[Denied]Dwarf App Submission Number 4. :(

[PoppyToppy 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

PoppyToppy

How old are you?:

15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

London, England

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Clumsy, Kind, Brave, and Boastful. Won't give up, but stumbles into dangerous situations easily.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

2 1/2 hours a day every week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

It means to play as a made up character, sometimes someone has one single character, while some are hardcore and have several characters. Most roleplays are fantasy genre, but some are sci-fi and such. The 2nd biggest RPG genre is Modern.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

2-3 years, 2 on Roblox, 1 on Wizard101. 1 month on Conquestia Online (Minecraft server)

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-gaming is using OOC info in IC. Sometimes using real life info to affect one's IG (In game) decision. Examples are: L-OOC Player 1: Modern History of Aegis includes <Insert info here>. Say that info to my character IC. L-OOC Player 2: Ok.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Power-emoting is saying "Player 1 kills Player 2" or "Player 1 pushes Player 2 off the edge", as if forcing them to die without their consent. More examples of Power-Emoting or God-Emoting is "Player 1 dodges Player 2" Every single time Player 2 throws a roleplay punch, or "Player 1 kicks Player 2 to Pluto no dodge no miss no ANYTHING". Advanced roleplayers call it "Godmodding".

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:

OoC is talking out of roleplay, sometimes called OoR. It's the oppisite of IC, really, but If you were talking to a wandering soul (WS) you would want to use this chat to show the WS the ropes of the server. OoC chat is not good for roleplaying. OoC can be used for Non-Roleplay arguments, Non-Roleplay arguments, and for arguing with trolls.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:

In Character is the oppisite of Out of Character, really, but you roleplay instead of just talking about the roleplay. If you're talking to a wandering soul (WS) You might want to use OOC instead. IC isn't really well for OOC chat. IC can be used for fun, drama, and real roleplaying.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

Epically Awesome! I will never leave!!!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Conquestia (Boring and not roleplaying) Chosencraft (Boring) Creative MC factions (Shut down) Beasts MC (Found this server)

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I have.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes.

How did you hear about us?:

Wikianswers.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

Yes. Name: [Dwarf App] App Sub --Denied apps--

In-Character:

Character Name:

Silverdew

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Mountain Dwarf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Silverdew left his parents at 5 years old to start his adventures early, now at age 34, he appears as a normal Mountain Dwarf, but with unnaturally buff forearms and shoulders, with beefy hands, which are naturally strong. He thinks the Creator gave him his meaty hands to fit with his love for axes. His parents are Mountaindew and Kinderdew. His personality is boastful but kind. Brave but clumsy. He tends to trip into traps, or fall into dangerous predicaments without thinking the idea of going into the area completely through. He has one special ability (See Other Info about your character)

He is incredibly interested in the modern history of Aegis and Asulon. He reads them almost all day, everyday if he's bored. He can recite the first paragraph in the Modern History of Aegis and Asulon very easily, although he is quite creeped out by the blood on the cover of the Modern History of Aegis from the "vial of it's victims". He can say the title in 2 languages, Orc and English. If he's very involved in a chapter, he reads all day and all night. He is happy that some of his dwarven ancestors, although not in relation to him, discovered a land called Karik.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

To read all of the Modern History of Aegis and Asulon

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Diamond axe (For chopping down trees)

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Combat

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

http://topminecrafts...yham61dwarf.png

Other Information about your Character:

Has a strong Scottish accent.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

He would walk in front of the halfling, pushing him/her aside, and cup his hands around his mouth. He would then yell "GUUUUUUUUUAAAAAAARDDDDDDDDDDS!!!! ESCORT THESE WARRIORS, THEY'RE HARRASSING THIS POOR 'LIL HALFLING!! STEALIN' MINAS, I BELIEVE!!" Chasing the warriors into a sand trap, he would let the guards handle the rest of the situation. He would find the money on the ground, and give the money to the halfling.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

"I'm just browsing for now." He would respond, while browsing through the clothes. His favorite type of clothes are stylish leather clothes. He would overpay with tip, telling the cashier to keep the change. He would proceed to perhaps make small talk and and comment on some clothes.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

He'd sit there for a two-three days and see if anyone claims it. If not, he'd bring the iron ingots to a village blacksmith and give the sword to an unarmed guard. He wouldn't accept any pay, he works for that. He would chop down 2 trees, make a sign, and write: |FREE HUT, IF WANTED SEND BIRD MESSAGE TO SILVERDEW.|

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

He would respond with small talk, then he would proceed to look through the food, realizing he doesn't have a furnace, gets a pickaxe and some raw pork and raw beef. He would ask for the trading costs to trade for the food and pickaxe. He would overpay with tip, shoving away the change, making the trader keep it. "Have a nice day, sir." He would smile, starting to mine.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Join the group, walk out of town, and take out some of the bandits with his axe, chopping down a tree so it lands on one of the bandits, then start combat with the leader, swinging and hacking and chopping, then giving the rewards to a poor village.

Anything else you would like to say?:

I really really hope I get accepted this time!!!

[nppeck 601]

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied [Correct the X'ed Areas]:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [x]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on the World [x]

Open Ended Questions Need Refining [x]

Illegal Character Abilities [ ]

Unrealistic Events [ ]

-Fabricated Large-Scale Events [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Contradicting Statements [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Villain Application Needed [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Power-emoting [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Metagaming [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Incorrect Formatting [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unlore-ful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:Please try and add more detail to your biography and add more server lore to it. I really don't get a good feel for your character by this biography. With your ORQ's try and flesh them out a bit more and make them more realistic.

[nppeck 601]

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