Grantman911's 2Cnd Application

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

grantman911

How old are you?:

15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

U.S. Est. -5.00

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, I have a good grip on the English language and have excellent grammar.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am 15 and like to play the Xbox360, Minecraft, Dayz, and Arma 2. I love to read and write.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Roughly 24-30 Hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying is a way of acting like a character that is in a game. You express what you want to do with the give obstacles and challenges.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

Yes, I've played D and D very much and have Rolplayed on some Dayz servers.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-Gaming is an act of out-of-game knowledge being brought in to the given scenario by your player. For example: Your walking through a forest and you don't have a map. So you get a map in real life,Internet, Book, ect. and use that to find your way around.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Power-Emoting is the act of a player making themselves somewhat invincible. Example: * The cold steel of the blade bangs against the holder as I unsheathe it. *Pulling out Dagger hastily, "My gang wants your money." *Taking a step back, "Your going to have to take it from me!" *Swings the sword and kills a bandit when he comes in for a lunge. *Does a back flip and kills the second bandit with 1 blow to the face. Here the player would have to have a very high acrobatics skill or he couldn't have done a back flip and killed with such presicion.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

A very fun and interesting roleplaying server. I have watched Candle on Youtube play this and it looks amazing+trailer of this.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I did play on Legendary Island of the Lost Treasures. I left them because they did not have any roleplay elements.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, I have looked over the rules several times and have read some of the lore.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes, I granman911, do promise to abide to any rule set by the Server, Forums, and TeamSpeak.

How did you hear about us?:From Candle on Youtube and some friends saying that they have been denied.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/64212-grantman911s-1rst-app-after-3-months/page__p__501012__hl__grantman911__fromsearch__1

In-Character:

Character Name:

Lokir

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

N/A

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Lokir is a 20 Year old, male Human who has white skin, green eyes and light brown hair. He grew up in Ager, being a peasant who farmed wheat with his mom and dad when he turned six. Four years later, he found his true potential, this was making weapons for the town guard. He would take sticks and turn them into swords. His parents still made him farm, but they let him make the tools because it brought in extra Minas for the family.

At the age of 12 Lokir was hired as an apprentice for a Dwarf blacksmith named Monfay in Arethor. The blacksmith gave him 5 Minas per day for helping him with his daily procedures, as well as a place to stay. Even though he didn't have to, Lokir bought supplies for the blacksmith.

One day, when Lokir was just turning 16, a man in a set of Chain mail armor approached the forge and yelled out in a booming voice is this the Residence of Monfay Locarchi?!?"

Monfay eyed the man and said,"What do you want, GUARD!"

"I am here for you Monfay, for buying illegal poisons, now, come with us or face justice from the blade!" Monfay grabbed a Diamond sword from his collection on the wall and charged with it over his head and slashed down for a blow. The guard deflected it with his Iron sword and struck Monfay across the rib, sending blood all over the leather rugs on the floor. Lokir wanted to turn his head but he couldn't look away from the guard and Monfay, and then it felt like time froze. The sword coming down on the wounded blacksmith.

Lokir slumped down on the floor, tears poured out of his eyes as the guard dragged the limp body of Monfay out the door of the forge. From inside, Lokir heard a couple of gasps from the people outside. Within a few days Lokir was running the forge just as Monfay had been. He got all sorts of customers.

Six months after Lokir had turned 20, a city steward came in the forge with a paper. He said,"Mr. Lokir, I am sorry to inform you, but we have found Monfay's son, he is on his way from Alras now. We will give you 2 hours to gather your stuff and leave." Depressed, Lokir walked out with nothing at all. A new journey was ahead of him, one that would lead him to anything imaginable.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

Crafting and Smithing

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

If a crafting bench or furnace does not count, it would have to be an ax.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Crafting

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

http://www.minecraft...22097/undergor/

Other Information about your Character:

Lokir does not like combat, but will fight if it is to protect himself.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?I stay in the bushes and watch as the two men keep threatening to hurt the small halfling if he doesn't give them the money they want from him. I look at my feet, trying to plan a way to help the poor thing. I dig in the gravel close by and find a piece of flint. I raise my arm up and throw sending the piece of flint at one of the two warriors. It strikes him in the leg, making him bleed through a gash in the site of impact. I rush in with my ax and hit the downed warrior in the chest, killing him. The other warrior hit me in the arm, grabs the money, and runs away like a coward. I help the halfling to his feet and he says,"Thank you." He then pulls an herb out of his pack and says,"Take this, it will take the pain away."

I reply,"Thankyou." We both when walk away in different directions, I think about the man I just killed, I could not be true to myself if I didn't bury him. I go back and find the man still lying in the same spot, I dig a grave and put the body in say a prayer, and then walk away.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?I reply,"I am looking for and ingots of any sort, do you have those?"

He replies,"I don't have ingots, but I have some iron ore. 10 iron ore for 40 minas with a half price furnace."

"Deal,"I reply. I hand him the money and walk out to set up my furnace.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

I take the iron from the chest and make a iron sword. Out generosity for the next person that comes, I put the iron sword in to the chest but take out the gold. I walk away with my new gold sword. This just might save me in the future.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

"Please help me I'm lost and starving! could you pleas spare a piece of bread for me? I fall to my knees and put fold my hand and put them to my head.

I hear a lady yell,"Lauren! Get this man some bread and make room in the pig sty for him!"

"Yes Moma!" I hear the girl I assume is Lauren yell back. The kind people give me the bread and let me sleep in the pig sty, it was better than sleeping out in the rain. It had been the first time since I was lost that I had a roof over my head.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

I gather my materials and make some armor, weapons, and give it all to them. The leader of the party rewards me with 60 minas, and gives me a pen and a piece paper that reads: We could have a business with you if make supplies for us. Our blacksmith was killed and we need I new one. Do you accept Yes or No

I circle the word yes and hand the paper to him. After the attack on the bandit camp I was still working for the town guard, I slipped up on a sword, I made it dull. The sword slipped off of a training dummy and cut clean through the man's leather pants.

Anything else you would like to say?:

Lokir is mentally scarred from Monfay's death and will act strangely towards Dwarf blacksmiths

[Dante 206]

Denied.

I'd first like to suggest that you change your formatting. Adding paragraphs, coloring, and affects such as bold and underlines will help us a lot.

I can't follow your skin link. Follow a guide to accordingly provide a picture of your skin.

Your other aspects look alright from what I see, though my judgement is clouded by your formatting. Please fix it and you should be alright from what I see.

Please wait 24 hours before re applying.

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