Dren343's Application #2

[Droe 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Dren343

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: I live in the United states and have Standard mountain time zone.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes of course, the English language is my first language.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Well my hobbies are basically gaming, writing, and reading all of these usually include fantasy. I am an Arizonian and I have a great interest in the ocean, which may seem weird because Arizona is a desert but I do.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: The probable amount of time will be a few hours a day depending on how much the server interests me although the server will most likely interest me so a few a hours a day with no exact time

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying means to me to act as a character or creature in a story line

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: Yes I have some experience with role play so I won't be to new

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: well an example is like in world of warcraft you do a quest then you do it again already knowing all the obstacles and enemies so you can avoid them.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power gaming is over powering your own player for example *Droe runs up to the woman grabs her by the neck and starts stabing her* with out giving any chance to react.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect groups of people doing roleplay's as their character with other people. I also expect this to be a popular server due to it being "the 1# role play server".

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played servers I still play some but most of them I leave because of lack of experienced staff or I was griefed from people for no reason.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have read the rules

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I do and always will.

How did you hear about us? Did someone refer you?: Well I was on planet mine craft and some one had a forum signature that said Lord of the craft I guessed that lord of the craft is a server so out of curiosity I looked the server up and found it and now here I am making this application.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: Yes I have it was also denied here is a link http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/52475-my-application/

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/): No, I will very soon though

In-Character:

Character Name: "Well I have been called many things but mainly Droe"

What Race are you?: "Well don't you have eyes you can easily tell I'm human!"

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): "Well you want to hear the story of my life eh, well I'll tell you the most important parts of it". "Well I was born into a farm in the Kingdom of Oren. I was normal sized with longish brown hair, and I have blue eyes much like I am now, well I was living normal until the age of 14 when the town

I once lived in was raided." I pause for a moment "During the raid I escaped with a friend

named Aaron. Aaron was a normal boy at the age of 17 who I

knew through out my life. I was now depressed from his mother

father's death leaving me a scar I will never lose." *cough* "Me and Aaron

decided to join the army of the kingdom, we were now the ages

of 16 and 19. We both became soldiers in the army." I pause and get a more saddened

facial expression. "During a fight with some bandits Aaron died but I slew the rest of the

remaining bandits."

"I was now alone so he only had the choice to stay in the army.

I soon became better with his swordsman ship and continues the

practice more and more. During one of the times I wandering about

I was attacked by 5 bandits I was only able to slay one as the rest

almost killed me. When they left me on the ground they thought

for sure I was dead".

"When I awoke I saw a woman and she appeared to be some

sort of healer, but certainly not through magic. I then remembered

all of the events that had happened I then asked the woman "How long

have I been here she then seemed surprised and turned around and

said "two days now, we thought you woud die you'r lucky you are still

alive". I then felt at his stomach, I felt a cloth over it and looked

down and saw it was a bandage covering where he had been severely cut.

Within the time of a month I was able to fight once again but

decided to quit the army. Well is their anything else you need?"

What is your Character's ambitions?: To become a adventurer, become a greater swords man, and to find the bandits that almost killed him.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): "Well I reckon I'm best with a sword and a hoe, as I said before I lived on a farm for the most part of my life, but have practiced my swordsmanship more often."

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? "well I would say I am a fine farmer and I can solve many riddles, I'm normal with my swordsmanship, just normal."

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): "Well you need a painting of me hmm okay here is a fine one."

Other Information about your Character:"Well I was born missing a toe on my left foot, just one"

Open-Response-Questions

While traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? "Well I would confront the two warriors but if fight broke out, depending on their strength and skill I may have to run from these unknown warriors."

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? "If I was not busy I would ask him what wares he had if nothing seemed of interest I would simply say No not today sir although we might meet again and I may buy from you."

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:" Well a hut i the wilderness containing a sword made of pure gold would certainly be a trap so I would never approach that hut."

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? "My first attempt would be to persuade them into giving me some sort of food if they won't I'll check if I have any coins in my pouch."

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: "I would curse at this when I heard of the issue but I would go after them, for all bandits should be punished after all they have done to me and of everyone else in this land."

[Brokencrowe 111]

Denied.

Please expand upon your definitions of roleplay, meta and power-gaming, as of now your definitions are unclear and you do not demonstrate clear understanding of the terms.

Your biography requires some expansion and lacks much lore related material that is needed. Please expand upon it and demonstrate to us, the application team, that you've actually taken the time to read the lore and rules of the realm.

our open response questions need expansion. Open repose questions show your mettle as a roleplayer and give us the first taste of how you will play your character. Please put more effort behind them!

You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox.

Good luck!

-Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

Moved to Denied Forum