Doctercrimson App

[DocterCrimson 2]

Out-Of-Character

-Minecraft Account Name: DocterCrimson

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: US Central Time Zone/ United States of America

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Excellent at English and use proper grammar, very few spelling errors.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a well rounded person, I avoid using foul language and try to help others who need help and try to answer people's questions. I usually play minecraft with my friends and am over-all a friendly person. I like to RP with others and try to be active in the community.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: On my free time, which varies due to my work schedule, but a good estimate is around 3-4 hours a day.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I know a good bit about roleplaying. Roleplaying to me is potraying a fictional character and immersing that character in a fictional world and living that character's life in the persistent world.

-What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have a rich RPing history, I have RPed on a couple of Minecraft RP servers and on other games, I have even played a couple of MMORPGs and roleplayed on them.

-In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Metagaming is using OOC (Out-of-Character) Information ingame without ever learning that information in RP, example of metagaming: Using information obtained from TS or Skype to occuse a man of robbery, even though you have no RP evidence.

-In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Powergaming is using RP chat to give yourself ungodly powers ingame. Example: *Turns into biotic super soldier and smashes you through wall*

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect the server to be a great, mythical adventure type of role play experience. I hope to see good admins and a rich community with good RPers. My friends have tole me great things about this server and I hope to play it.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on a few Post-Apo servers : From Flames (Server Disbanned) and The Aftermath (Server Disbanned). Aswell as some Mythological and Medieval servers: Age of Faith (Server Dibanned) Age of Mythology (Server Disbanned).

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

-Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes.

-How did you hear about us?: Several friends and on Minecraft Forums.

-Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: I have not, this is my first one.

In-Character:

-Character Name: Vegard Aurdal

-What Race are you?: Human

-What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Northerner

-Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Vegard Aurdal, a master of the great sword, battle axe, and war bow, is the perfect example of true Nord Warrior. He lives to fight and drink, he is tall, muscular, and a fair-haired fighter. He is what his friends refer to as a "BattleMaster."

Vegard was born into a small tribe of nomads somewhere inside The Wilds. He was raised in a strict warrior society and tought to kill or be killed. His father tought him how to first wield an axe and shield and how to hunt and kill. He traveled with his fellow nomads across the lands, hunting with his fellow warriors and providing food and safety to his people. He eventually claimed a woman and became one of the most respected warriors in his tribe.

All was peaceful and good for Vegard, however, one day he was out hunting with his fellow warriors, his tribe was attacked and his family burned and killed by orcs. He returned to see orcs feasting on and killing his people. He and his fellow warriors charged the orcs with pure rage and anger. Many of his warriors died in the insuing battle for his tribe's camp. Vegard's life was turned to rubble, his warriors now dead or fled. Vegard took one last look at his dead family and camp. Vegard, now a lonely traveler, heads toward the lands of Asulon.

-What is your Character's ambitions?: He wants to become the best warrior in Asulon and find a new society to call home after his family's slaughter.

-What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): The Sword

-What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Vegard is a great swordsman, who can easily cut down his foes.

-A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): Skin: http://tinypic.com/r/amcm5x/6 InGame: http://tinypic.com/r/bhlg1f/6

-Other Information about your Character: n/a

Open-Response-Questions

-Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?:

*Vegard walks down the temple's steps and notices 2 men pushing a small man*"Give us your money you dirty halfling!" One of the men shout*Vegard begins to walk towards the 2 men* "Hail, what are you men doing to this defenseless man?" Vegard says in a baritone voice "None yah business you dirty Northerner" The robber says unsheathing a dagger.*Vegard laughs in a booming voice* "Your crazy to think that puny dagger will stop me!" Vegard exclaims.*Vegard pulls out a long great sword to intimidate the robbers* "Alright man, we dont want any trouble! Come on Barigoth, lets go to the pub." One robber says in caution."This man doesnt scare me! You wanna protect this dirt monkey then you can go through me!" The other man says drawing a sword.*The cowardly robber runs off as Vegard readies his sword to attack the braver man* "Well then, come at me!" Vegard says in a frightening voice. *The robber charges him and Vegard engages him in a heated sword duel**After about 5 minutes of fighting Vegard swings a final blow at the robbers head, decapitating the man**Vegard sees that the halfling ran off as he sheaths his sword* "Hmm, stay safe little one" Vegard says to himself as he walks off.

-Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?:

"Nothing for me sir, I am fully equiped" Vegard says. "I insist sir, ther must be summin yah need!" The merchant says, trying to show his wears. "Well, I suppose I could use some food, I am a little peckish." Vegard says browsing the merchants food options. "How bout dis apple then sir?" The merchant says holding up a bright and shiny red apple. "Ahh yes, I'll take that, how much will it be sir?" Vegard questions holding up a bag full of minas. " That'll be 25 minas my good sir." The merchant says. "Thats a little steep for an apple, but I have plenty of minas to give." Vegard says as he hands the merchant the minas. "Why thank yah sir" THe merchant says, tipping his hat. *Vegard walks of taking a bite of his new bought apple*

-Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

"Hmm, my lucky day!" Vegard says as he takes the items from the chest. "Stop right there!" a voice says from behind Vegard. *Vegard slowly turns around and notices a roughly dressed elf woman pointing a bow at his head* "Ahh, is this yours?" Vegard says in a joking manner. "Yes...yes it is, and your taking it." The elf woman says drawing back the bow's string just a bit further. *Vegard slowly bends toward the floor and drops the stolen goods* "I'm sorry, I didnt know that this place was still inhabited" Vegard says inoccently while raising his hands so the elf woman won't shoot. "Get out of my house now! You have 5 seconds or your a dead man!" The elf woman shouts keeping her aim steady on Vegard's head. "Aye, I will immeaditly!" Vegard replies as he begins to run out the door and back in the woods. *He wipes the sweat of his head* "Well, she wasnt to freindly" Vegard says to himself.

-Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?:

"Hello traders, this is a nice little camp you have set up here, reminds me of home. Do you happen to know how to get to the Cloud Temple, I'm lost." Vegard says in an assuring voice."Aye we do, you need to north a good ways, then you should see it, it isnt hard to miss." The greeter says. "Aye, thank you kind sirs, I wish you luck in your travels" Vegard says grabbing up his things and throwing a sack on his shoulder."As do we wish luck for you! Safe travels warrior!" The greeter says waving his hand as Vegard walks of into The Wild.

-You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

*Vegard approaches the town's guard* "I'll take the job" Vegard says to the guard. "Great! You look capable, you have weapons?" the guard says. "Aye, I do" Vegard says pulling out a great sword. "Alright then! Come men! WE FIGHT!" The guard yells, rallying his men together as they march to the bandit camp. *Vegard follows the guards resting his sword on his shoulder**The party soon sees the bandit camp and get ready to strike* "Alright, archers, get on that hill and get your bows ready, the footman will charge up to the camp and on my signal, the archers will fire" The guard says in a whispering voice. "Vegard is it? You will attack with our footmen in the main force." the guard intsructs him. "Aye, sounds like a plan!" Vegard replies. *The archers climb up the hill next to the bandit camp and draw there bows, the footmen and Vegard travel up the path just outside the bandit camp gate* "ATTACK!" the guard yells ordering the archers to fire and the footmen to break the gate. *Vegard and 3 othr footmen charge the gate as the archers fire their bows*"Aye men! Keep it up!" Vegard yells. *Vegard and the footmen attack the bandits, quickly dispatching the weak ones**The archers hold there fire and the guards rally around the camp's fire, the bandits have been killed* "Thank you for the help Vegard. You have truly won this victory for us" the guard says handing out 500 minas to Vegard. "Nay, I dont need your minas, just let it be known the Vegard was here." Vegard says sheathing his sword and turning to walk away. "Thank you Vegard! You are a true warrior!" The guard says in gratitude.

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Firstly, the lands of Asulon cannot be traveled to by conventional means. So far, no foreigners have ever arrived onto Asulon, and it shall be kept as so. Please revise your biography to not include "traveling to Asulon".

Secondly, your application shows no knowledge of the World of Aegis or lands of Asulon. Please include some hints about these lands such as city names, people's names, and the such. This information can be found on the wiki.

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