Eirik_Boy's App

[eirik_boy 1]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: My minecraft name is slettis1999

How old are you?:I am 13 years old

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: I come from Norway

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I talk english pretty good

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a 13 old boy who likes to play games. I really want to join this server because I heard so much good stuff about it.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:19-24 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is the act of stepping into the shoes of a different person (character); becoming them, you could say. You take on their temperaments, responsibility, personalities, and memories. It is to take on an entirely separate identity limited only by your mind.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

None. But I have seen on some YouTuber’s that is on this server and how they don’t. So I can RP.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-gaming is knowing something your character does not know. Ex. Your In-Game character looks for a hidden treasure and then you (yourself) look on YouTube and looking where it is.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

When you Roleplay something that may be impossible to do, or leaving another player no chance to make a comeback. EX: You are walking on a gravel path after being shopping and suddenly a thief comes out from a bush and head locks you. He then pulls out his dagger and slits your throat. This is power gaming because he gave the other player no time to react.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect that is server to be a very very good.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I’we played on very many servers before and I leaved them because nothing happened.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I have read the rules

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I promise

How did you hear about us?: I heard about you from a good friend that told me about it.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: nopemany

In-Character:

Character Name: Esiquel_Bearclaw

What Race are you?: Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Northner

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Esiquel was born of his mother that died when he was 1 year old. His dad learned him to shout with the bow and trained him to hunt for deer’s. Their house was in north-west in the Realm of Hanseti. When he was about 5 or 6 years old, their house was raided by some bandits. But they did not find their secret chest. In the chest they had the most of their money some food and drinks. When they came home from hunting, they noticed that they had been robed. So they took up their secret chest and took the money and all the other stuff and they moved to Capital of Hanseti, and then they bought a small house. His father got a job at a butcher and Esiquel was still out hunting for deer’s. After many years when Esiquel was 19, their city was under attack from the undead. And Esiquel was coming home from his daily hunt and he saw the city burn. He ran to his father’s house and checked if he was all right. But he was not. He had many arrows in his chest. Then Esiquel ran outside and began to fight the zombies that the undead have called.

After some minutes with fighting the clock tower was shoot by a catapult and it fell down. Unluckily Esiquel stood very close to the tower. When it came down Esiquel was hit by many stones. After the battle every one that was alive, but hurt was taken to the Cloud Temple of Asoulon. (He starts his adventure here)

What is your Character's ambitions?:

To fight of the undead because they killed his father.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Bow and arrow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

To aim with his bow

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

My character is afraid for cave spider. He is strongest against zombies because their slownes.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small Halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? He jumps in a bush and looks what’s 11going on. He sees the Halfling and the two armored guys. But the Halfling had a knife against his throat. Then Esiquel took up his bow and he tried to shoot with two arrows at the same time. And he hit them booth. Then he walks up to the Halfling and says:’’take back your stuff and go home’’.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? I am looking for a new string for my bow and I need more arrows. Do you might have some?

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

He leaves the chest alone.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Can I please have some food and water? I have been wandering in the wilds for a long time now without food and water. I have a little amount of money.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: He offers himself to help and when its all over he says: ‘’ keep the money, you might use them to hire more men’’.

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Why did I deny you?

First of all, and probably the biggest thing you had wrong, was that your biography included 'powergamey' elements, such as a 6 year old hunting deer. It also did not follow the lore regarding the move to Asulon, as your character is '19' years old. We have been in Asulon for much longer than that, around 30 years I believe, and a number of issues come from this:

~ There are no undead in Asulon, they were all left in Aegis.

~ Your character would have experienced some feeling, and would have had thoughts that would generally have to be included in that application.

~ Your ambitions would not be to kill off the Undead.

One sentence responses are not adequate in the ORQ section, we need to be able to know that you know how to roleplay, and we need to know what your character sees, thinks, smells and feels in those situations.

Also, you need to include a skin.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8

Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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