Awesomesnow's Applaction

[AwesomeSnow 0]

This is my applaction to go on to the server:

In-Character:

Character Name: lrileth Snow

What Race are you?: Human.

What Sub-Race are you? I have none.

Biography: Snow is a tall 24 year old, beautiful (but deadly) girl. Although not the smartest person around, she can deal with many situations very quickly; she also does not like it when people mess about with her because she has such a short temper and if you mess with her you will regret it she also has a story:

Snow once was a well respected princess of the town named bellaere, they once respected her, but quickly the town had been taken over by thieves and criminals, so she attempted to fend off the attacker’s but unfortunately they where over run.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To be know across the land as a knight.

What is your character’s favourite tool? Sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? My most skilled talent is fighting monster’s.

A screenshot of your skin: My skin is attached to the file.

Information about your Character: She is not afraid to get herself in to the action and also to help and protect the people.

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: AwesomeSnow

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: England

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a young excitable Girl and also not afraid to be in a conversation or let people know about me, I am also easy to make smile with jokes and hate seeing people being made fun of because I know how it feels.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 7-10 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is where you play a character which you create on what you would like them to be someone you wish to be.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have been on other server’s which were very Roleplay.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is another way of saying strategy so to me if you have a enemy who you cannot take on you would run away and then find somewhere to hide before he runs past and them ambushing them.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming is a style of interacting with games or game-like system.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be very enjoying and very interesting and also to be a huge amount of keeping me entertained playing as someone I could relate to.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: It was a yogscast server which I left because all of the people there where very racist but also because it was a RP server and they was not very good at Roleplaying.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I do agree to the rules of the server, Forum and Teamspeak.

How did you hear about us?: I heard of you from a friend who told me the server was one of the best RPG server’s on the internet.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No I have not made a application before now.

Open-Response-Questions:

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? She would go up to the warrior’s and ask what they are doing and if it was just stealing from the person then she would help out the person.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? She would say “I would like to see what items you have for sale, friend.”

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond? She would first look around to see if it actually abandoned and if so they would take it.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond? She would say hello back and say how are you? And have a little chat with them then ask for food because she has been traveling in the wilderness for a while and have got lost.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guards have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offers their support. How does your character act on this information?:She goes and find’s the town guards and says that she will help them.

Hope it is ok for me to get on the server.

[Thu'um 530]

Please reapply in 24 hours.

Your application was denied for:

- Your Metagaming Definition is Incorrect.

- Your Powergaming Definition is Incorrect.

- Your Biography needs a lot more effort--

Biography: Snow is a tall 24 year old, beautiful (but deadly) girl. Although not the smartest person around, she can deal with many situations very quickly; she also does not like it when people mess about with her because she has such a short temper and if you mess with her you will regret it she also has a story:

Snow once was a well respected princess of the town named bellaere, they once respected her, but quickly the town had been taken over by thieves and criminals, so she attempted to fend off the attacker’s but unfortunately they where over run.

Try to expand your biography, have fun with it, make it creative -- experiment and develop with your character's motives, personality, and ambitions.

- Your Open Response Questions need more effort.

One sentence responses lack detail and could be expanded much more.

Take the advice I gave you in regards to your biography.

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[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum