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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Dylan9889

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: (-0 GMT)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Good Language. Half good grammar.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I class myself as a hardcore gamer. I am a funny person who s always up for a laugh. I also enjoy Downhill Biking.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Around 50hours or so. More this week as I'm off school until the 16th of April

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplay to me is being another person and living his/her life the you want it. It is also making friends and having fun in the hours you are absorbed in it.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: Well I have played on two SA-MP(San Andreas Multi-player) RP server they were NGG and MT-G. Also some zombie apocalypse servers.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is using OOC info ICly or IC info OOC e.g While I was watching one of potato's videos and someone walked up to him saying Hi Youtube is MG.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming is forcing something on someone without letting that person have time to respond.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect the server to be fun making friends experience and also a serious side as this is rp server. I hope to have a good time as the bottom line.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Well the last server II played on was my own I tried to make a rp server with it and when it didn't work out I applied for here. Before that was MT-G and it was a no pvp server but then someone placed lava under me and stole all my **** so I quit because it wasn't managed very well.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I shall stick by the rules of thy server,TeamSpeak and Fourms.

How did you hear about us?: Through PotatoOrgy's Videos and Live streams

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No I have not made a application before.

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):Not Yet.

In-Character:

Character Name: Dolgrim

What Race are you?: Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Dolgrim was brought up in a place called Kwi it was a mountain town that spent most of it's history mining for diamonds and coal as it was a very poor town. When we had enough of thy poverty my father gathered enough Minas that we moved to a country home it t'was small but it did it's job,My father did not want to let us get moved back to Kwi so he mined for longer time than before but this was what killed him in the end, He contracted a very deadly disease that is still unnamed even tho it is 10years later now,On his death bed he told me to go into his room and open his locked chest and bring the contents to him. What I saw in that chest shocked me, It was a full diamond sword sharper than anything I had seen before when I came back to him he told me it was his fathers and that he wanted me to keep it and give it to my son when I'm older. He said "Be careful with thy sword son." "It will not last forever" After that I locked it in a display case In my mothers house and have never touched it, I have noticed that it said on the handle "Use It when the time is right Son".

Ten years on I am travelling to a new kingdom on my own,I am looking for the dwarfs so I can live with my brothers I think I fit the picture Black eyes,Ginger beard and hair a leather hat and trousers. I hope I find them as If I don't I'm afraid I may die,The problem Is that I heard the old kingdom was torn through by dragons and that the new is hidden In the mountains. I'm Afraid I have a long path ahead of me.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To one day have a family with a wife and kids and live in a good land with a big house with minas to spend.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): My favourite tool shall be my Diamond Sword that my father gave to me on his death bed he told me to use it wisely as it will not last forever which is one of the reasons you shall never see me using it.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? He is a good swordsman put also loves the joys of mining with his fellow brothers.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): http://gyazo.com/fee35d65536a8647a8806a5114fca20a

Other Information about your Character: He Can handle his ale.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? I walk past them and when I'm up the path a bit I shout back "Hey ye filthy cowards why don't ye pick on someone yur own size" The two men aware of this threat turn and start running at me, I nod at the halfling telling him to run. He runs off and I lose the two men by running through a forest.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: My charactor looks around to see if there is any sign of life around he then looks in the chest and changes his mind because he knows it would be wrong to steal from others.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

I respond with " Hail kind sir may you any food that I may eat as I am starving from wandering in the forest for the last two days"

The man says "Here have this loaf of bread" as he hands it over.

I take It and start eating straight away, "Thank you sir,Do yo know the way to the main path?".

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I say "Sir I hear you are looking for help to get rid of ye bandits that occupy our road into this town"

Leader "Yes we are, I will give you 20 minas if you help us"

Dolgrim Thinks "Ok I will be happy to help"

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Evaluating.

[UltraRed 78]

Unfortunately, your application has been denied! You may reapply after 24 hours, after fixing the following issues:

-Your RP name (Dolgrim) is oddly similar to the MC name of another player (Goldrim). While I'm not denying you for this, I recommend you change it, to avoid confusion.

-Your character needs a last name.

-You have actually made an application before. Two, in fact, both from July.

-Your grammar and spelling could be cleaned up in general. Replacing "tho" with "though", etc.

-You need to respond to all of the open response questions.

-Your biography could be expanded. Try to include the crossing over from Aegis to Asulon!

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