F0X712

[F0x712 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: F0x712

How old are you?: 11.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: (GMT 8:00 hours) Pacific

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm pretty good with computers for a 5th grader. I am a good leader and a kind friend. I will defend my friends no matter what the case.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 10-16 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is an enjoyable type of game that creative and imaginative people would like. People who just like slipping into a world where you can be a whole 'nother creature or person. From a loyal slave to a might king to a brave knight fighting a ferocious dragon! I think roleplaying can really stretch someone's creativity and imagination.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have played numerous roleplaying games like Dungeons & Dragons. I find them entertaining.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Using the info you collect outside of a game to choose your actions in-game.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Doing thing that are humally impossible in a game. Having super-powers like healing yourself with a snap.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I have seen my friend play it and I find the server VERY entertaining and exciting. I love how the action never stops and how you can do whatever! I can't wait to play LordoftheCraft (if i get accepted).

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I currently play on BHSMinecraft. I play on my friend's servers though they're not very popular and some are whitelisted. I used to play Epic Mine World but I quit because the rules were unfair.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, yes, and yes. I have never been banned and I don't plan to.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes, I promise NOT to break the rules.

How did you hear about us?: I saw my friend playing on the server. I found myself attached to him STARING at his laptop screen.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No I haven't.

In-Character

Character Name: Tentár Bëndurdwor

What Race are you?: Orc

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Tentar is an orphan. Two months after he was born, when he was with a nanny, his parents, who were in a war against the elves, were both slaughtered when confronting a high ranking elven officer. When the nanny heard of the parents' deaths, she got on a horse and rode off to a river. She put Tentar in a hand-woven basket and pushed Tentar off. When she returned to the house, she found two armed elves waiting for her. They struck her down and went searching for the baby. They found Tentar drifting along the river and was just about to shoot the basket when an orc attacked the two elves and beat them down.

Tentar is now a tall and muscular 34 year old orc. He has good battle skills and has a good temper. He fights for everything he cares for with his life. When he was 28, he had a girlfriend named Tanari Urselä. He took Tanari to a large cliff for an evening picnic when the edge broke off taking Tanari with it. Tentar was heartbroken and dissapeared from his village for years. Three years later, he returned to the village to find it burned and destroyed. Tentar was furious and went to the mainlands to join the orc army. To this day, Tentar fights for the orcs striking down all enemies that oppose the orc race.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To be one of the best orc soldier ever.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): His handy bow. He enjoys being very concentrated and focused on something and he is very focused when using his bow. He is silent as a mouse and still as a statue.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Fighting and building are things Tentar enjoys. He is experienced with it and is very dedicated to his duties.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): I have attached it.

Other Information about your Character: I have already expressed everything about my character.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

I confront the two warriors and defend the halfling. Shall the two warriors just stalk away, I leave them be and make sure the halfling is safe. Shall they attack me, I do everything I can to keep the halfling safe and do everything I can to overcome the two warriors.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

I browse for fresh armor, tools, and supplies (food, wood, stone, etc.).

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

I leave it be just in case it IS actually someone's chest for I am not a theif.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

I politely ask for shelter and food. Shall they turn me away, I calmly stalk away to look for civilization. Shall they accept me, I kindly thank them and stay a few nights. During those nights, I ask for directions and make as many friends as I can.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

I agree to aid the town gaurds. If we win, I politely accept the reward, not forgetting to thank them.

[Brokencrowe 111]

Denied.

Your open response questions are short and do not show how you would roleplay your character. Please give very detailed answers.

Give an example of metagaming.

Your definition of powergaming is unclear, please give a better definition that is both clear and provides well thought out examples.

Your biography is somewhat cliche' and displays out of character behavior for an Orc.

Your ambition needs explanation, and expansion. Also "Being the best soldier," is slightly cliche'.

You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a message in my inbox.

Good luck!

-Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

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