Menotok's Application

[terorek 1]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Menotok

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: The Netherlands

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I can a little English not the best because I have dyslexia.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I play volleyball in my spare time. I often sit behind the computer, and I do HAVO. And I am also working on my own RPG server with someone.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I can every week about 8 hours on the server because I’m working on my own project work.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I Roleplaying super fun especially combined with Minecraft. And what I know of Roleplaying is that it's more fun if you continue in your role and with many people playing. And you can own stories with friends and even people you do not know. When you reach Role Playing out your role is, it is also always a lot less fun.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I do not play many Roleplaying games . But I am working on a Role Playing server in Minecraft. And sometimes I do it for fun with my friends.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Mate-Gaming is a strategic playing. you think outside the game to know what you are going to do.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming is playing a game just to win and become the best. This is often done in Role Playing games.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it's a very nice server. You can probably make many friends along in the game. I really like Roleplaying server so this is perfect. I also think it is fun to discovered everything.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I did not play on a Roleplay server yet but I why I left other server is mostly because it became boring.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I understand the mand read them and I agree whit them.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I do.

How did you hear about us?: I've seen the trailer Reckreations.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:I did one a long time ago but that one is deleted but it was accepted but I never became whit listed.

In-Character

Character Name: Gilan

What Race are you?: Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): He is born in a little town in the forest nobody now’s really were. His parents had not enough money to keep him. The throw him out the house and nobody in the village wanted to keep him. He went out in the forest and tried to survive on a day some guy found him and brought him to his home. He didn’t say his name Gilan needed to call him whatever he wanted. He lived in a house just simple made from wood not special. When Gilan was old enough he needed to go. The man learned Gilan everything to survive. Gilan found a new place to start a real life in a village really far north. He started a new live there. He found a girl that he really liked he was 21 then. She was called Alison and was really pretty. He never asked here but he always wanted that. Went he was 24 he left the village again and went out in the forest he trained al his skills mostly his hiding and sword fitting also his ranged skills. When he was 30 he found a left city he search in the city for stuff then he found an amazing sword he got that sword for 13 years then somebody stall it when he was sleeping. Now he is still looking for that sword and he is not going to stop till he found it. He is now 63 and he found the world of lord of the craft and he is going to search in still word for his sword!

What is your Character's ambitions?: He is a elf that is good whit an sword he is good in hiding under is had and he is not somebody that talks really much.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?: fighting with a sword and hiding himself.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character: He is 63 good in hiding ranged and fitting whit a sword and he hopes he will found his sword in the world of lord of the craft.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

He walks calm to the guards and ask what is going on. He ask if they going to stop, and if they say now he will not kill them just hurt them to show they don’t need to do it again.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today? What is your character response? Nothing sir thanks for asking, bye.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:There’s nothing I need from that because it is not me stuff and not me sword. And he walks feather in to the forest again.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? I’m already a long time lost in the wilderness so can you please help me sir? I will pay if you want to.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: He is going to help but he don’t take the gift only if it is his sword.

[Thu'um 530]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

Missing Areas [ ]

Bad Information [ ]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

-Open Response Questions are Lacking [X]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [X]

-Unreal Scenarios [X]

Bouts of Powergaming [ ]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [ ]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Plagiarized [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [X]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [X]

-Unloreful Skin [X]

Other Comments:

The reasons leading to your denial were disclosed / marked above.

I'll elaborate a bit more upon what you need to present a successful passing application.

It seems you did indeed put a tad bit effort into your biography, however your responses were quite lacking being around 1-2 sentences.

Your definitions were incorrect.

There are more reasons, but the rest of them are indicated above.

Good Luck should you choose to Re-Apply.

PLEASE RE-APPLY AFTER A PERIOD OF 24 HOURS, THANK YOU.

[Thu'um 530]

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