Davern's 1St Application

[Davern 21]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Davern

How old are you?:

12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Canada/Pacific Time Zone

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I'm pretty sure I have a good grip on the English language, as I have been speaking the language since I was three but, as everyone I make mistakes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I'm a average height,12 year old,with short brown hair, and I have a stocky build. I play a couple sports such as basketball and soccer, and I am very calm and I always look at very option before doing anything big.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I would likely 6 to 12 hours a week in the summer but, 4 to 6 hours on a school week, and I might be too busy to play that long on some days because of school.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

In my words, Roleplaying is when you have a new life in a new world and having a new story with nothing in the real world there and only there a couple hours a day.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

In World of Warcraft (WoW) and in other Minecraft servers that have shut down.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta gaming means to get outside information from someone in real life and use it to your advantage in the game world. As in using information that you were told from skype or team speak. Example say someone in (OCC) tells me there is a house near Oren that has a chest full of diamonds and you just go there with your character knowing some how with no rp involeved.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

In my terms, Power-Emoting is when players use emotes to do a action that makes it immpossable for a player to react, or prevent your decision.Example: Bob punched Jim in the head knocking him out.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect an exciting role-play server filled with twists and turns you never know were to go. Were my friends and I can chill with each other and meet lots of intresting people.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I used to play a couple pvp servers such as, Raidcraft and Retrocraft but,left them each a couple months later as x-rayers kept making the game not enjoyable for me and my fellow players and a couple rp servers but sadly they shut down due to not enough players and I hope to find a new server with this one.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, I have read,understood, and agreed to the rules.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes, I promise to abide by said rules, and laws.

How did you hear about us?:

I heard about this server from my sister and PetriDaGamerNerd on YouTube.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

No, I have not.

In-Character:

Character Name:

Thorir Machaddish

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Dwarf.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Mountain Dwarf.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Thorir Machaddish was born in a Dwarf village in the West called Western Riverin Foothills. Thorir's family lived in a small wooden cottage, Thorir's Great-Grandfather,

Delpin made fourty-three years ago just before dieing from a deep long cut ranging from his right side of his stomach to his belly button, from the beginning of the Great War on the siege of tKal'Urguan. Thorir lived with his Father Tylon,Mother Marina,and his younger brother by two years named Skippy but, everyone called him Skipper , close to the center of the town. Thorir's father Tylon was a pretty good swordsmen and lumberjack back in the day before crippling his left armwhen an great pine tree fell on his leg when the snow wayed it down, when he was going to work at the lumber yard, and you need both hands for lumberjacking Tylon had no choice but to retire an start a family inn with his love Marina one of the best cooks around. So it was normal for Thorirs father to train Skipper and him in the arts of swordsmen ship and lumberjacking when Thorir reached the age of thirteen and Skipper reached the age of eleven.

By the time Thorir was five teen he a rowdy, disrespectful, and almost always drunk teenager who was beginning to be one of the best swordsmen in his village, with his cunning speed and tactical brain he had beaten all the other boys in his village. All Thorir's life he wanted to be a lumberjack like his father and his father's father, to get to go into the woods and provide houses for people all over the world, to chop down his first big tree with the Machaddish Axe named after his family made six hundred years ago made with materials so old no one can find them any more as they have been mined an hidden for adventurers. Five years later Thorir was finally able to do it, TO cut down his first tree! Know at the age of 27 Thorir is a 4 foot 9 tall mountain dwarf with a muscular,strong and stocky build after using axes for most of his life and great fireiry hair, Thorir has know moved to the Capitol dwarven city, Mountire, to fight with his brethren against the recent Orc attacks.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

To drink all the ale in the world and become the best swordsmen among the Dwarf's.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

My character's favorite tool is the Machaddish Axe which has been passed on to the first son of each generation for three hundred years. Which cuts through every kind of wood in minutes but being handled with a Machaddish makes it seconds.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

My character is most skilled in lumberjacking as like most Mountain Dwarfs but, as all Machaddish family members, Thorir is able to cut through wood with such strength

it falls down in seconds, making the earth shake with such ferouiscity neighbouring villages could fell it.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4fb933a5b8ac472090257846682052018720227

Other Information about your Character:

Thorir loves the taste of whiskey after a hard days work chopping down pine trees.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Thorir just came back from the local tavern with two mugs of ale, towards Cloud Temple when Thorir saw a small halfing, and much smaller then him, being harassed by two armed bandits, trying to steal money from an innocent halfing, but Thorir didn't really care in his drunken state till the bandits attacked Thorir, knocking over his ale making him rage. Thorir punched the first bandit who knocked over his ale straight at his temple knocking cold, pocketing the money and giving it to the terrified halfing, then chasing after the other bandit.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

"Gise me two bottles of yours grrrreeeattest ales knws ya little skunk". Thorir said.

"Escuse me is that how you talk to the merchant of the finest items in Asulon"? The posh man said.

"Isss didn't knws thy king tis here". Thorir said sarcastically.

"I'll have you know I'm the kings six removed cousin, so if you don't behave I'll have you in the dungeons for a week, yea drunken sod"! The posh man exclaimed.

"As iss saidss iss dnts cars, juts gives me mys ales know"! Thorir said drunkly.

"Fine it's forty minas, or do you not have enough ya dawrven peasant" The posh man yelled.

As Thorir took out forty Minas Thorir muttered. "Tis whys I hates humans alwys behave like ignorant,pigsss"! Thorir surlered.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Thorir's was stumbling to Kal'Urguan to vist skipper as he had tooken a mining job there, after a couple hours Thorir, as it started to rain saw a ancient looking cottage almost as tall as him, it looked as abandoned as his bed back home as he had not been there for years. Thorir thought maybe I should go and see if there is anything to plunder and maybe I should take shelter to. As Thorir stepped in someone hit him in the head but, Thorir absorbed the blow with his thick skull then unsheathed his sword and hit his attacker in the head with the handle knocking him stone cold, then Thorir sheathered his sword, as Thorir did that he saw a chest in the dark,damp corner, which contained half a dozen iron ingots and a gleaming gold sword, which Thorir had always begged his father to buy him a gold sword but, Thorir's said it's to much money to buy, but finally he had one. Thorir then left to keep stumbling towards Skippers town to tell him the great news!

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Thorir was heading to Alras to look at the battle ruins that happened a couple days a go.After several hours, Thorir believed he was lost as he kept going in circles, after ten more minutes he found a log to rest when Thorir realised he was tired,limping,lost,hungry,thristy, and dieing for a swig of ale when he saw a stellmemt off in the distance so he ran as fast as a drunk,limping, and exhausted could go ran, as Thorir ran towards the settlement. Once he got there the settlers happily greeted him into there village and gave him as much bread and ale as Thorir could have! "It's like heaven". Thorir thought. They even refused to let Thorir pay the, back as they had no use for it. They let Thorir rest for two days as Thorir was resting he saw the headman and a couple of the stronger looking men talking darkly and pointing at him, Thorir thought."I better watch out for them". Thorir got up early in morning and got given a map to Alras, as Thorir was half way there he noticed four heavy looking men in amour, instead of fighting Thorir just ran of because he knew he would get beaten but, these amour laid men could not keep up with nimble Thorir, so he continued on his journey

to look at the ruins of Alras.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Thorir gets up early every morning at 11:00 o clock to buy six bottles of wine for the day.It was a pretty normal day Thorir and the wine merchant argued with each other untill they got fed up, as Thorir was heading home when he saw the town guard asking if anyone would help them in attacking the bandits down the road, one of them even asked Thorir personally, if Thorir would join because they knew Thorir is a expert swordsmen but, Thorir said. "Sorry but the bandits would have heard you all and have left before you even have a chance and, I'm playing on visiting my brother in Kal'Urguan but, good luck to you".

Anything else you would like to say?:

No, that is all.Thank you.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Put on Pending.

For the most part this is a decent application. The only thing wrong is the skin you provided - It's not at all an RP skin. If you can edit your application and change the skin to a more RP one you will be accepted. If not you will be denied.

Pending for 12 hours. If required changes are made the application will be accepted.

[Cappy 1599]

Reasons:

• The required change has not been made.
  

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