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[sullgray 0]

Out-Of-CharacterMinecraft Account Name:sullgray

How old are you?:I am 14 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Canada

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:I might miss spell something or forget to use capital letters every once and a while. But other than that I am good.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I love to play minecraft and many sports. I also find school very fun! I am curious and like to joke around!

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I will spend about 9 hours a week. But it depends on my scedule: vacation or a rainy day!

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Roleplaying is to create or to be a character that you are not. Dropping your real life completely.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I play with my brother sometimes. Just today when we were biking, we were star wars people!

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta-Gaming is to be the character that you or another person created. To become to character yourself.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:Power-Emotion is to have the emotion of which the character might experience. To take the emotion of the character.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect that this server will have a friendly community. It seems like this communtiy is one small village where you know everyone. Everyone seems to know everyone. I also do not think that there will be many griefers. Oh how I hate griefers!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on my friends servers. I left them because there was 2 people, all they did was grief!

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:I read, understood and agreed to all the rules.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:I will abide by all of the rules, I promise.

How did you hear about us?:I saw a youtube video. That person described all of the basics! I thought that it will be a great server!

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:Nope, this is my first application.

In-Character:

Character Name:sullgray

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :My race is an Elf.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):My sub-race is I am a Wood Elf.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Hello, my name is sullgray. I am a 14 year old boy elf. My sub-race is a wood elf! I wear green clothes because I think green is the coolest color! I only wish my eyes were green, they are blue. My ears are small for an elf, so they are a little hard to see. I love to talk to my neibors. And hanging around animals are the best! I just love the way the cows moo! I like to protect the elves and animals from all the monsters that come out at night, so thats where I get most of my money from! With the money I make I occasionally give it to the poor. The other times I buy materials to build my home and feed myself.

I come from a small village. My parents got tangled up with dwarfs. My parents really liked food, but could not eat apples and bread like me. They had to eat the meat. I tryed to tell them not eat the meat that the dwarfs gave them. My parents, still would not listen! I knew that this would be the end to their true elfship. Soon after that they started sprinting and jumping to get around faster. I knew that the dwarfs had some impact on my parents. So I descided to go over and challenge the dwarfs. I never thought that they would like to be challenged! Of course by now they knew where my village was, since my parents were telling them everything. I woke up one morning and saw a row of dwarfs with swords charging at my village! I grabed all the stuff I could and ran! With a bow in my hand I ran off to the mountains shooting my bow at any dwarf that dare follow me! I lost mank hearts that day.

Sadly I had to find a new elf civilization to live in.

What are your Character's ambitions?:My ambitions are to earn minas, create an army and attack the dwarfs. And I also want to have a social life and know all the elves!

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):My favorite tools are a bow and arrow and occasionally I might use a axe.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?I am highly skilled with my bow and arrows!

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

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Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?I would try to help the halfling. Maybe take it to my house to stay for a while.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?"Can you tell meh where I can find the dwarfs?

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:I might put some useless junk in the chest. If there were to be a few snow balls, I might take 8 just to throw at someone! 8D

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?Would you trade some logs for some bread? Thanks friend!

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:I would help the guards! But the price better be high!

Anything else you would like to say?:I will try to be a peaceful warrior.

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You definitions are all wrong...You need to expand on them. And this is 'Power-Emoting' not 'Power Emotion'

Your MC name is generally not a very good RP name...But your's may do. I don't particularly like it, and would change it if I were you.

Your biography would be better if it was typed in the third person. And 14 years of age is VERY young for an elf...You would hardly be able to walk. Also, you need to implement some lore into your biography.

You can read up on server lore here:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=10

You need to expand on all of your ORQs. They contain no detail at all... And haflings are not 'its' they are a sub-race of humans. Similar to hobits. They are not pets >.>

If you improve the things highlighted in red, you will surely be accepted!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

I suggest you check this guide to server applicants out.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

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