App 3-Lotc

[Porcupine1313 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Porcupine1313

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a trustworthy player and will follow the rules given to me. I tend to play minecraft at least one hour every other day. I think roleplaying would be fun.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 10-12 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Roleplaying is staying in-character at all times. Roleplyaing is acting emotional and physical like the character you are.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: None.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta-Gaming is using knowledge outside-the-game to benefit you and help make your in-game character more alive and realistic. Also meta-gaming is not using someone's name (minecraft name) in-game. Like saying hello to a person behind a wall, of course the other person couldn't hear you.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:Power-emoting is to inflict your actions into someone else...like punching someone. Power emoting is like declaring victory over someone and/or not letting them react to your actions. It's like acting like a god, overruling others.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect this server to be a lot of fun, but organized. I also expect characters to be like real people who act and talk like an Orc, Human, Dwarf, or Elf. Finally I expect to find cities that will either accept or deny me.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on my neighbor's server and I left it because there was never anyone on, nothing to do, and the owner was very bossy and demanding.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I do. I will follow the rules at ALL times.

How did you hear about us?:My brother showed and told me about this server. (Spike823)

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:yes this is my third application. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/61858-app-2/page__p__484156__fromsearch__1#entry484156

In-Character:

Character Name:Knightwolf

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): No.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Knightwolf came from a small town called "TroubleStone". He lived with a poor family with his two younger brothers (second oldest brother is Spike) and sister. Unlike Spike, Knightwolf was a strong, ferocious dwarf. Knightwolf always wore a jacket so he could blend in with the night. Knightwolf learned many tactics of surviving and hunting. At the age of 10 Knightwolf was able to hunt and kill Troublestone's theives. Knightwolf was also good with a battleaxe, with a strong arm and perfect swing, Knightwolf could kill anything in seconds.

Knightwolf loved his parents, brothers, and sister. But Knightwolf's life changed right after he saw his little brother Spike get picked on. Knightwolf was mad at the others for picking on Spike and that night he talked to Spike, Spike said there wasn't a problem and left to his room. Later on Knightwolf truly experienced something horrible. He saw his brother stab a fellow mate and go running to the shore. Knightwolf chose not to go near Spike, but to watch him. It was a big mistake. The next thing Knightwolf saw was his brother leaving on a boat. Knightwolf ran with all the strength his legs had, but it wasn't enough to stop Spike. Knightwolf turned around and went back to his house telling his family what he experienced. He couldn't sleep that night, woke up about 5:30a.m., and headed to the shore line. Knightwolf saw a hut and snuck up to it, not knowing what was inside. There was an old man sitting there. He asked Knightwolf what he was doing and Knightwolf told him about his brother. The old man nodded and spoke to Knightwolf, telling him that Spike has searched for a new home and that he is heading toward a world called Aegis and to an island called Asulon. Knightwolf got up and ran back home. He left a note saying he is going to a place called Asulon and is going to search for his brother. He went on a boat that morning wondering if he will ever be reunited with his closet brother, Spike.

What are your Character's ambitions?:To find his brother and to start a new life in the new world.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Battleaxe because Knightwolf knows it will always come in handy.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Fighting the hard battles.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ): http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=nxreqe&s=6

Other Information about your Character:Protects his friends and kills his enemies.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?Knightwolf sneaks up behind the warriors and watches what they do. Knightwolf then slowly pulls out his battleaxe with a small smile. He then leaps on one of the warriors and with all his might slams the battleaxe into his head. The warrior gives out a little cry and dies. Knightwolf then screams at the warrior and with a sudden twitch the warrior runs away. The halfing thanks Knightwolf for saving him and his money. The halfing shakes his hand and walks away. Knightwolf smiles to himself, says good job Knightwolf, and leaves the dead corpse.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?Knightwolf walks up to the man and ask him if he has had any trouble with thieves. The rich man says yes and asks Knightwolf what he could do about it. Knightwolf then looks at the rich man's treasures for sale and tells the man he wants the diamond helmet and the new diamond battleaxe if he could kill/stop the thieves. The rich man agrees to this because he knows the thieves are hard to take down and tells Knightwolf when the thieves come and where they go. That was enough information for Knightwolf. At night Knightwolf sneaks to the location the rich man told him the thieves would be. There they were, the thieves were looking at each others loot. In a split second Knightwolf knocks out all three thieves keeping one for talking. The thief that is still awake spills all he knows and tells him he and his gang will never bother the rich man again. Knightwolf then walks off towards the rich mans stall. By now it is morning and the rich man has set up his table full of goods. Knightwolf walks up to the stall, picks up his earnings, says mission accomplished, and leaves the stall with the man in astonishment.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Knightwolf looks in the chest and says that these items are worthless to him. He knows iron bars wouldn't do him any good and he already has a trusty battleaxe at his side, so he doesn't need a sword. Knigtwolf then walks off to never again come to the small hut.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?Knightwolf would ask for food.The trading camp says what will you give back to us? We need money you know! Knightwolf then offers a few bones and spider eyes that he had found after killing some monsters. The trading camp agrees to this trade for they have been needing spider eyes for their potions (worth a lot of money). Knightwolf sits by the campfire talking and eating to the traders. he sleeps in a small tent and with a kind goodbye Knightwolf leaves the campsite.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:Knightwolf would step right up to the plate and help the chief and his crew fight this battle. The chief looks at Knightwolf saying you are worthy of fighting with us, for you are strong and quick. Knightwolf joins the battle and for two days of straight fighting Knightwolf kills the enemy leader. With the leader gone the enemies have no instructions and soon retreat. The chief thanks Knightwolf for his assistance and throws him a small bag of coins. The chief winks at Knightwolf and walks away. Knightwolf smiles and goes back to were his house is.

Anything else you would like to say?:Hope I can really come part of this server. My brother told me a lot about it and it seems fun :D

[Taiga 764]

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Other Comments:

Primarily, your biography is lacking in any indication of lore knowledge. Please be advised, in order to join our server, some knowledge of lore must be presented to prove that you have understood and are accommodated to our server's adage. Please read the lore on the website, forums, and/or the wiki to take a glimpse of what our server has done for the past year. Then, implement some lore knowledge that is valid such as city names, nations, and large scale events. Also, please be advised that all lore that is /current/ must pertain to Asulon, not Aegis. Having your character being born from old cities is fine, but be aware that all current adventures your character will embark upon will be in Asulon.

Secondly, Asulon is the only known inhabitable land. Aegis is already destroyed, and Asulon is the only place you may truly live in. Please fix your application to have your character's beginnings start from either Aegis or Asulon. Please read about the transition lore here:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=The_Destruction_of_Aegis

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=Remember, you are coming to Asulon to Develop a character! Not have one already established!=

Definition of Powergaming/Metagaming Here: http://redgies-rp.co.uk/forum/index.php?topic=33703.0

Please remember that you may not reapply two times within a 24 hour time period.

[Taiga 764]

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