Johau Appilcation

[Johau 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:johau

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Denmark

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:FUN

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 3-4 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I think that roleplaying a really fun activity because you let your mind go wander in to another universe.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: ive played several other servers but they were pretty annoying since people could not take i serioulsy and rage over everything.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: To be honest i dont know what it means.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Again i dont know it.

What do you expect this server will be like?: The best server ever. Roxthesox invited me to try and play it and i thought is sounded really bad-ass!!!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:actually i cant remember the name but it was a real disgusting server mostly because when you got killed by a mob it sayed... ''johau was raped by a horny enderman'' thats what it sayed on that server when you got killed

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: afcourse

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: yes!

How did you hear about us?: Roxthesox invited me to play with him

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:nope this is my first application

In-Character:

Character Name:Hasus

What Race are you?:human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):Kharajyr

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Hasus's parrents was mureder by a group of bandits.Hasus fled the farm seeking peace and freedom thats were some merchants stumbled upon a little boy in the woods. They took Hasus as there own and raised him a skilled merchant... :age 23: :personality good guy but quick to anger:.

What is your Character's ambitions?:to become the greates merchant ever known to Asulon

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):axe's

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Trading

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): cant give one but here's a linkhttp://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/bandit-89388/

Other Information about your Character: Not much more.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?. Not doing anything because it reminds it of himself. he's greatest fear

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? Says hello good sir can you show me what you got for sale!.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Look to see if anybodys around then if he sees anyone he ask's if it is there hut!.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? I ask them if they could share some food.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: Joins the fight to stop the bandits because he does not want what happend to him happen to others.

[Thu'um 530]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

Missing Areas [X]

Bad Information [X]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

-Open Response Questions are Lacking [X]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

Bouts of Powergaming [ ]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [X]

Character is Cliche [X]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [X]

Plagiarized [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [X]

-Incorrect Skin Format [X]

-Unloreful Skin [X]

Other Comments:

Your Application lacked a lot of detail. I'm not going to leave a huge explanation, but it seems you did not put a whole lot of effort into your application. Most of your answers were 1-2 sentences, if that. Your skin was a bandit skin, and this kind of broke lore. All of your definitions were incorrect / contestable, and there were a variety of errors.

All of the Errors and Disclosed / Marked Above.

I think you need to take a read at the lore and also learn about the terms Metagaming and Powergaming.

I bid you good luck with your next application!

PLEASE RE-APPLY AFTER A PERIOD OF 24 HOURS ~ THANK YOU.

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum