My Whitelist Application

[ZeEndermanKing 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:hunter1023

How old are you?:12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:easter u.s

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:YesSmall 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a 12 year old who likes games especially minecraft

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:2-5hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:where a player fits into what people ar doing around him

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:No this is my first roleplaying server so i have no experience

'In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: meta gaming is when the player uses his knowladge that the character does not have

color="#add8e6"]In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:power emoting is when a character does something they could not normally do example Elendil Shoots a bow and hits a bird that was sitting on top of the great tree in the elven kingdom

What do you expect this server will be like?:very good i have flew all around the elven kingdom

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have not played on any roleplaying servers this is my first

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes

How did you hear about us?:A Freind told me about the forums

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:In-Character:No i do not beleive so i attempted to make one before but my computer crashed i do not know if it posted i was not completely finished with it

Character Name:What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):Wood Elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Eledin was eating dinner with his parents when his parents said son stay here we are going to go buy some grain and then they left Eledin heard a crash from his mothers room and out came a orc from the flay Eledin was shocked he ran at of his house an dhid in the blacksmith the orc was destroying houses and eledin heard people screaming and he ran out of the blacksmith and ran to the screaming and he saw a peice of glass on the side of the path he grabbed it and started running again he came up to the orc and before the orc could turn around Eledin jabbed the sharp peice of glass into the orcs neck and the orc fell down and Eledin being only 9 fainted 5 hours later he woke in his house with his fathers old iron helm and then 9 years later Eledin being 18 was chopping down trees for the college construction and then Eledin heard footsteps behind him it was the head sentinel and 2 other sentinels behind him and the head sentinel said Eledin i would like You! to fight for the elven kingdom Eledin accepted with glee and the 2 other sentinels one passed him a sword and the other gave him his fathers iron helm and a iron chestplate

What are your Character's ambitions?:To Fight For The ELven Nation

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Pickaxe

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Bows

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:He Is A Strong Wood Elf Who has the best shot in all of the elves

Open-Response-QuestionsEach and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?"Elendin HEY! dont pick on a little kid" "armed warrior 1 go home Elendin you think you are so tough since that orc in the city 9 years ago " armed warrior 2 " ya go home " "Elendin No Put the swords down and stop taking money from children" "armed soldier 1 grabs the kid " " armed soldier 2 pulls out the kids pockets and pulls out 2 peices of silver "Eledin grabs both of the warriors swords and tosses them behind him" "then knees both of the guards and they fall to their knees" "Eledin Are You Ok Kid" "small halfing Yes Thank You Mister" Runs Home" "Eledin yet again did something good

["color=#add8e6]Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?"Eledin nothing Just Passing Through" "merchant are you sure? i have all types of armour and weapons" "Eledin Ok Then I need a new sword might you have one?" "merchant Of Course many different types come in i will show you "Eledin ok "walks in"" "merchant grabs a great sword that is polished and has a blade sharper then the head sentinels" " Eledin May i Buy That One? "merchant Yes 150 minas sound good" "Eledin pulls from his pack 150 Minas and Says Yes "purchases the sword" "merchant thank you come again" "Eledin walks back to his house thinking This Is Gonna Be Great

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Eledin Sits There Thinking what if this is not abandoned and sits their for a while and decides i should not steal this might be someones "leaves"

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?"Eledin May I trade for some food" "Trader how much food?" "Eledin just 1 pund of bread" "Trader Ok 5 minas" "Eledin pulls the last 5 minas from his pocket and buys the bread" "merchant anything else?" "Eledin No Thank You" Walks Away"

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:"Eledin Says I Will Help" "town guard ok Eledin go grab a sword and some armour" "Eledin ok "Runs to his house grabs his sword that he bought from a merchant and his dads old iron helm and the chainmail chest that he got when he was a sentinel put it on and ran to the town guard" "Town Guard Come Eledin and everyone else that is willing to give assistance" "Eledin thinks in his mine pfff... Bandits No Problem

Anything else you would like to say?:I Hope you accept my application If you do not please message me the problems

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Please space out the questions, using other applications as an example. This was extremely difficult to read.

Incorrect Power-Emoting definition. You can find more information on the forums and wiki.

Please edit your bio so it is at least two paragraphs. Add some server lore, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

You must have a skin screenshot.

Your character cannot have the 'best shot in all of the elves'. You can edit this so that he is a proficient archer, but not the very best.

In ORQ #1 your character dispatches the warriors far too easily. Would they really just allow their swords to be tossed aside?

Expand on ORQs #3, 4 and 5.

There are spelling and grammar errors throughout the application that need to be fixed.

You can reapply 24 hours after this post. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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