would play in the paddocks together play fighting. Morgul is an only child as his mother died whilst giving birth to him, he was looked after buy his auntie, as his farther is a soldier and is away a lot. Before Morgul was taken in by his auntie he was left to fend for him self as his farther abandoned him to go to war, Morgul wondered the streets looking for food and Minas during the day, he would then go into the woods at night and sleep in burrows in the ground. His farther returned and sent him to his aunts, he then got a job at the local blacksmith, where he worked hard, and became the blacksmiths apprentice, this triggered his ambitions and allowed him to practice his art of archery. Morgul became a swift, keen-eyed archer, who enjoys nothing more than to hunt and climb tall trees.

Morgul Is tall and slim with a slender body, he has Blue eyes, light blond hair and pale skin, he hasn't got any muscle and is mostly just skin and bone. He prefers wearing minimal clothing so he can be at one with the forest and nature. He likes to wear Leather armour as it is light and manoeuvrable.

Morgul Is kind, committed and can be arrogant. He sometimes breaks the rules, but he only does this if he feels that it is the right thing to do. He is quick to make a judgement on people and can sometimes take him a while to adjust to change. he is very trusting in his elf brothers but is usually cautious when it comes to orcs.

Your characters ambitions: Morguls's ambition is to be an expert archer and be part of an alliance were he can fight in war to prove him self. he wants to be just like his farther.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Morgul walks towards the cottage with great stealth, to make sure he doesn't attract any unwanted attention. He then pulls out his bow and an arrow from his quiver, draws it back and releases the arrow. The arrow fly's passed the bandits narrowly missing them. The bandits looks towards Morgul as he pulls back the next arrow, the bandits runs away and Morgul finds kindness in his heart to spare the young bandit's life.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? Hello, I am looking for some where I could Buy some feathers to craft some new arrows and Leather to repair my armour.

A screenshot of your skin:

Other information: Sorry i didnt wait 2 hours its just i have to go soon and wont be back for a while so would like to post it 1 last time before i have to go

[Rhisereld 317]

Denied.

Your biography needs work, especially in the first paragraph where it's quite a chronological mess. Just start at the beginning and tell us about his life as he grows older, so it won't be nearly as confusing. I'm also not seeing how working as a blacksmith would trigger his ambition to become an archer.

Your first open reponse question ends prematurely. At least talk to the elf you just saved.

Your second open response question is far too short.

[Rhisereld 317]

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