Dea1Hdea1Er's 2Nd Application

[OMGOCD 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Dea1hdea1er

How old are you?: I am 21

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: I live in Australia

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I do, I got an A+ in English last year.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I love video games and have been playing them as long as I can remember. I’m not a naughty person and I obey the rules.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Probably 8-10 Hours a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is acting as if you are the character. Speaking their tongue and walking in their shoes.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I’ve Played Oblivion and Skyrim. Apart from that I have done Drama at school.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is using out of role information eg: Using Someones Name tag to locate them. You Shouldn’t Do This.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: power-gaming is forcing someone to do something in role-playing. Eg: Attacking someone without challenging them to a duel.

What do you expect this server will be like?: A place to roleplay ,have fun and meet new people.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on lots of servers and I left them because I lost the Ips when I restored my minecraft.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes I have

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: yes I do

How did you hear about us?: My friend Thrain_Ironmail told me.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: I have previously made one application it can be found here (http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/52277-dea1hdea1ers-first-application/)

In-Character:

Character Name: Feanor Linwelin

What Race are you?: Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Wood Elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Feanor Was born on the 3rd day of the 3rd month 21 years ago, he grew up in a poor family and when he was 15 his family was taken away.

He vaguely remembers that day. It all started when he was out collecting wood. He came home and he saw 3 armed guards attacking his family. His Dad yelled out to Feanor, “ RUN SON, DON’T LET THEM CATCH YOU”. He turned on his heels and ran off into the woods with his brown hair floating behind him. He could hear the guards boots breaking sticks as he went. He Turned around to find one of the guards standing behind him. He Pulled out the axe he had been using minutes before to collect wood. The guard pulled out his sword and rounded on Feanor. Feanor kicked the guard in the stomach and used the axe to disarm him.

At that moment the guard ran and Feanor realised That there was still a guard with his family. He ran back only to find that his family was gone. His blue eyes widened as he started to fill with hate, rage, fear and sadness.

What is your Character's ambitions?: He wants to find and free his family.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Bow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Archery

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

He hides in the bushes and when he thinks the time is right he steps out of the bushes bow draw and pointed at the first warriors head. “Back away from the hobbit or prepare to die”, Feanor says. The warriors turn around and say in unison we’re not scared of you”. At That point Feanor releases his grip and the arrow burys itself between the warriors eyes. He dropped to the ground dead. The other guard chose that time to draw his sword and charge at Feanor. Feanor dropped his bow, pulled his dagger out and stabbed the warrior.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? No thank you sir im in a hurry.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: wait a few days and see if anyone comes back. If no one comes back in a couple of days I would take the stuff.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? Would you please tell me the way to the nearest town?

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: He would say to the guard, “You Have my blade and my heart and don’t worry about paying me.”

[Brokencrowe 111]

Denied.

Please fix the look of you application, you have text all bunched together and hard to read.

Please expand upon your definitions of roleplay, meta and power-gaming, as of now your definitions are unclear and you do not demonstrate clear understanding of the terms.

Your biography is very brief and lacks any lore related material at all. Please expand upon it and demonstrate to us, the application team, that you've actually taken the time to read the lore and rules of the realm.

Your open response questions show no effort at all. Please, don't waste our time by submitting an application you've thrown together in five minutes. Open repose questions show your mettle as a roleplayer and give us the first taste of how you will play your character. If you think this is the quality of character we accept, you are sorely mistaken.

You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox.

Good luck!

-Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

Moved to Denied Forum