Neemiescott's Application Submission

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Out-Of-CharacterNeemie

Minecraft Account Name:neemiescott

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:+10 hours, Brisbane,Australia

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:[/b Yes, I have a good grasp on the English language and grammar

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a high school student who lives in Brisbane and loves gaming, especially RPG's. I have a gaming PC that I spend my time on when not doing assignments or playing hockey. I try to spend atleast an hour a day on my computer so that i do not miss anything. I have good grades at school especially in English and Maths and always hand in assignments on time so that i can get on my PC. I am a generally modest, compassionate person who does not boast very much (except for celebrating victory) and does not swear.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I would be able to spend 6-8 hours a week, depending on assignments, and other commitments possibly more or less.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:"Role Playing" in my opinion is to act as someone, usually fantasy and adopt their role and story line as your own.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I have been playing RPG's for as long as I can remember, I have played a variety of MMORPG's and other minecraft RPG servers that have not given me the feel for a good RPG that i want. I have also played the latest 3 elderscrolls games, and a variety of other RPG's including Lord of the Rings online, World of Warcraft, Star Wars the Old Republic and Runescape.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta Gaming is reading about a quest or boss, before you fight him/her to give you an unfair advantage

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:Power emoting is giving an unfair advantage towards others in typed actions. Such as "Bentarob stole Neemiescott's wallet" a more fair way is to say, "Bentarob attempted to thieve Neemiescott's wallet" give just as equal terms to both people involved.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:Out of is when you are acting as a real person, not your in game character e.g. Dwarf/Elf/Orc.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:In Character is when you are acting as your online person, not your real person. e.g. Dwarf/Elf/Orc.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect the server to a fun server for me and my friends (some of whom are already accepted) that we can level up and play together on, with quests and allowing us to pretend to be other people, not ourselves.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I played on the Yogscast RPG Server, which got closed down. Many of my own personally hosted servers, Imdeity (left because of reset and did not want to start again), EnderBros, (left because my friend who owns it removed world guard permanently), UberMinecraft (Did not like the community) and several others.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have read, I understand, and agree to follow the rules of this server.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:I promise to abide by all of the rules on this server, Including the Forum, Server, and Teamspeak.

How did you hear about us?:Several friends of mine, who have been accepted, were having an online party, which I attended, and watching them liked what I saw.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:I have not made an application before.

In-Character:Neemiescott

Character Name:Neemie

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

I do not actually know, for reasons you will read about in the next answer.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

I am an Elf, without a home and was kidnapped as a child by the Orcs, they raised me to be like them until I learnt of what they did to me so I ran away, now I seek to return to my people and family.

I am tall in appearance with long blonde hair with a braid down the left side of my face, my character loves to wear green colored robes and boots.

What are your Character's ambitions?:My characters ambitions is to become the greatest archer in all of Aegis, as well as reunite him self with the Elven people and find his parents.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

My Characters favourite tool is naturally a bow and arrows, but my character also enjoys using a sword for close combat.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Archery, Stealth and Parkour/Acrobatics.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):I am still adjusting this skin a bit, not quite happy with the cloak. But here is what it looks life at the moment. I have also attached it to this post just in case their was a problem. (first time using imgur)

Other Information about your Character:That he is a humble, modest Elf who is highly trained in Archery and Stealth, originally a hitman for the Orcs.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? My character, feeling sorry for the halfling attempts to help him, by talking to the warriors, using a non-violent approach he tries to resolve the situation.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?Just walking through thank you, But i might browse your wares some other time when i have the money to.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:My character who tries to be just leaves the hut, knowing the he could be stealing form an elderly person and continues on his journey.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?I engage in conversation and take any aid they offer, pay them some gold and ask for directions before continuing on my journey.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:My character who wants vengeance on the orcs agrees to follow them and aid them in their fight, but is modest in battle and prefers to help the wounded or use his bow to avoid contact with them, in case one of them recognize him.

Anything else you would like to say?:I have been a server owner several times and understand the importance of rules, and how stressful it is when people don't follow them. I have never been banned or jailed on a server. I do not like swearing at all so I wont use that language. My experience with RPG servers before will make me a valuable asset to your community.

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied [Correct the X'ed Areas]:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [x]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [x]

Insufficient Knowledge on the World [x]

Open Ended Questions Need Refining [ ]

Illegal Character Abilities [ ]

Unrealistic Events [ ]

-Fabricated Large-Scale Events [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Contradicting Statements [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Villain Application Needed [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Power-emoting [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Metagaming [x]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Incorrect Formatting [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unlore-ful Skin [ ]

Other Comments: Please PM for information about why your application was denied.

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