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Minecraft Account Name: My account name in minecraft is timeZ.

How old are you?: I am 13 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:I live in canada,at quebec so our timezone is:GMT-6h(CTD).

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I believe i am good at english but its my second language so i may also make mistakes if i write fast but i am good enought to only be the best of my class.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Me,i like eating food from different originalities but i c'ant eat things that is bad for my religion,that because i am a muslim.I go to karate school,i am half yellow half white,but i also like doing karate,its fun and its exercise!.I like playing good online mmorp games.I also like minecraft because of its gameplay and the fun it also brings!

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I may play from 14 hours to 35 hours a week but it can sometimes be lower and i may miss things.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Basically,its more about pretending as a character you wanted to be with others without exagerating with things like qualities or doing rp moves all in the same.Example:In an orc kingdom,a strange person passes in front of a lonely orcish warrior named Chuck Knockrock,wearing a black hooded costume but this costume seems familiar,(then remembers)It must come from the dark brotherhood dealers!(goes after the dealer),(tries to pounces and immobilize)but the dealer was too fast so he counters the attack.'... and stuff like that

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I did play servers and did rp's and i know

about it quite well.Example of place of rp i know (in roblox)its a place named "warrior cat lake territory" by "mandaka".but i also roleplayed in a website about the book "warriors".and i know the bad thing or the things not to do in roleplaying.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-gaming in an unrealistic way of roleplaying,wich means you use"out of character information"for "

in the character stuff".Example,"a roleplayer tells his friend co-ordinates of his house and you use it to steal his stuff or grief if its allowed or use x-ray for minerals or other things like it."

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power gaming is pretending without letting the other respond or counter it.A bit like this example:The police officer:pounces robber,puts handcuffs.(i mean the robber can do nothing to counter or do something about it.Or in an rp sword fight:(Whoever types) "slaches neck and kills"=powergaming.".

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect the server to be the best server i will be in wich it means there will be no dumb people.Because it requires an application.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played GMR craft, it was'nt good because there were people spawncamping and things like that and admins or mod or whatever did nothing to it so i chose this rp server and i played some other servers but even some roleplaying ones but they were'nt looking that good.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes, and i respect them.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes,i do promise to abide the rules,laws and others.

How did you hear about us?:First,i got bored of bad servers i played.Then i started searching good servers in websites and videos in youtube,then i saw "lord of the craft trailer" by the youtuber "reckreations".It was epic so i chose to join.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?:I voted once,i were the 1976th person to vote but idk how to get the vote number, sorry that is all i can tell for it.

In-Character:

Character Name: His name is Asgard Lionheart.

What Race are you?:Asgard is a human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):He is a northerner.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

I lived peacefully with my mother Sheyla Lionheart and and my father Kyle Lionheart.When i got 10 years old my..."starts to cry"...family got*sniff* attacked by unknown things in midknight,just when i were deep asleep *thinks angrily*(if i wern't asleep...)*sniff*continues*and my parents got killed by them and when my mother and father just died,their blood splattered on me, and they thought i died but i survived and soldiers breached into my house*"sniff sniff"*they found me,defended me,woke me and hesitanly and sadly told me that the undead killed my family.*starts to remember more of his past.*

Until then,a noble chose to raise me,so i learned clean language.He taught me how to draw paintings, write and read,the trick to design and other things nobles do like sword fighting,he trained me alot in this,because the northeners people are the best sword-fighters and all people from the northerners,must know how to use a sword at least.*ahhh(and smiles happyly)*We had good times too and he told me:(this will be your new life,well have more of these good times,forget the past,look at the present,never seek revenge,it will always bring sadness*then thinks(your making a small mistake father,you could seek revenge, it will not bring sadness exept if you think it will revive someone you loved )*.when i got 17 years old,we designed a mirror,using silver metal,we looked at ourselves like we looked at clean water because my family before were a bit poor in riches,we didnt have mirrors and we had no time to look on the river because of our works and needs,when i looked at it,,my height were 6ft tall i had yellow hair,i were muscular and i had that appearance when i were 20 years old then and before i were training hard because i wanted to be in a sword-fighting tournament and after these training,he accepted and listed me in a sword-fighting tournament,i won the gold trophy in the sword-fighting tournament but i were impatient.*thinks(good thing i were but i wish i were more)*.So i hurried home to tell my adoptive father but he got assasinated *when he remembers that,...*Gets in a really bad mood and thinks(why will my life always be miserable?)*... by an assasin that wanted my adoptive father's riches and that happened in front of my eyes,so i killed him trying to defend him. but i could'nt prove that i were'nt the criminal so i paid my false crimes *angrily thinks(good thing i killed the assasin)*but then i sweared in the names of my parents that i will fight for justice,peace and truth and i will take revenge.I like being in a peaceful state,i loved eating beef and chiken,and i loved all my parents.Sometimes people tells me that im very courageous but these word embarrases me because i am shy and i hate thinking that in better.

I dont hurt helpless people and i try to help or save all the helpless people i can.So now i am a lonely warrior.without all I had in the past and I seek revenge and then ill seek peace,truth and justice.after i got out of jail *ahhh i hated when i were at jail, but i learned very good lessons from the old criminals that got stopped and i should than them for the supprt they gave me for my patience.(he thought happily for what they have done as goods.)* i am 32 years old and im 7 feet i got a bit more muscular than before i got into jail.Started to work hard to get minas and have food, weapons and armor, but his job were giving poorly minas so i bought a very thin plated armor,my sword came from my father and my helmet came from my adoptive father.And i will continue to complete my amnitions.

What is your Character's ambitions?:I sweared all my parents that i will

fight for justice,peace and truth and i will seek revenge for what these undeads have done!

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):*smiles* Ohh, my sword , its my best companion, wich saved me, defended me from many things, its blade is sharper than the sharpest blade ever and i call it:"The bringer of wisdom".

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?*says embarrased* They say that i am very skilled at swordsmanship.

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Welcome to Lord of the Craft, timeZ! Unfortunately, your application is not suitable for acceptance on Lord of the Craft, thus was denied. Do not fret! You have a total of 2 application attempts left to achieve implemented (whitelist) status on our heavily populated, high-standard server! You will also not be able to post another application 24 hours from: 18/03/12 (time of this post, located above). Below I shall outline outstanding aspects of your application which specifically affected the decision making system.

  • Inconsistent Lore
  • Incomplete Application

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