My 2Nd App Reposted

[SUPERZWHIT 0]

Minecraft Account Name: SUPERZWHIT

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Paciffic U.S.A

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I love gaming. i live in a small town. I have a good imagnation

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Well it is summer so 10-40 hours a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Steping into your characters shoes and experianceing everything he does in the five senses.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: Not much but i get the consept

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Giving info about a player in game that that players character would not acctually knoe for example i go om tms and tell people where to go when really there character would not know.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Forceing a act upon a player who has not agreed.

What do you expect this server will be like?: A fun and roleplaying server with a nice and helpful comuntiy of players along with real time hardcore minecraft.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have not played officaly on a servers that are a big part of my minecraft experiance.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i have read the rules.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes i promise.

How did you hear about us?: I was looking for a good tms server and found you guys and found out you are nice people and have a good server that i would enjoy.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: Yep http://www.lordofthe...c/64361-my-app/

In-Character:

These questions are to be answered IN-CHARACTER

Character Name: Doka smith

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): no sub race.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Doka smith is a very hard working, noble, brave and kind young man with many years of mining experience and black smithing experience. Doka’s dad taught him at the age of 14 to mine and to work metal with no problem. Doka would work for hours in his shop just outside his mine crafting over 100 swords in total. The next year doka where killed by orcs in his home county ever since he has been trying to revenge his family by providing his army with the best resources possible to help fight the war against the orc’s in there home country. That whole year he never stopped working he would go on for hours and hours with no rest or eat or drink. A few months later a man came up to him holding a letter inviting him to join the army over seas. Doka thought about it they say many don’t make it across the forbidden sea, but he remembers his father and mother who died because of thow’s swine that killed his mother and father, so he returned to the man and told him he would join his cause.

A the age of 16 doka was recruited to travel across the forbidden sea into the enemy territory to provide first hand recourses. Along the journey there where rough waves standing 100 feet tall they cap sized the ship killing all of his crew members. Doka's life was spared that day except for the fact he had a horrible cut going all the way across his face from a piece of wood that fell from the sail post, he floated ashore on a beach that he has never seen before, he searched the beach well but only found the remains of the men that he sailed with along with left over pieces from the boat, so doka decided to live his life there and live of the land. Now at the age of 28 he stands 6 feet tall and hides his face from everyone, doka doesn’t talk to anyone he is forever alone until someone recruits him. He is the best miner some say in all the land but he really dies for a good war to be in and help the men he would fight with till the end of his days.

What are your Character's ambitions?: To help the army mine for there resoucrses and craft there armor.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Pickaxe.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Mineing and black smithing.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

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Other Information about your Character: Some call him the king of miners others call him nothing and anyone who doesnt belive him will see his skills first hand! Or they will die by it!

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Doka stops to tell the men to stop at once the men start to circle doka and chanthing "what are you going to do about it!" . Doka with his pickaxe on his back and fist ready to fight. With one swift swing on the pickaxe he swings it right into the side of one of the mens legs hit a blood vessel the other man strikes doka with his sword cuting doka's arm. Doka drops his picaxe unable to pick it back up all those years of runing up and down the mines made his legs stronger than he thought. Doka strikes the man in the stomach with his foot making the man fall back wards quickly doka with his other arm picks up the pick and kills the man that he stabed earlyier sending the final blow threw his head. The mans companion runs off scared for his life, Doka helped the man up who was geting robed and went on his way.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

"Hello sir i would like a new pickaxe if you have any avable", the shop keeper says "Well let me take a look" the shop keeper turns and doka reconizes a fine new diamond picaxe hanging on the wall, doka ask the shop keeper "How much for that one on the wall" the shop keeper turns and says "too much for you to handel young man, Doka feeling insalted says "All have you know i am the best in all the land for mineing i can afford that and if you think i cant i will kill you right where you stand!" the shop keeper looking at doka with fear in his eyes as doka slowy lowers his hood revealing his scare. The shop keeper quickly hands the diamond picaxe to him and says "Its on the house now please sir leave me be" Doka did not meen to scare the shop keeper but with out saying a word he walks away into the distance.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?

Doka walks up to the chest and sees whats inside but knows it it not in his nature to steal from people of anykind unless they have hurt him in anyway. He lloks around the house a bit more and finds no other sign of someone living there so in his good nature he simpley walks out of the house leaving it be and goes on his way.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Doka tierd and stumbleing into the camp trys to ask for some help but can not get the words to come out of his mouth he is to tierd and hungry to even speak doka falls to the ground waiting to die there but the kind people of the camp pick him up and lie him down in a bed feeding him and giving him water as he thanks them for thier kindness.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Doka runs up to the guards and offers his assictance in providing armor and weapons for the men to fight with, doka points them to his black smith shop and tells them to line up there and get there weapons ready for the attack as the men line up. When the men return blood soaked deep into there armor they walk up to doka and all thank him for his assistance.

Anything else you would like to say?: Yes thank you for reading this and i hope i get in i worked hard on this so i hope you guys like it

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

The application format has been adjusted slightly. Please add the questions asking for Out-Of-Character and In-Character definitions on your next attempt.

Add some server lore to your bio, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Expand on ORQs #4 and 5.

There are spelling and grammar issues throughout the application that need to be fixed.

You can reapply 24 hours after this post. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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