Dennis Orc Application

[Dorg'ash 1]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Dennisomgwtf

How old are you?:

seventeen.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Sweden, GMT+1

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes I’ve studied English for about 9 years.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Im a nice guy who loves playing video games and just taking it slow and easy.

When i dont studie i play video games or read books.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

As previously stated. When i dont have to study i play games so roughly 3-5 hours a day.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying for me is when you put yourself into another person’s role.

When you role-play you become someone else, maybe you role-play as a huge evil troll but in real life

You’re a nice charming lad.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I’ve role-played on world of warcraft private server and retail, also on warcraft3 where you have to role-play several units at once.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta gaming is when someone uses ooc information to act in character.

Example: I tell my friends over teamspeak that someone is trying to kill me and that they need to help.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

Power gaming is mainly when you role-play as being this all mighty god like being.

Example: I’m entering a text battle with a guy and he is forcing his opponent to preform actions against their will. forcing them to get stabbed or hit.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I want this server to be good. I have chatted with some people over the teamspeak and they seem very friendly. But I’m not expecting something grand.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

The only server i played on was The Kingdomsmc.com i played on it from the start and to the end.

I did not choose to leave it but a lot of things went down and a lot of people left in anger.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I’ve read the rules and they seem solid.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Sure i promise you have my word as a wiking. But what good is a promise on the internet?

How did you hear about us?:

You are a well-known server and I’ve been wanting to check you out for quite a while now.

I also have some old friends here that gave me the final push to applying.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

No this is the first one.

In-Character:

Character Name:

Dorg'ash

What Race are you?:

Orcish

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

I have demon blood in me.(if that counts for anything)

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

He came into this world as a nomad traveling the great Sunmoth desert. A small unknown tribe of nomadic orcs that was crossing the great Sunmoth desert had stopped to set camp near a small oasis location unknown. The hour was dark when it occurred, cultists! They came in the middle of the night through a sandstorm and as quickly as they appeared they were gone but the nomads had lost their youngest.

Dorg the newborn had been stolen by cultists who gave him the name Ash. From ash we have come and to ash we shall return. They began to teach him their ways of life, how to write and how to read. The cultists had prepared for the ritual for several years to infuse their great weapon with demonic powers and then binding him to their will. Not aware of their motives Dorg’ash agreed to become their weapon of destruction. He trained for years as the cultists prepared for their attack on the great kingdom of Salvus. They kept his tongue sharp but his blade sharper and on the night of the ritual he was completely calm, he had full trust in his masters.

As the ritual began his skin started to turn red like the colour of blood, this was the first sign of failure but the cultists pressed on and continued with the demonic ritual. Dorg’ash began to lose faith in his masters as the ritual started to hurt his body and mind, he heard a voice echo through his head “Kill them!” it shouted. In his mind was a powerful demon known as Khoz’rath demon of wrath. Khoz’rath began to fill his head with anger and hate, he was making Dorg’ash crazed and one night it went blank. Khoz’rath had gained full access to his mind and in his wrath he slew his masters and broke the unholy chains that they had used to bind him to this place but just as he was to break out of the dark dungeon a calm soothing voice spoke through his head: “Fear not for I mean you no harm. You have become twisted by a great evil, but I sense great purity within your hearth therefore I shall free your mind from chaos but you must find your people only they can free your body.”

Not knowing anything of the outside world Dorg’ash walked out with nothing but his clothes on a quest to find his people and to find peace in his troubled life. Not seeing any other creature than the human cultists in robes he was in shock when he first saw another being it was a short being in the shape of the cultists, a Halfling! When the little Halfling laid eyes on Dorg’ash he ran in terror shouting “Monster! Demon! ORC! Run!” Dorg’ash was confused by the little Halflings reaction but did not care too much for the little creature.

Now he walks to find his people and rightful place in this world.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

To find peace and to lift the curse that lies upon him.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Dorg’ash keeps his tongue shard but his blade sharper (sword)

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Dorg’ash is skilled with swords and axes swinging both with great might.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

He is seeing everything for the first time and he is also unaware of the orcish language.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Dorg’ash would ask them what is going on out of pure curiosity but if he knew what they were up too he would have stopped and helped the little Halfling.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well-dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Dorg’ash would ask about his people and locations. Dorg’ash is always looking for information about his people.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Dorg’ash would take the treasure and claim the sword as his own.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Dorg’ash would ask for spare food but he would also offer his services to pay for the food and shelter.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Dorg’ash would help them in combat willing to lay down his life for the people living in the town.

Dorg’ash was made for battle and will always participate in fights.

Thanks for reading -Dennis .H

[~ Ashdrek / CalmCrysis ~ 32]

Denied:

Overall, your application was alright, with a few mistakes here and there, which I am willing to overlook. I will point out that being a red Orc, you will be an outcast among all, and if that is what you wish, then that is fine. I will also point out that being demonic is not really found anymore, as cultists are hard to find and certainly would not attack nomadic Orcs. This may be the intended effect, but I believe that Orcs are quite strong and should be able to fight off a few flimsy cultists, and many Orc children are already fighting by the age of twelve, but that is only what I observed. I suggest you re-write your application as a normal Orc and this will widen your RP horizons.

I also noticed your ORQ's are a bit short, and with a bit of expanding, could be good.

Example:

Dorg’ash approaches the stall, cautious of the greedy eyes that watch him from all corners. he walks to the stall and begins his chat with the shopkeeper, making sure to avoid all mentions of the quantity of his coin purse, or the strength of his resolve. After a banter of friendly conversation, expected of someone of his caliber, he proceeds to purchase bread and water, essential for his trips, and proceeds to leave the stall, watching the eyes peering at his back as he leaves the marketplace.

That is a reasonably good ORQ. If you require a more detailed explanation of what needs doing, feel free to send me a PM, and I can help you through it...though not now, as it is 4:30am and I am hazy as it is.

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

Regards,

Arianne.

[~ Ashdrek / CalmCrysis ~ 32]

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