haydos 1 Share Posted April 20, 2012 Minecraft Account Name:Haydos1998 How old are you?:14 Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Sort of Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am dedicated to minecraft i love to mine and i don't just sit on my computer for twelve hours at a time but i like to play for about 4 hours maybe twice a day How much time could you be on the server weekly?:18 What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: It is a type of acting what you have to do is stay in character base on the time it is set at like a move if it is an old western move you don't go lol or omg because that is just not the way the place is set out What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: not much but i do enjoy acting In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta-gaming is were a player speaks out of character In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Not really shore What do you expect this server will be like?: An amazing role playing experience What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I will still play other server but not as much as this one. Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I do How did you hear about us?: by a couple of my friends Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: no In-Character: Character Name:haydos What Race are you?: human What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):When i was about 6 yer old i was always into swords. When i was about 7 years of age my mother was taken away but these men in black robes so i had to go and live with my uncle and he also liked swords just as much as i did he was also very good if i must say. Over the years he trained me and over the years i had became quit a skilled swords man. when i was about seven teen i had gone i a couple of fake swords man tournaments and surprisingly came first after that i had gone in many other tournaments then i had decided to join you What is your Character's ambitions?: become an knight and fight for alras What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Swords and pickax What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? swords A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): Other Information about your Character: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypercrit 237 Share Posted April 20, 2012 Why did I deny you? You had no powergaming definition... You must answer this question. You just need to. Your metagaming definition was wrong... Your metagaming definition did not properly show and outline what you need to know. Use examples, make sure that we are aware of your exact knowledge of the term, and how to avoid using it. Without that, we cannot accept this definition, because this shows that you may unknowingly use it ingame as you are not certain of the uses and meaning of the term. You didn't include the ORQs... These also need to be included. Shows you can RP. There was no skin... You need to include a skin on your application. You need to upload a screenshot of your skin to an image upload site such as imgur, then copy and paste the link into your application. Your English wasn't great... Your english in this application was not the greatest. It included spelling and grammar errors. An easy way to fix this up is to first write up your application in a Word Document, then use the spellchecking feature. It should make your app much more legible. Your biography was a bit powergamey People, things, animals, everything has a weakness. Quirks, flaws, you name it, everything has their kryptonite. Your character didn't seem to have this trait, these weaknesses,, and because of that, it would be unfair to allow him to interact with other people, due to the fact that roleplay with him would not be fun. Some Places That May Help You Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/ Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005 Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/ A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/ A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/ Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8 Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/ Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/ Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial. If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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