Darkwalker247 Application

[darkwalker247 4]

Minecraft Account Name:

darkwalker247

How old are you?:

14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

U.S.A +6

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I uderstand the english language at a very adapt level for my age but my spelling is not great i tend to not use periods for this im terribly sorry

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a gamer in hiding I cant help Role Playing it is just that i cant find a way to express my Role Playing needs I love it i can be who I wish i could be i can have powers that I can only obtain in dreams and i have a very active imagination.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Well for me i would be on this server for say 2hrs after i got out of school 2pm then around an hour later i would continue playing for as long as i could if i did not have plans so weekly i would say at least 90hrs a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Role playing to me is expressing your imagination me and my cousin as weird as it say some times role play not anything set we just make up stuff as we go on but not just powers and fighting we imagine whole worlds with diffrent conseps Role playing to me is simply escaping from reality to a knew world were u can do what you wouldnt normaly do in real life were you will be the couargeous on and be the person to stand up or the person to deside fate

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I have had a lot of Role Playing experience at first it was live action in my basement with my cousin then before minecraft i played runescape were i would not rpg but find ppl that would actully roleplay it was hard to find so i moved on to a game called roblox were i played a server called Medival Role-Play by techamadigas after doing that for a couple years say 2 i found minecraft and enjoyed it but i could not find role playing servers

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

I will be honest i had know idea what this met i saw it in a guidline for an application but still didnt fully grasp it so i googeled it so heres what i found it is when a player were to find outside knolege say as to be know were near to someone and still over hear what the password is or they get attacked and msg a friend on skype to help

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gamiing is:

as above i did not understand this exept for the post so once agin a return to google ok so i did have to read this over some times and i have decide what i think it means i think instead of following the story line a player would create queste for himself in order to maximize his powers and distrutive ability

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I have very high expections this is beacuse i found this out through a trailer done by Reckcreatinal who in my opinion is a high end guy who exepts nothing but the best so for him to make you guys a trailer i find that this must be a fantasic server

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

ever since i read the hunger games books about 7 months ago i have tried to find hunger games servers but when the movie came out it kinda ruined the actual hunger game servers beacuse they tried to create the movie server not the book server why am i leaving them well im not going to leave them untill i have actully got to play on this server but as i said before the quallity is droping in hunger games servers

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes i have read,understood and agreed to the rules

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:yes i hear by swear to abide by all rules set by server,form and teamspeak

How did you hear about us?:

I watched a trailler by Reckcreatinal on youtube and was drawn to this sight

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

no i have not

In-Character:

Character Name:Rellik

What Race are you?:human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Rellik at a very young age showed no care for othe pepole he would not allow himself to make personal connections but with that said he still had honor he would help a friend in need but on fatful day he saw a stranger in need he was being attacked by what looked like bandits so rellik drew a throwing knife and threw it with persison right in front of the bandit about to strike he knew that he was no match for the three bandits so as all three bandits approached him he took out 2 knifes and made a motion as if he was going to throw them the bandits cringed and in that moment he sprinted pass them grabed the man by the arm and ran until he could run no more the man who said his name was

Felix asked if he could stay with me so Rellik being only 17 asked his father his father said yes and treated Felix as a son for about a week until one day when Rellik came home he saw his fathers body Rellik was struck with fear after the loss of his mother to a disease he could not belive what was happening but in the shadows he saw Felix histaricaly laghing Rellik tried to confront him but then Felix came closer and stabed Rellik in the leg and shoved him to the ground and took flee.

For many 2 years Rellik searched for Felix but with no luck until he was walking aloung the forest and confronted by two thugs who stated that there boss wanted him dead Rellik had been training for 2 years and his skill had enhanced greatly with a short blade in one hand a smal throwing nife in other he prepared himself he threw the knife so suddenly the small thug did not expect it the blade landed right in his stomach the other thug now enraged trashed at him with it woden club Rellik tried to block it but his streagth did not match that of the large thug and his blade was shot out of his had the thug then hit im in the chest blood came from Relliks mouth but he dashed back and tried to think of a way to defeate the thug he drew to throwing knifes and charged as the thug was not expecting this but did not worry for his streagth was far suppirior he swung when Rellik came into distance but this was as Rellik planed he planted his foot and jumped back when the club pased the tugs chest Rellik threw the knife in his right hand landing in the thigh of the thug he walked over and demanded were his boss was and who he was the thug led him to the base and explained his leader Felix whe arriving to the base Felix greeted him out front as if expecting him all along Rellik shouted WHY DID YOU MURDDER MY FATHER Felix laghed and said do you know whats pathetic your father said i was ill and would not fight back when i stabed and cut into him do you know how he died he died of blood loss becuse of how many time i cut him HA Reliik charges a fierce battle rages out each move matched by another the wepon for Felix a long sword the wepon for Rellik two short blades each trying to find one weakness of the other in a battle of not just streagthn but of skill and stadegy but slowly Felix is losing for Rellik has more drive he fights more feirce and with more will to win after many hours both are exhusted and stare each knowing this will be the last strike Rellik turns both blades into a back and postion and crosses them into an X Felix holds his sword into a straigt double handed draw and cahrges Rellik draws back his arms and when Felix swings down throws both blades each landing on the chest of Felix Felixs body is stil standing there his blade inches above Relliks head then he falls Rellik limps away and finds a new home a home were he hopes no one can hurt him anymore

What is your Character's ambitions?:

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

his favorite is 2 short curved blades and throwing knifes

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

using long range items sutch as spear knifes etc

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

he is kind and loves animals in specific his pig porky

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

I confront the men not physiclly but inform them i will tell the athorities if they wish to continue to harras this man

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

I ask the man if he has any food if the man says yes i will see if it is a reasonable price and purchase it

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

I would simply walk away for i already have my supplies that i need and maby look around for the owner if i could stay the night

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

I asort wether they are a threat to my well being if they offer assistance i will exept but i do not wish to push my staying there

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

i Volenteer but not for there sake but for mine the reward is not essential for i have already a job but i would glady accept the offer as it is

I attached my char screen shot to this post i hope you enjoy reding this once agin im terribly sorry for not using periods and comas at points

[Brokencrowe 111]

Denied.

Overall, the applications appears as a wall of text, and is very difficult to navigate. Perhaps bolding your headings, or adding a bit of color will help with that.

The grammar and spelling is really messy, and should be addressed.

Your definition of roleplaying is very unclear, it might just the messy grammar.

Your definition of meta-gaming is unclear and seem to be more of examples than definitions.

Your definition of power-gaming is incorrect, a forum search should clear up any confusion.

Your biography is slightly confusing in some areas, you need to clearly justify whom is speaking in some areas, and who is doing what. I'd also like to say it needs some more development, the beginning feels a bit mixed, and by the end I am left not really knowing what is going on. It all goes back to the grammar.

I am not for certain but it appears as if your charater has demonstrated some villainous acts, this is not allowed without a villain application, which can be applied for a week after joining the server.

You have not answered all of the open response questions, and the formatting and grammar again is very hard to decipher. The answers themselves need to be more fully fleshed out, and written in full roleplay. The open response questions are designed for you to show us a clear depiction of how you will roleplay and who your character is. It is an oppurtunity to show your character off to us, the application team. You should take full advantage of that.

Looking into some of the well written guides and tutorials written by the dedicated members of our server would go a long way in helping you write your application.

You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox.

Good luck!

-Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

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