My 3Rd Try

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Master_Archer

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Central/United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I hope I do, but I feel in this situation I cannot speak for myself.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am just someone wanting to have a good time ropleplaying. It is not unlikely for me to be on my computer, because of this I have lost any type of social life, but gained computer fingers which are long and lengthy.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I am not going to spend twenty minutes alone explaining a schedule. In saying that I will probably spend 25-35 hours on the server maybe more or less. The reason being I am going into my freshman year, and will be playing football most of the summer.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:To me Roleplaying is so much more than taking on another character along with its name and lore it is, another chance to be your dream of another person. It also allows you to join a whole new world!

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:Little to none in Minecraft. Although, I am a Skyrim fanatic with logging 20 hours the first week of playing.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta-Gaming is the act of using out of game knowledge to give your character unfair advantages Like for example if you know someone is logged off, you go and mess with their items. In short, it is giving your character knowledge that he would normally not know of.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:Power-Gaming is also another form of having an unfair advantage. It is making your character untouchable. For example Finwe prepares for a battle, so he fires a arrow up in the air. Then making his position known his foes approach and right before hitting finwe the arrow hit his foe. Then the other one tries to shock him but finwe pulls out a lighting shield redirecting the bolt and killing the initial attacker.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I have no idea to be honest.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: My friends, which ended up dying off.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I do.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes, to all the above.

How did you hear about us? Did someone refer you?:The Mc Fourums

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/52515-2nd-run/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/52377-thesemiproarchers-application/

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/:(

In-Character:

Character Name: Finwe Elanesse

What Race are you?:Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race:(Wood elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.:(Finwe was born into a loving family. for the longest time of his life up to this point he learned the basics that a wood elf would know. His mother taught him forest wildlife and plants, while his father would teach him how to hunt. Finwe preferred herblore but he dared not told his father. With that in mind he also knew how to shoot. Out of his three brothers he was very lucky, because the age gap gave him seniority over his brothers.

Outside of his family, him and his dad would make local trips to the market to sell their game. Little did finwe's father Nearyan know he went for another reason. This beautiful girl who had seen him from across the market. She mustered up enough courage to talk to him,and by the end of the conversation they were joking around that if they get married they would not end up like the other Finwe. Finwe was a king who's wife died and then he remarried. The reason why this is so important. Is that elves never marry again they never divorce and adultery is unthinkable. I digress we move forward five years now are young Finwe is a young man and works a herbs stall with his soon to be wife. His family come by from time to time,but most likely leave him to grow up.

When they got married Finwe left his wife to find work to come back and support his new family. He joined a hunting group that killed and sold local game. That was the case until the hunting accident. Finwe and his hunting partner were hunting a wild hog when both of them spotted it Finwe called out "Mine!" his partner responded "fat chance!" and that is when it happened. It all happened so fast he didn't see him and he didn't mean to. Finwe notched his arrow and fired. It was mere chance that his partner went in front of his arrow. As soon as the others got word they sent him to jail.Within a week of being a jail Finwe was moved to a farm. There he wroked from dusk till dawn with no rest after three years of this he was tired and ran away until he could no more. He waws 21 young when he found the forest of Malinor.

What is your Character's ambitions?:To be famous herblorist while also being a good marksman, plus making it to his third life cycle wouldn't hurt.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc:(his bow of course!

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?His wide knowledge of plants and wildlife.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format:(

Other Information about your Character:None

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond He accesses the situation then notches a arrow. He shoots a warning shot so the warriors come over to him. From there he pulls out a dagger which he throws which hits one of the warriors hands luckily. He then shoots the other in the foot and then says "you like hurting others?" he then ties them together(after beating them up a little). After that he goes to the halfling and ask him if he is alright. He then gives him a potion, leaving the halfling with the tied up warriors.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? Finwe then searches through his pouch for a couple herbs and potions that he collected and made, he says "how bout a trade eh?" Then the merchant says "what do you want?" finwe responds with " how about some meat?" the merchant responds with " then let the trade commence!"

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: He take a few iron bars, but leaves a few herbs and game.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? I will teach you all i know about the forest and tell you how to barter, if you would kindly give me some food and drink.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: Finwe immedeatly jumps at this occasion and joins the ranks in hope to gain some knowledge. He then learns that he has to go by a different name ever since he got put into jail. He went by his father's name Nearyn and was successfully accepted

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Your Application has been...

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

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Out of Character:

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Role Play:

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-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [ ]

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Insufficient Knowledge of the World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

Bouts of Powergaming [X]

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Conflicting Answers [X]

Character is Cliche [ ]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

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Skin:

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-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Frankly, I am rather confused. It seems as you are both a king, yet you bother to do peasant-like acts such as joining hunting groups. Remember, placing yourself in such a high position of power early on would be referred as Powergaming. Due to the high chance someone will recognize you as a person of power, your entry to the server would serve to be confusing, as no one actually knows you.

After that, I wish for you to read upon more lore concerning the land of Asulon. It seems it does contain /some/ hints of lore from Aegis, but your biography is completely missing the transition between both lands. It would also help you knowing that there are no /kings/ for Elves, as they are a Princedom, and the age of 21 would be considered childhood. An elf being a young adult would commonly be of 120 - 300 years of age.

Good luck~

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to

my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our

organisation methods.

Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming : http://sm-rp.forumotion.com/t32-

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