Tsuki-Rise: 2Nd Application

[Romulo 7]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

IamRomulo

How old are you?:

17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Eastern Standerd time. (EST)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I'm a normal high school senior who enjoys doing many different things. I like to listen to music and play video games, mainly rpg games. I love to read,learn, and spend most of my free time relaxing in my way.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Well since senioritis is kicking in, I may be able to spend 10-20 hours a week online.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

What RP means to me is that I have a chance to live the life I always wanted. To be able to do unimaginable beauty I can never do in real life. I become a completely different person, a person in the right world truly made for them. Created by them.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I was always into roleplaying so much that when I made stories up in my head and shared with my friends they would pick on me, but I would just ignore and laugh with them. I like to write, and in writing I always roleplay.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-Gaming is when you use information that your character is not suppose to know. Ex: Information from real life, or website.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

Power-gaming is unrealistic roleplaying. When something happens to you, you have to think of a realistic way to get out of that situation. you can not magically just be freed from that situation.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect an amazing community, where people stick to roleplaying and we all just have fun.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I played on servers that I hosted my self with a couple of friends, and servers that my friends also hosted. The biggest server I've played on was one which at its peak was 100 players online. I wanted more experience so I searched for a different server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I've read, I understand, and I agree.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes.

How did you hear about us?:

I was browsing for different servers, and I stumbled upon Lotc.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?:

1698

In-Character:

Character Name:

Tsuki-Rise Girthian

What Race are you?:

Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

God…the name of the creator of my world, the one I’m supposed to love for giving me life, for letting me walk on this world of ours, for giving me the ability to protect myself. But what kind of life am I living? A life without the feel of family and love? An opportunity to walk on such evil ground? The power to kill people so I can live? The power of killing a mugger who is only trying to support his family? I spit at the name of God, the man who has cursed me. My name is Tsuki Rise a beautiful name given to me by my parents, a name I do not deserve anymore. I have light brown hair,and blue eyes, both from my mother. I was born in a village in Salvus, Asulon, as where both my parents and loving little brother. We enjoyed our time together playing, and farming, always repairing and expanding. It wasn’t the perfect life with the war going on, a war I was born into. My village was never bothered until that dreadful day. The day Iblees reached my village.

My brother and I were working on the farm, finishing up our watering, of the few crops we had. I was holding my brother on top of my shoulders, to reach the top plants, when a loud, teeth grinding sound dropped us both to the ground. A sound so loud I felt I was going deaf. We felt a heat wave reach us. The ground started to shake, and we ran inside the house covering our ears in pain, dropping my wooden sword my mother carved for me, I was not brave enough to go back and reequip it. My mother and father were not inside the house, so we looked out the window, and all we see is a tremendous fire wave come towards our village. Our house quickly consumed by fire; burning my father’s hard work away, and sending him quickly inside the house to save my brother and I. I feel a force knock me down hard, and I go blind for a second as I gain my vision I notice a hand sticking under the collapsed part of the roof. The hand was not moving, and my body was numb in the fear of losing my beloved father.

He was gone and I knew it. Maybe it was the heat of the fire, but I couldn’t cry. I wanted to but I couldn’t. My mother, my sweet mother ran inside and I fell to her knees. She was a strong woman and knew what she had to do. She gathered my brother and me, and we headed out, as soon as we step outside what used to be our home came crashing down. My mother never looked back and just kept on running, clamping our hands tightly. We got to the town square where a bunch of people where standing crying over their lost ones. We had no choice but to stay here for the night. I would never forget this night. Every time I close my eyes to sleep I relive this horror, this horror God himself put upon me! The dead attacked us going through our archers, and warrior’s easily. Slaying them open, and having no mercy. My mother grabbed us once again and ran, ran as far as we can. There where to many around us. No escape. My mother looked me in the eyes, and said “take care of your bother, and behaves your selves, I love you, your father loves you and one day we will be together again”. She pushed us to the side, and the swarm attacked her. A scream…I cannot describe. My brother and I had no choice but to run. He kept trying to go back, he wanted mommy to hold him, and there was no time to tell him. We went back to town square since we did not have anywhere else to go.

It was a massacre, the dead painting our woodland village red. Even in the night I was able to see it all. We enter the church where more of the dead laid around. I opened a cupboard and we stayed there for the night. My brother fell asleep but I couldn’t even close my eyes. The images just kept coming back. It was morning and the Nations men where cleaning up the body. We walked around and ended back into our house. Only ashes remained. I fall to my knees and weep. Weep for what felt like hours. My brother and I lay on the corner cuddling each other. I heard horns. It felt like it was from a far distant, but I heard as if it was next to me. All of a sudden I felt weak. I felt like I lost life, and I black out. I awake hearing someone yell “I found a survivor here!” and my vision failing me, I see a man grab my brother and take him away from me. I reach my hand out, but I cannot scream for him to bring me back my brother, the last thing I’ve got left. I felt a change in heart. Evil now flows through Aegis, and it now flows through me. Still too weak to stop the man, I lay there in pain and in my own tears. A woman rushes by me and see that in fact I’m alive. I tell her about my brother. She insists that she needs to treat me first. I tell her I need to get to him and she doesn’t understand. I make haste, and see my wooden sword, with a few burn marks. I pick it up and tell her to back away, I run in the same direction the man who took my brother went to. The town square is filled with people asking if anyone has seen their loved ones, crying, being treated. I cannot see my brother. I haven’t seen him since that day, the worst day of my life.

Years later and I have finally accepted the evil inside me. The evil has awakened. I must survive on this cursed world; a test set by God himself, test that I’m going to do on my own. Kill when I have to kill and steal when I have to steal. God himself better watch out. You can only bend a soul so far until it snaps back. I now travel the land, living off whatever I can find, doing any job anyone offers to me. My weapon is my sword. My name is Tsuki-Rise from Salvus, Asulon, I’m 18 years old and my goal is revenge and everyone. I’m currently working as a woodcutter, and sell whatever I can my hands on to the black market. Rags are the only thing I can afford. This is a part time, till I can prepare for my real goal. A innocent soul gone bad.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

To survive and achieve whatever it is to fill his heart again.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

A sword, ever since he was young he played with wooden swords, it is the only thing he trusts.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Woodcutting. His parents where both into the crafting business and some rubbed of him, but he wants to make killing his talent.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Deep down, he can sense what he is doing is all wrong, but every night when he relives the horror he justifies it.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

I decided it is not my problem, and tried to walk past them. They decided they wanted trouble, and I told them I didn't want any trouble. They step closer, and I place my hand on my sword. "Back off I said, I don't want any trouble" I restated. As they step closer, I pull my sword a few inches out of its scabbard. They still kept coming closer, I pull it all out, to show them I mean business. One guard decides they don't need to make a fuss now, "we have enough from the haffling, it doesn't look like this guy isn't carrying anything anyways" They turn back to the hafflling, and I walk away.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Me: "I need my handled fixed..."

Man: "No problem, that'll be 200 minas.

ME: "WHAT! I'll fix it my self" *walks away.*

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Me: *decides he isn't going to take it, does not know why...*

*sees portrayed of happy family...decides to take it.*

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Me: "Got any food?"

Man on post: "Yes but to sell"

Me: "Never mind, I'll find something out there..." *takes sample cooling off* *walks away*

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

My character decides to join the cause, not to help people, but for the money. The men who decided to help all gather in front of the town entrance and we make haste. We get to the road and there are the bandits waiting for us. We see a few of them, and think it will be easy picking. Out of nowhere more bandits pop out, outnumbering us. We stand our ground. Blood is flying everywhere, and I'm against one guy. He aims his bow at me, but misses, a lucky shot on my part. I run towards him and he blocks my swing with the bow breaking it. He is now arm less, and he is on the floor stunned by the blow. I stab him in the neck, and fall down breathless. I get back up and see that the bandits, are retreating. "I was just getting warmed up" I yell, knowing that one bandit was to much for me. We go back to town with a few men missing but, its less people to split the reward with.

[Rhisereld 317]

I'm sorry, but you have been Denied. This doesn't mean you won't get on the server, it just means your application needs to be improved or changed first!

Your name should be appropriate for LotC - not japanese.

Your biography only explores what happened to your family. Write about your character's skills, weaknesses, likes, dislikes, ambitions, childhood, etc. Salvus was never attacked by the Undead, it is in Asulon. Only Aegis was attacked by Undead. You cannot be evil, steal or murder without a villain application. Also, your character has no reason for turning evil. If this was a villain application, it would be denied anyway.

The armoured warriors harassing the halfling are not guards. Some parts of this open response question are not clear and are too vague. Give detail and be explicit.

Your second and third open response questions only contain dialogue. You need more detail than that. Some parts don't make sense or are difficult to understand.

Your last open response question is oddly phrased and it is unclear what's happening.

[Rhisereld 317]

Moved to Denied Forum