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[Lynax 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:

Lynax_

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No, I didn't.

How old are you?:

15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Eastern European Time - GMT + 2:00

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, I do ofcourse.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I'm from Turkey. I have a 5 years RP experience in SA-MP. But I really bored at playing SA-MP RP. So, I see your topic in a minecraft forum. And I want to play in this server. I am very calm person and DM in RP is at last case for me.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

+30 Hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

Acting like your character's hisself.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.:

Metagaming is when you look above someone's name without knowing it in a RolePlaying way. It's when you just look above their head to see his/her name. Otherwise, using OOC information IC or reverse.

Powergaming means, let me try to explain, you can't attack 3-5 people yourself. It's powergaming. You are not Chuck Norris or something. You are just a person.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

The most well-known hardcore RP.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I haven't played on any Minecraft RP server. But when I was playing SA-MP, I played on LS-RP and Vendetta RP. (LS-RP is the best RP server on SA-MP. Vendetta RP is the best RP server of Turkey.)

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, I have. I promise.

How did you hear about us?:

http://www.minecraftforum.net/

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

I did after I read. I am the 1.904th voter I think. (Lynax_)

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Lynax_

In-Character:

Character Name: Lynch Axon

What is your Race?:Human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Lynch born in a small village in Aegis. Lynch was a calm kid in past. A lot of girls was love where Lynch live due his blond hairs and long height but he don't like chilling with girls. He was a kid of a poor family. His father was a knight in Aegis but he dead when Lynch was only 6. He grown with 2 sister. As a kid he kept mostly to himself, playing and experimenting with plants and running around in the woods. His father gave a gift to Lynch before he dies. His father's broken shield was a commemorative and their family was believing that shield is lucky and magical. After a long long years later, when he was like 20, he was a very well-built person but he really don't know how to fight. He tried to learn how to fight with a lot of masters in past but he failed everytime. He likes cooking and fishing. Lynch always fishes when he has free time. Also he likes climbing, swimming and running as daily activities. He has a big wound on his chest. Because an orc was bite his chest in past. Lynch had a bad past due fights, hunger, poverty and a lot of bad things. When he was 23, an orc killed and ate his mom right before his eyes. He tried a lot of things to block it but he failed everytime. He tried to attack him He couldn't do anything. After that, he vowed to take revenge from orcs and he will not give permission orcs to breath. Now he is looking for a new somewhere to call it as "Home" and new friends and new life. -In RP, he will be at 23 age and I will act like innocent. I will try to not fight with people. But when I need to fight I will usually try to lose it.

Your characters ambitions:

Having a tavern that will be famous on Aegis and clearing orcs from world.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

First, I will try to pass them without doing nothing. If they try to hijack me, if I don't have anything to fight back, I'll give everything they want.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

I am looking for something special to eat. I am really hungry and in a rush.

A screenshot of your skin:

Click Here!

Other Information:

Lynch is a poor person. He only has a green vest and a broken shield from his dead father on his back. Lynch is a honest person. Also he is too coward. Lynch have not killed anyone before. He don't know how to use sword or arrow.

[High Prophetess Mezua~ ♥ ツ 144]

Denied.

While I enjoyed the humor in the application, sadly it has room for a lot of improvement.

I do realize you are from another country, and that you probably do not have a good grip on the English language. You switched your point of view many many times in to biography, which really threw me off.

Example: "His father was a knight in Aegis but he dead" Dead- present tense. His father- past tense.

The biography was very choppy and you could've explained more on the life of your character. Why did the orc randomly kill your mother? Was there any reason at all to do so? Explain more about the shield. You mentioned it once and never brought it up again. Does it help out Lynch later on?

The open response questions...you need to add more detail to them. They are there for one use, to prove your roleplay skills to us. You need to explain more about what happened. Try to actually answer them with more roleplay. Use dialogue and action.

And lastly, the skin link does not work. You need to make sure that others can see the skin.

There's tons of room for improvement. You have a fairly good storyline, but can expand more on it. Please wait 2 hours to re-apply, and goodluck on your next application~

[High Prophetess Mezua~ ♥ ツ 144]

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