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Minecraft Account Name: short_beard

How old are you?: I’m 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I’ve used it all my life.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I’m an all-round nice guy and I love minecraft. I do lots of sports for my school and I am very active.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 10- 15 hours a week, I hope

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying Is where you pretend you are something your not and you make a story for this person you created.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I’ve played runescape and skyrim.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-gaming is where you use something your learned about someone in-game. Like there real name that you might learn if you new the person or teamspeak.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: When you do something to another player with letting them respond or react to your actions. An example would be: you are fighting someone in-game and you emote “ Tornac punches his opponent across the face leaving him breathless.

What do you expect this server will be like?: From what my friend have told me its pretty sweet.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Cox craft- sever shut down forever.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I do

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I do

How did you hear about us?: My friend told me.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: No .

In-Character:

Character Name: Barnabus

What Race are you?:Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): wood elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): I am one of the wealthy merchants of Laurelin you wake up from another peaceful night of sleep. You head of toward you both where you begin another busy day of work. As the sun rises into to sky you realize its almost lunch. So you head off to go get a pork chop. As your is the woods on your way to the local tavern for a drink, you see a flash of brown in the woods. As you continue you way toward the tavern you sense something near. You turn around and the last thing you see is the ugly face of an orc!

When you regain conciseness, you find that a band of thieving ors has captured you! As they force you to walk with them at there brisk pace you hear that tonight you are going to be cooked and eaten you supper! You rack your brain for all the possible way of escape, but none appear. As the orcs start to set up camp at the end of the day, you notice something gleaming in the dirt where you were flung. It’s a sharp piece of metal. How it got there is a mystery to you. Be you don’t think twice before your start to cut yourself free. you move stealthily towards a abandoned bow of an orc. Just before you are about to turn and fire at the orcs they spot you.

As fast as you can you grab the bow and run for the wood but you cant seem to lose them. So a quick as you can you climb the nearest tree, the orcs not far behind. When you get to the first branch you take out the bow and fire 3 volleys of arrow. Taking out most of the orcs. As you aim at the last orc your branch suddenly breaks! In mid air you pivot to face the orc as you drop to the ground. You pull back on your bow and release with a swish then a crunch of a breaking skull. Then with bow In hand you decide you will be much happier traveling around the land taking down orcs and living by your wits alone.

What is your Character's ambitions?: to rid the world of orcs.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): bow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Staying hidden.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):post-39956-0-80695800-1332979424_thumb.p

Other Information about your Character: He is part of the royal family. (But he doesn’t know.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? I would nock two arrows on my bow and take down the warriors. And leave without being seen.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? I’ll take your cheapest cloak.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: I would look and the items enviously, but move on.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond? Kind sirs, could you hire me I will work for food till we get to the next town.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guards have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: He ally’s himself with the guard and after there threw accepts his reward gratefully.

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 Unfortunately, your application has been denied. But do not fret! You can resubmit your application after 2 hours, after fixing the following issues!

-Several sentences (ex. your description of metagaming) are grammatical trainwrecks.

-Your biography switches from first person to second person, and isn't particularly original.

-Your open-response answers are too short.

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