[Denied]My 3Rd Application

[Mattavius 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Mattavius96

How old are you?:

15 years old, turning 16in September

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

-5:00 Eastern US, Canada time Residence: USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

English is my main language, I do have a few grammar issues but sometimes I forget to overlook and correct myself.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am very friendly and quiet, mostly in a large group. I am athletic and plays varsity football (which would explain the lack of activity on certain days). Love to role play with people in role play servers if given the chance.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I believe I could squeeze in a few hours a day usually.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Role playing in my own definition is something that deals with a character you're pretending to be as. You emote, or take action, in response or as a walk-up to meet new people or meet up with both IC and OOC friends. Anything that is used against your character, you shouldn't get emotionally into the rp, if anything that is against you OOCly, you can't put your emotions into the character's feelings.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I have roleplayed for almost 2 years. First on World of Warcraft, in fact only on WoW.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

An interaction between characters when one character knows something when they're not suppose to know in characterly.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Power-emoting is an interaction where an action is mostly plain and simple, most common in role play fights, instead of giving the other characters multiple choices. Ex. "player 1 hits player 2."

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:

Something that you refer to as something that isn't related to the character you play as, it is used to be out of line, text, and to get to know people themselves or to socialize, with out involving the role play.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:

In Caracter is something that involves a character you play as, it is their story, not yours, their actions, not yours.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect the server to be fun, adventurous and social.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I used to and still play on Medieval Lords, but it has been down almost all day and I figured I should find another server that's fun.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I have and will.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes.

How did you hear about us?:

Looked up some servers on a server site and found this server

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

[url="http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/65156-mattavius-application/

In-Character:

Character Name:

Mattavius A'laeor

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

High Elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Mattavius A'laeor looks to be a young man in his mid human 20's, but in reality he is in late 30's (human years). Most of the time he prefers to be call by his last name. None has ever seen his face as it is hidden in a white hood. The armor he usually wear is golden, with a wavy plain light grey tabard on it. His armor is segmented in many places, like the fingers, lower torso, elbows, gauntlets, and knees, and chain mail under the golden plated armor. His Armor was made from the best smithies in the Elven cities. He usually carries a golden broadsword, though to man, it would be a heavy two handed weapon, but to A'laeor, it is a simple one hand sword.

He has a very suspicious glowing light blue at the back of his golden armor, He doesn't seem to know what it is, but he believes it came with armor. Not much is known about the light blue light on his back. Aside from the red eyes, the blue light on his back is dim and cancels out the opinion to those that come across his gaze.

A'laeor was born and grew up in the Nawari Camp, his parents wandered from camp to camp, then to the cities of the other race, including the Elven cities. When Mattavius and his family wandered in to a camp, a bandit raid took place when he was of the age of 14 (human years), both of his parent hid him away. As he watched in horror as his parents were slaughtered right in front of him. From that moment on he swore that he wold protect people, innocent, camps, villages, cities, from corrupted, greedy, and murderous people. When he went into training for swordsmanship, he surpassed all expectations of his master, though he had some flaws, his master had taught him where his flaws in swordsmanship didn't show as much. His master had also taught him in archery, where he had no possibility of missing a shot. Though His archery is slowly fading, he sometimes get back to it every so often.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

To protect those who are innocent.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Golden sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Swordsmanship

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

*A'laeor approaches the two men, glaring. He demands the warriors to stop harassing the halfing, with his blade at his side, sheathed with his hand on the hilt, ready for the warriors to refuse so he could subdue or make them flee.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

*A'laeor peers at the man and bow his head, replying politly. "I'm good for now, just browsing your goods." He looks back down at the clothing and tilts his head before he left and bows his head and says. "Good luck on your sales, friend."

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

*A'laeor peers at the items and stares at the for a brief moment. He gently sets them back down into the chest and closes it. He made sure that the sword and bars were in the place they were originally in. He leaves the house after he sought shelter for the night, leaving things in their places that they were in.*

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

*Slowly approaches the camp, and asks politely in common,"May I have some food?" After they gave him food, he had gave them the proper amount of gold coin to pay off the food that was given to him.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

*A'laeor walks outside of the town, attempt to eliminate the bandits if they didn't leave before then. When each of the bandits strike, he raises his golden blade to block and swings it down upon one bandit, attempting to split him apart with the swing down. He turns and swings the blade at another with the blunt sides to knock the other off balanced or knock him out to be subdued. He walks back into the town and asks for the reward and takes a small portion before giving it to a group of children he saw along the way.*

Anything else you would like to say?:

Just looking forward into role playing once again but in a different game.

[nppeck 601]

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied [Correct the X'ed Areas]:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on the World [ ]

Open Ended Questions Need Refining [x]

Illegal Character Abilities [ ]

Unrealistic Events [ ]

-Fabricated Large-Scale Events [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Contradicting Statements [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Villain Application Needed [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Power-emoting [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Metagaming [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Incorrect Formatting [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unlore-ful Skin [ ]

Other Comments: Better than last time, but you cannot just have a single or two sentence as the answer to your ORQ.Make them a bit more detailed and you will surely be accepted.

[nppeck 601]

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