Xskullxcrusherx 2Nd Application

[xSkullxCrusherx 1]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:joedup

How old are you?:15 you

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:eastern standard time

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I do really well in English i know many things and have a good grip with proper English word.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Love minecraft. I am a big Minecraft player. Like to play computer games and do well in school.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 15 to 25 hours 2 to 6 daily

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying is a game in which you act as a certain charcater and you have to always be your character.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I have not had much experience but I know what it is and want to try it.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:When you use info that your character dose not know but you know and using it to your advantage. Like if you had to talk to someone and don't know who they are but really you know what they are like when you shouldn't.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:making your character unrealistically powerful unlike whats stated in your background like an example would be your a farmer in a battle with an extremely strong bandit and even though you had no training in swordsmanship you take out your sword and instantly cut his head off

What do you expect this server will be like?: A hear from my friend it is the best RPG server and I have high hopes for it.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on a few but haven't been good but this one looks a lot better and I want to try it.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes I do

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes I do

How did you hear about us?:From my friend

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:This is my first application

In-Character:

Character Name:Fallgrim Ironheart

What Race are you?:Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):A Cave Dwarf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Fallgrim was a member of clan Ironheart and a dwarf of immense will and courage, even from a young age living in his family home in Aegis his parents knew he was something special, always excelling in his knowledge of ores and gems throughout his education, and with a thirst for mining which nothing could quench. He made many friends during his childhood and was loved and adored by his family for the many minas he brought in with his trips down to the mines for ore.

When Fallgrim reached the age of 23 he joined the legion as an axeman, having learned few techniques from his family for axe use he was rather unskilled at first, recieving many scoldings from his superiors about poor form when wielding his axe. However he had a good eye and was a quick learner, so after a few weeks of extensive training and practice, he was one of the best warriors in his group and was considered for advanced training when the undead began attacking the city. Fires blossomed throughout the tunnels of Kal Urguan as necromancers and reanimated bodies charged through the tunnels slaying all in their path.

Fallgrim was in the middle of training when three zombies broke through the door and fell upon his fellow recruits, Fallgrim flung his axe into the creatures chest but it seemed to do little to stop it, grabbing another off of the shelf this time he landed the axe in the zombies neck severing its head and sending it rolling across the floor, he then seeing its effectiveness finished off the rest the same way as well. He checked to see if his fellow recruits were still alive but they were close to the door when the zombies arrived and were caught off guard, stepping over their bodies, he joins the panicked survivors of the attack on their run to the surface, once reaching it he sprinted to his family home to tell them the news. Upon reaching the cabin he spys a note telling him that his family fled to the verge, he sprints to the portal jumping in and racing to the surface where he sees his family gathering wood to begin the dwarves boat to Asulon, he stays with them throughout the undeads campaign across Aegis helping other refugees and adding on to portions of the boat until the day they began their journey. Many days passed and finally they spotted land, overjoyed with this he drank a pint of ale, fell and hit his head in his drunkeness, and woke up at the cloud temple not knowing what happened to his family.

What is your Character's ambitions?:To find out what happened to his family.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Pickaxes and Axes

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Loves to mine

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:None

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Fallgrim would ask what is going on and try to help by either paying off the warriors or challenging them and try to help the small halfing.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Fallgrim would take a look at the wares and noticing a pristine iron sword on display inquire about it, "How much for the sword there?" he says in a thick dwarven accent "50 minas" says the shopkeeper eager to get in a sale, Fallgrim pays the man and walks off testing the swords balance, and whistling an odd tune

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Knowing all to well that it would be wrong to steal from it he thinks, unfortunatly his dwarven greed overtakes him and he shoves the ingots in his back pack for later use, later he reassures himself thinking it must have been abandoned anyway and that finally settles his mind.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Fallgrim would try to talk to the traders hoping he understands them and if they dont he would try to communicate to them in a different way.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Hoping to earn the reward Fallgrim asks what the job is and if its a sutible job takes the offer.

Thank you for reading this again.

[Brokencrowe 111]

Denied.

Your definition of power-gaming could use with some expansion and clarification. You need to demonstrate clear understanding of the term, and you seem slightly mixed.

You should expand upon the ending of your biography some, why must they always forget their parents? Regardless, good job incorporating the fall of Aegis into your application. The ending just fills a bit rushed.

Expand upon your ambition, as of now it is rather simple and cliche'.

Why are picks and axes his most favored tools if he is an advanced warrior? Elaborate on this.

Why does he Love mining so much, and don't say simply because he is a Dwarf.

Your open response questions seem to lack effort, please expand upon these deeply. These questions are done to show us, the application team, a first taste of your character and how you are to roleplay him. Please don't be lazy!

You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox.

Good luck!

-Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

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