Pickles1014's App

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Pickles1014

How old are you?: 12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: EST American

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes It was the first language I learned

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Well i Like playing lacrosse

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Daily

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I thought of it by taking you and putting you in to the character

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: No but i hope to get a good start here .

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is using OOC and info in IC

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming mean you are powerful person in the game not letting people react to your reactions .

What do you expect this server will be like?: Well make me a better sever player .

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Ive been playing on my own private sever butt i don't go on it only to test out new plugins .

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i have i agree to all the rule and i think there fair .

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes i do promise to abide these rules

How did you hear about us?: I was looking threw youtube and i saw sage candle

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: No but i will once i get home .

In-Character:

Character Name: Morek

What Race are you?: dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Mountian dwarf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): well my parent were Morag and Lothor . I grew up very strong Threw age 10-18 and even more . They knew I was going to have a good life in front of me . Of being a dwarf at least my parent hope .

I left my home at age 32 .A fully grown man . I went on to complete the task . To hope to be a dwarf and that what my family want . That what I wanted and that why I want to get in . This is the tale of Morek life .

What is your Character's ambitions?: To be the best archer

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Well a Sword is mine .

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? It would be FIGHTING

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): Blonde Dwarf miner

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?Well i would say please stop harassed him I would say what if you were in his position would you like that No.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? Nothing to Day Thanks though .

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: He would think about of the cosines and leave .

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? Ello stanger what to you have for seal . I have Bread would you like some . what is the price :) . 10- per a bread . i would :) and accept . :) . Then walk off .

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I would say Were did you see them last and go hunting for it

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Why did I deny you?

Your definitions of powergaming and metagaming need expansion.

You need to improve on your biography, tell us about how your character feels and the events that had taken place in his life.

Improve on your ORQs, again, go more in depth about your character.

Improve on your spelling.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8

Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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