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Minecraft Account Name:

anakin0007

How old are you?:

I am 10 but do not take that as a bad thing. I have done alot of role playing but all the role playing i have done changed from fun to people killing anyone they want. I try to calm them down but they dont listen when that happens!

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Eastern time U.S.A

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes i do. I have A's in my spelling and language .

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am someone who really enjoys role playing and video games. I am nice to every one and I do not care what others think.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Possibly 4-24 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying is about being whoever you want to be without being judged. You can be anything you want when you are roleplaying.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I had few experience. The only experience i had was trying to get people to stop being random and killing every one in sight even their own teamates in a role playing game.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-gaming is using is using previously gained knowledge for a game for your personal use. Such as a advantage because you have more experience of what you are doing.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

It is a focus of trying to get power as you are progressing through a game. This can sometimes frustrate other players that are looking to go through the story and interact with the world as the powergamer will not care about that.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect it to be a medieval role-play. I expect it to be very fun and organised because of how you dont want some people in the server.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I played on the legendary craft servers i didnt leave them i just wanted to have some roleplaying into my minecraft so i went here.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes i do.

How did you hear about us?:

I heard from you from the Photo Realism texture pack forum post (minecraftforum.net) They said that their rpg photo realism texture pack is ment for this server.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/52208-my-second-app/#entry399877

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraft...-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):

No i havent.

In-Character:

I would be a brave and helpful hero. I would be playing as a knight like player .

Character Name:

Exar

What Race are you?:

Human.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

No subrace.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

At the age of 6, my mother started taking me fishing. Oh how i loved fishing! At the age of 8 my father had to go fight in a war. He fought as a knight. When he came back he had a broken back. Now i was determined to become a knight and end this war. When i was 10 my dad started teaching me swordplay. Since he had a broken back, he had to give me specific instructions because he can not give me examples. At the age of 15 I was in a sword fighting tournament. I fought a very tough opponent. I was nearly defeated but he made a slip in his defence. This is when i took the final blow and i won!

When I was 18 I started to fight for others. If anyone needed help and if i was nearbye, I would help.

At the age of 20, The same person I fought in the tournament at the age of 15 was attacking a helpless old man! I had to fight him again. I started fighting him away from the man. I yelled to him "Run away. Quickly!". Then something horrible happened. I was stabbed in the knee! I was nearly defeated. However, this person did not learn from his mistake back in the day. When i was laying with my sword in my hand, He raised his sword up in the air leaving the chest wide open. I stabbed him their. However i stabbed him in a way that will not kill him but it will make him to weak to fight or move. That is when i picked him up over my shoulder and i destroyed his sword. Next, I took him to the guards. I told them what happened. Then they took him into prison for life. This is when i knew i had to train as hard as i can to become a knight! This is where the real adventure begins...

What is your Character's ambitions?:

My character's ambititons is to bring peace to my race. To end the wars.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Iron sword-Diamond sword (if I have one)

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Sword fighting.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

I hope this comes out right when i post this if it doesent tell me (i did post it just dont know if it will come on here)

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Other Information about your Character:

I enjoy fishing as a hobby.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Halfling: Help me! Someone help me!

Exar: GET AWAY FROM THE HALFLING YOU SCUM! (attacks warriors)

Halfling: (runs away)

Exar: (lures warriors away from cloud temple)

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Exar: what are you selling?

Merchant: Take a look at my stock. (shows what he is selling)

Exar: Hmm (picks up bread) how much does the bread cost?

Merchant: 20 Minnas

Exar: Ok i will buy it. (gives 25 minnas) Here. Take 5 extra.

Merchant: You are very kind. Nice doing buisness with ya.

Exar: You to. Have a good one!

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Exar: (sees a small hut) (looks in chest) Does anyone own this???

(echo echo echo...)

Exar: I should leave this alone. Someone might own this.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Exar: Nice to meet you to. Do you have any food i can buy? I have been starving for days.

Traders: Sure. BUT for a price...

Exar: How much?

Traders: How about lets say 30 minnas for this golden apple?

Exar: I will take it. Thank you so much.

Traders: Sure. Just hand over the minnas and i will give you the apple.

Exar: (hands over 30 minnas)

Traders: (gives exar the golden apple)

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Exar: Guards, I will help you take down the bandits.

Guards: Ok we last saw them 20 miles straight from here.

Exar: Ok but i am unarmed!

Guards: No worries (gives exar iron armor) Oh and here is the pay (gives 200 minnas)

Exar: Thanks. I will go to the location you just stated right away!

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Don't give up, I'm almost certain you'll make it in the future

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I really liked your biography's setting, and how you adapted it to your character, but I'd like to see more detail. Try going into your character's personality and their loyalties.

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Your Open Response Question-answers were fine, but I suggest to increase your chances next time, just increase the amount of detail your put in them.

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Remember, don't give up, I see promise here

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Please don't post for 24 hours

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